~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

i love the title so need to change

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supernasahu

@supernasahu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Title is perfect...👏 👍🏼

I don't comment often on ur update..🥱

But i luv ur writting skills...👏

I'll send u frnd req on fb confirm it...

Plz don't remove me from ur pm list...😊

Eagerly wating 4 next update of Adhoori zindagi...😆

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sandymg

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

my opinion i feel title is apt...

dnt worry GF will not close until we are there to support...

just dont stop writing😊

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

I like this title pooja !! But if u are not happy with it , then continue ur hunt !!! Am really happy to see writer like u , who are ready to accept even their flaws without any hesitation !! That itself is a step towards success !!! So , don't bother about ur short comes as u are a flourishing writer , who for sure will turn to be an more awesome writer than now !!

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

m satsfy the name u give it n i think it suit to according 2 story

bakki rest on 2 u

n plsss be tryy 4 pm...

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Hmmm title will think if something come to my mind i will tell u 😊

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

what wrong with the title it sum up the story it different i like it

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

is geet forum is closing?why cant u write on face book or world express or on ur own blog?

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

As this story is related to their childhood friendship seperation and milan
new sugessin for this story is-
1-JAB HUM JHAWAN HONGE
2-EK THA BACHAPAN
3-HUME BHULA NA DENA
4-YAD KIYA DILNE KANHA HO TUM...?
5-HUR DIN JO PYAR KAREGA
6- HUM BEWAFA HURGEEZE NA THAE
7-DOSTI AUR PYAR
8-WO JAB YAAD AYE