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RECAP

When the song ended on that time Geet was inside Maan's embrace & he was hugging geet with immense love & the background's volume was turned once again on as the audience & judges applauded & Geet came from trance & was shocked to see herself inside Maan's embrace.Geet tired to struggle from his embrace when Maan opened his eyes to see her almond eyes which made him shocked.Maan saw the indifference which he had in the last week's performance inside Geet's almond eyes.Geet knew what he was searching in her eyes & she hid it immediately while Maan sighed to himself thinking that she was in the song & it was only the expressions of the song.Maan was disappointed which was not unnoticed by Geet who felt bad & restless from inside.

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PART 04

It was the hard work of both Maaneet which awarded them once again full 30.It encouraged Geet to make Maan teach so many dance forms & next theme was to surprise the judges with their own dance form.For that Geet chose Zouk to teach to Maan.But Geet dint knew that what would be her state after this dance form.Geet started teaching this dance form.But Maan was totally confused seeing Geet giving mixed signals.It was so difficult to Geet to control on her seeing the most handsome man giving indications of love.She needed break from all these so she went to office after Maan's first class of Zouk dance form which was a rather the draining emotions of Maan.She was scared by his emotions which so positive & provoking that she would drown in those steely emotions.Eyes was the first expressive organs from Maan when she came closer to him during the lesson of dance steps.It always showed the dark desires which would struggle to be unleashed.Every minute of their lesson Maan enjoyed himself seeing Geet's mixed signals & emotions.

























Geet entered her office & entered inside Savitri Devi's cabin without knocking.(U guys are thinking abt that how Geet is so formal with Savitri Devi?I'll come to that in next part)Savitri Devi saw Geet distracted & said in astonishment,"Geet u here!"Geet saw her & instantly her eyes welled up & tears poured down.Savitri Devi was alarmed & widened her arms when Geet ran inside & Savitri Devi cocooned her to a soothing embrace.Geet started crying while Savitri Devi rubbed her back.Savitri Devi asked worriedly,"What happened child,why r u crying?"Geet hiccupped & Savitri Devi made her sit on the couch & sat beside her.Savitri Devi wiped her tears & asked softly,"What happened tell me?"Geet said,"That Maan'!"Savitri Devi got worried & asked,"Who?Anyone troubling u baby girl?"Geet said immediately,"No!Er'.er'.that Maan!"

















Savitri Devi's expression changed immediately hearing the name as it had changed from concern to disgust,"Hold on'that superstar Maan Singh Khurana?"Geet was amazed but nodded while Savitri asked angrily,"What he did to u?Did he misbehave with u?Tell me Geet am gonna make him suffer!"Geet immediately said stopping her,"No!He dint do anything with me.In fact he's a gentleman Nani!"Savitri smiled hearing the word Nani from Geet.Savitri slowly tightened her embrace around Geet & asked softly,"Then what's the problem baby girl?"Geet stuttered & whispered softly,"I think he loves me!"For a second Savitri's mind stopped working & come to present world & was abt to shout that dont take his proposition or accept his love but on the second thought she decided to make him to come home once again.Maan Singh Khurana had left the home to pursue his dream having row with Nani & today she had very good oppurtunity to make him come home back.She was missing her grandson badly.When he left his house on that time she had said one sentence that he will come back for money luxury & name.But Maan dint came back to her instead he had gained the name,luxury & money on his hard work.
















Savitri Devi asked,"So what is your opinion about him?"Geet saw downwards & said guiltily,"I dont think am the perfect match to him!"Savitri asked gently,"And y u think like that?"Geet said,"Nani'he's handsome & a gentlman'but still it would be not god..our match will be like Guliver & Liliput.Nani'am only simple choreographer'but him..he's superstar'i cant be with him always..i'll be in trouble Nani..!"Savitri was shocked hearing her words & was impressed & said gently,"Geet it can happen that u r also in love with him,but u r not accepting it!"Geet was shocked & said immediately No nani..am not..am only a good friend!"Savitri said gently,"Geet..u r trying to suppress your instincts baby girl'& becoz of that only u r not seeing the truth!"Savitri knew that Geet is stubborn when Geet said,"No Nani..am only like him as friend not anymore like that..am worried am gonna break his heart!I dont love him Nani!"Savitri was disappointed but Geet's eyes always told everything to her though her mind tried to shut it to others.Savitri said,"Ok then..close u eyes!"


















Geet gave a questioning look but closed her eyes & Savitri said,"Free your mind from all the worries baby girl!"Geet freed her mind & Savitri said,"Now try to remember your imaginary lover for whom u wanted to be always with him..love him unconditionally & cherish him life long!Can u see anyone?"Geet liked this game & she tried to string her thoughts & in her mind vision a muscular man came to vision.Geet's smile widened & that muscular man was shirtless showing his rock chest & 6 packs abs with strong biceps.Geet's mouth turned O seeing his mins's thoughts & immediately Savitri smiled seeing her expression though she closed her eyes.Geet slowly saw him intently when she saw the denim jeans which he wore was loosened & his erection pts buttons were open.Geet wacked her mind giving that naughty vision but she was drooling over his chiseled body.Then his body started to focus more when she tried to see his face which was still in dark.She tried to see his face which was coming to the correct vision.Geet saw M shaped lips'then long white nose & wide eyes which were dancing in its sockets with joy & when his face came clearer from the dark on that time she gasped & immediately opened her eyes with shock.















Savitri asked seeing her expression,"Whom u saw?"Geet was about to say it when Savitri was called for a meeting by the speaker & she stood & said in hurry,"Am in hurry baby girl!Am gonna talk to u after ur next performance i need to go to London..take care of urself & Rano too baby girl!"Savitri kissed her forehead & ran like a storm leaving shocked Geet.Geet had seen Maan in her mind vision which was the imagination of her Mr.Perfect!Geet was shocked to see Maan in her mind vision & said to herself,"I think he's my friend na that's why he had come to me!He cant be my partner..how can i his status is so big & mine..am a middle class family girl.he wont like me..i think its only attraction..yeah that's the fact'Geet take off all this from ur minds & concentrate on Maan's dancing..yeah we want another 30 too..we cant back off!But y i feel secure whenever his arms wraps around my waist'i feel so secure & it provokes my dark desires!Stop it Geet'dont think abt that!"
















Geet came to the DWM studio & ran into their where she & Maan always practised dance steps.When she entered on that time some girl was hugging Maan tightly.Seeing that her smile faded & jealousy ignited inside her libido & took toll to breathe.Geet saw the woman who was beautiful & turned towards the door where Maan was smiling at Geet.Maan said,"Sam..this is my choreographer Geet in this competition.Geet..this is Sameera my former choreographer & a very good friend! Geet's senses calmed hearing the friend from maan but still she was shaking with jealousy seeing Sam keeping her hand on his shoulder.Geet saw that & Maan felt uncomfortable seeing the fire inside Geet's almond eyes.It was something new he had seen though he thought as not real.Geet tried to control herself & came forward,"Hello!"Geet shook Sam's hands powerfully that she screamed in painGeet was alarmed & left her hand & said,"Am sorry..i have a very firm grip!"Sam said rubbing her right palm resisting pain,"Dont bother!"
















Geet was shocked with her behaviour as last time she had firmly gripped her former boss's hands as he was giving wrong indications to warn him to be far away from her.But today the anger which she felt when she was angry seeing a girl holding Maan's waist in friendly manner made her so petrified.Geet hid her emotions & said,"Let's start our practise Maan!"Maan nodded & started to show the steps which they had practised yesterday.Now Geet needed to teach further steps & somewhere her heart anticipated to be inside his arms.During practise Sam tried to distract him giving odd postures as he frowned & said,"Geet let's practise tomorrow!"Geet was shocked & asked,"What happened Maan?"It was more dominance as she had seen Sam distracting him.Maan dint say any word as for the first time Maan felt Geet's dominance in the course of time.He assessed her with his sharp eyes while she was trying to hide her emotions when he declared,"I need to learn this in fast pace!"















Geet said angrily,"U cant learn it in fast pace!U need concentration to catch the steps & i dont think u r concentrating today anymore'what is it Maan?Are u distracted becoz of Sam?"Maan was amazed & meekly said,"Yeah!"Geet went & said straightaway,"Sam u will meet Maan in 2 hours..till then u can take rest in the lobby of this studio where u will be served food & tea too!Please Sam..dont distract my student!"Sam noticed her dominant words & argued,"I wasnt distracting him Geet..!"Geet said cutting off her words,"It doesnt matter that u were distracting or not the fact is that Maan has only one week to practise & he wont be ready till i give green signal'we're in the series of perfect 30 & i dont want u to jeopardize my student making him disappointed seeing the less marks.Try to understand Sam!"Sam was about to shout on Geet but Geet dragged her towards the lobby & immediately shut to door of the studio.
















Geet turned to see Maan who was assessing her curiously.Geet asked,"Shall we start Maan?"Maan dint answer but asked abruptly,"U dint like Sam's presence here..why is it Geet?"Geet looked at his face & was caught off guard as she knew she's showing her jealousy emotion.Maan's sculpted lips widened slowly when Geet said controlling herself,"I saw that Sam was distracting u & i cant tolerate interruptions when am teaching the dance steps!"For which Maan's smile more widened & he showed his 32 teeth white & impressive.Geet drooled over his killer smile but controlled herself & said bossily,"Shall we start?"Maan hid his killer smile & nodded vigorously.Maan was happy seeing Geet jealous of Sam & she kicked out of the room saying that she's distracting him & he was grateful to that as he felt awkwas to be comfortable with Geet while practising.




















After the practise & both Maaneet were all set to perform the song on that time Sam was seething with anger.Becoz Geet was a very good teacher & choreographer.Sam was jealous about her becoz she chooses the steps uniquely & try to make Maan work hard in that.She understands the song & understands which steps to put & Sam was having professional jealousy with her.Sam wanted to make Maan to come back to her..to help & she wanted to hurt Geet so that her plan will be success.She hatched a plan while both Maaneet's closeness started more & they performed to the song where Geet will be like a puppet & Maan is gonna guide her.





Listen to the creepy music which is a starting before the song Awarapan




[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=z_8FMpca09E[/YOUTUBE]




Song Toh Phir Aavo from Awarapan


GC & Shampa performance



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=smgMN31oqO4[/YOUTUBE]



Please see this video from 0:56 to 3:40 & ignore Shampa & imagine Geet in her place.

The programme started & Maaneet's fellow contestants showed their perforomance.Maaneet's dance was at last & when they came to stage when anchor announced on that time once again the world turned mute & only both were present.Maan stood behind the stage & Geet walked past him wrapping her arms around her to show that she's resisting cold.She saw Maan walking towards her & he was looking handsome with slightly white make up & blood red pink lips.He was looking more handsome & she was mesmerised by his eyes but still went forward but she was stopped halfway when the creepy music started above!

To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

To phir aaooo

Mujhko rulaawo





Maan flashed his fingers doing the magic & Geet stood just like a doll.Then Maan slowly made her to come towards him.Geet was just like the puppet & immediately she came towards him.Maan twisted his hands over Geet's face & did some magic & hypnotised her & she became just like the puppet once again & Maan started to handle her.She bent down while Geet came towards him & in the swift moment she was inside his arms.Maan rocked Geet backwards & forwards while Geet stood like a rag doll which had the strings of her in Maan's hand.Maan twirled her one round & left her where geet rounded haphazardly & held her head trying to focus.But Maan once again did some magic & she came towards him from backwards.



Dil badal baneee
Aankhen bhene lagee



Maan twirled her & immediately held her face from his palm.He bent with her forwards while she bent backwards automatically & Geet was seeing Maan's eyes only.Maan came near her when she saw his eyes.On that time Geet felt mesmerised drowning in those steely depths.It always screamed that i love u.Maan came near her snaked his arms around her waist & she felt goosebumps apart from the dance.Geet cant able to concentrate but still she suppressed her emotions.On that time Maan twirled & gave another round & rounded her about 3 rounds & he himself turned while Geet stood just like a doll.








Aaheein aise uthe
Jaise aandhi chalee



Maan hugged Geet while she pointed towards the direction as if she have to go towards the way but can as she's hypnotised.When Maan had hugged her on that time he kept his fingers on her bare back & moved it making her shiver down spine & he gave an impressive smile.Then twirled her once again numerous rounds so that she feels dizzy but luckily she dint as the practise makes man perfect.Then Maan held her both hands & walked towards her where his left hands went towards her waist & she bent backwards.Maan pulled her towards him while in that process her lips brushed to his shoulder blades.Maan softly groaned & lifted her on his shoulder when her back was pinned to his shoulder.Maan once again gave an impressive smile while turned around & immediately let her down but she was just like a doll who is stretching just like her master says.



To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw

aa bhi jaao 6

ho hoho



Maan turned her neck & immediately twirled once again & lifted her & pinned to his left shoulder.Geet was just doing what he was doing following him while Maan gave his famous impressive smile once again.Then he rounded her left thigh around him & dragged her while Geet felt shiver down her spine feeling his fingers on her thighs.







Gum leja tere
Jo bhi tune diye



Maan twirled her & she did split when he bent down & Maan held her neck once again & turned it.Then held both the hands of her & pulled her towards his hard frame & felt her soft curves rub against his hard frame.Maan groaned softly & immediately held her & he turned her just like the helicopter way.On that time he try to suck the blood but her hands falls on his head & he immediately support her pinning to his hard frame.




Ya phir mujhko batao
inko kaise sahee

To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw

aa bhi jaao 6






Maan turned her & immediately pulled her towards him & once again started turning her confusing her.Then making her feel dizzy Maan once again twirled her more giving impressive smile which depicted that she's in his control.Maan turned her between his arms & another side so that she feels more dizzy & confused as he had seen trying to focus.On that time Geet let her body so loose & Maan turned her body & lifted her.




abb to is manjar se
mujhko chale jana hai

Jin raaahon pe mera yaar hai
Un raahon ko mujhse pana hai
To phir aaooo
Mujhko satao

To phir aaooo
Mujhko rulaaw

aa bhi jaao 6










Then Maan once again twirled her & she did split & he lifted her from her left thigh & Geet spread her hands loose just like she needs to support.On that time Maan kept her foot on the ground & she shook wobbly wobbly & held her head when Maan draped himself with red coat & came towards her & closed Geet's face & held her tightly sucking the blood with his vampire teeth & left her.When he was sucking he purposefully bit Geet's neck sharply & Geet shuddered feeling that her stomach is tightening.On that time in background the there was the sound of werewolf & Maan turned with ferocious expression with mixed hunger which was satisfied by Geet's blood & Geet fell on the floor.Maan went to his coffin & opened the lid & slept inside it closing the lid.
















The sounds turned on around them & everyone applauded seeing their performance.Judges gave full on 30 marks for that too for which Maan was so happy.Maan was more happy seeing Geet had become just like the puppet where he was the master of her.But it was his wild thoughts which made him to manhandle her but still it got 30 performance.Everything was so good & time was running to its own accord & that time was Sameera who was seeing Geet out of jealousy.She wanted to hurt her as she had misbehaved with her throwing from the room.








Precap-Teaser

Sameera said angrily,"How dare u throw me from that room?Am Maan's best friend & i have every right to be with him!"Geet said coolly,"U were distracting him that's why i threw u from the room.Sameera said angrily,"I thought i will be available here as Maan can be handled by me only.He has the habit of shouting & showering anger on others if the dance performance becomes lousy.But u..u handled him very well..how..how did u do it?"I dont even know that this dance form exists but u made judges impressed & ur dance steps'how do u know all this when am senior to u & dont know anything abt this dance form.How?On that time the chandelier which was dangling above Geet's head started to shake.Sameera instructed someone who was pulling that chandelier & it loosened & fell due to loose fittings'''..






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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊\
geet confused about hr feelings😕

dadi guide geet😃

geet jealous😆

geet throw sam out👏

maan happy wth geet jealousy😛

p recap is scary
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
loved it..
sameera😡
Hope maan will save geet..
Will b waiting for next part😊
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
on seeing geet in this dance performance was most fabulous
geet realized her dream man to be maan
sam is such a B******
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet j seeing sam
she threw her out
n sam is angry on her
n making revenge
loved the dance
dadi made geet know her hidden feelings..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is confused for own feelngs.
Acha kiya geet ne sam ko uthake bahar fak diya.
Nyc update
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh man hope nothing happens to Geet...and i want Geet to give it more harshly to Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part
Geet confused of her feelings...confessed with nani...i think she doesn't know she is maan's dadi
Geet j about sam...she sent her out
Sam planning against geet...hope nothing will happen to her
Really geet was maan's puppet in the performance
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi js saw u updated nw! Amazing update! Dadi advises Geet! Geet throws Sam out! Sam angry! Maan happy seeing Geet jealous! Awesum song! terrific dance! Precap is scary! Superbly written! update soon! thanks 4 accepting my request dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 part.
The Geet dadima portion was so cute yet mature.Loved it.
The most fabulous portion was Geet throwing Sam out of rehearsal hall.Awesome.

Maaneet's dance was fantastic as always.

Lovely part.

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