~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago
ongg omgg...wi did u dooo thzzz...hw can u stop thz over here...terribly madly waiting fr th next update...ohhh godd...wat s gonaaa happen btw thm nnd th total revelation is to be out...waitinggg dear...thks fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 9
awesome...
will they see each other?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely part...loved maan -mansi bodning

kya drama queen hai amy & annie
bday party is here
who is shweta


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part ...

aansee was so cute ... didn't leave maan..

but drs always have tricks to deal with pts ...

maaneet face to face 😲

wrong place to stop 😡

waiting for more

thnx for pm pooja
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow
great part
yippee a birthday party to rejoice about
maan and maansi together are adorable
simply superb!
ab jaldi se ek aur pyara sa update de do
am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago


will Maan recognize Geet or his Pari-nain...

why Daadi said that Maan is not Ranjith son...is he adopted...or I missed something in the update...I read 3 updates today because u didn't send me pm for last 2 updates...

who is Shweta...how she is related with Geet...

Maan is so free with his friend but why he behaves so khadus at home...

now Maan-Geet face to face...what will be their reaction...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks to all who given comments i dont have much time soo given replies to few only sorry for that spar me na
@ maangeet forever
Haha thanks for your nonstop pestering I am here with update now enjoy and about swetha and rahul you will know in this update. And ha be careful with mama haa
@ jeev
didi thanks for pics I loved it
@ sand
Welcome re you are back at last I am waiting for you only
@ Golden moon
Di party mai twist aagaya haha enjoy now
@ Harshitaa
Hmm your guess maaneet knows each other right or not see in this update
@ priyadarsini 64
Wow reading your comment was gift re thanks for that
@ Sri 91
Oops I hope I reached your expectations
@ tamanna 1391 yaar give me comment only one word plz its request only you will always give comment but one word don't get me wrong ok
@ rami
Beta lol cool don't be sorry its ok and that show off you will know in next update damki de raha hai muje tum uff babaji bacha lo muje
@ Grill
Buddy to create curiosity stopped at that time
@ iampooja verma
Hey pooja aap muje songle word comment diya why acha nagi laga kya tell me if you dont like it
@ manshi
Heyy buddy as per your wish i added the past but only few lines
@ pari agarwal
Cherry manse is cute just like you haina you can order for update
@ satana, Dr roes di
hmm ints guss for stopping at wrong time cool cool
@ double cross
Thanks for comment you know i am happy from getting praises wtiter like you sach mai
@ SPVD deepa di wow you are back thanks for comment
@ praff comment nahi diya tum acha nahi laga kya

Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


ADHOORI ZINDAGI





Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingof me"
arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff

Thanks to all who given likes and comments. encourage me in the same way


part 10

(Check above post for replies i given to few)



The whole mansion looking like new bride with different flowers colorful lights and guests were waiting for the birthday boy eagerly along with dev, meera, dadi maa specially aniee for her GK no her "pari nain" . She already planned everything so all guests know some special one also coming so they were soo excited for their entry. All guests were youngsters only very close family friends all know maan as Khurana's big son and were Running KC at London but meeting him was a dream for them so they were very excited and was enjoying the party music.
The lights went off suddenly everybody started murmuring dev announced welcome the birthday boy and also birthday girl all of you taking mike. Maan was giving tough time to Amy with his questions while geet was least bothered for all these.The lights focused on them Amy was helping maan while Aniee helping geet the left both in middle of hall untied their blind folds at same time maan geet are facing to each other. The whole hall ecoched with clapping sounds the music was playing in full volume maan and geet both opened there eyes at same time but due to light effect again closed their eyes after few minutes opened there eyes met time stood stand still as their eyes met rose petals were showering on them as per Aniee's plan but looking like the god was blessing them with love by showering flowers.
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Her beautiful almond hazels captivated him he keeps on staring at her without any blink he forgot everything the pain his longingness everything. Her eyes have soo many hidden things he is trying to bore into her eyes to see the secret what she is hiding from this world. Her curls were disturbing her hazels trying to break their eye lock section but he is not ready to leave her hazels which have soo much power soo many emotions pain was taking leading role mostly. Her face was soo calm looking like she was least bothered about all things happening around her he guessed. There moment got disturbed by aniee's scream she pounced on maan and geet hugged them as tight as she can
"bhai and Pari nain happy birthday to you both I am soo happy sooo sooo much happy today two most important persons in my life was together I cont express my happiness" said aniee with tiny drop of tears in her eyes breaking the hug
Maan raised his hand to wipe way her tears to take his chutki in his brotherly hug before he could do anything geet hugged her wiping her tears smiling slightly seeing her chutki. This is first time they are meeting and her surprise birthday party given her immense happiness. She thought there is no one in this world who will think about her and also can love her but god had given her soo much happiness which she didn't expected to be happen hiding all her pain all her sorrows which ones given to her in her birthday only she smiled at aniee nodding her head for no.
"Now stop this drama chutki today is my birthday right you are making me cry soo bad. I will go now you continue with your rona dhona" saying soo she tries to go way leaving aniee's hand
"Pari nain this is all for you only ok see I am smiling now don't go plz for me atleast" said aniee taking geet hand drags her to maan who is still in spell of her hazels
"Bhai happy birthday and here is your gift" said aniee handling him his gift geet frowned aniee was enjoying watching her every expressions. Seeing him last somewhere aniee opened the gift and placed in his hands showed him what gift she given to him.
Maan who is still last in her hazels glanced at the gift he startled seeing it was his "pari nain" eyes which he drowned at his childhood. He came to present reality whith that blow he instantly started checking the place where they were presented his face color faded recognizing the place his mind stopped working at that time there are soo many memories were playing in his mind.
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"Maa open your eyes see your maan is here plz see me you wonna play with me right come lets go" maan pleaded his mom crying bitterly

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"Maa who is she wow did you seen her she is looking soo cute the way you said just like angel she is my "Pari" right maa" naina nodded her head slightly seeing him smiling after soo many days

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"Pari see this gift I brought this for you but where is my gift I want my gift give mine to me then you can take yours"
"Beta she is small kid and you are demanding gift from her" asked dadi making maan to smack his head slightly

"Uffo maan you became stupid leave it you forgot this it was her 2nd birthday only na chalo leace it give her gift seeing her smile was my return gift" said maan smiling big
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"Papa papa no papa stop her see pari was leaving me alone she is going away from me no stop her plz papa" begged maan seeing Ranjith
"Mohinder uncle plz don't go don't take pari away from me rano maa you say to him not to do that plz"

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Aniee was busy giving gift to geet failed to see his state but dadi maa come to his rescue hugged him wished him with all her love before he lost himself in to his past memories. Amy, dev and meera wised him after getting assurance from dadi maa.
Maan glanced at all gave a look to dadi maa which have soo many questions, pain, angry but dadi can see slight happiness also. She smiled seeing him said
"I know maan beta you are trying to live in present but this is too much for you to handle but trust me everything will be all right just give it a try the min I seen you back from London I understand you are ready to face all these things so I did all these for you here in this palace" said dadi maa in low voice where deav and all left to accompany guests touching his cheek lovingly
Maan was about to go from their leaving everything behind not wanting to hurt anyone in his anger or pain to calm hiself Aniee his chutki came there at right time along with geet
"Bhai I forgot to introduce GK to you. Meet my pari nain I told you may times about her right here she is beside me" said aniee happily
Pari nain that word strikes in his mind how that can be possible is she his geet his pari nain maan thoughts were got disturbed by aniee
"Happy birthday Mr.MSK my name is GK" introduced geet by herself stretching her hand
Before maan could maan answer aniee dragged both for cake cutting. Dev and dadi takes a sign of relief seeing maan they were very scared for his reaction they glanced at aniee who is standing in between maaneet smiling she forgot her fear of her bro reaction seeing her pari nain
Seeing elderly lady in front of her geet smiles at her takes blessing from her all greeted her along with swetha who is still unable to believe her eyes seeing the great Khurana's showing their affection on GK but pasted a smile on her face.
All the while maan eyes were stucked on geet only trying his best to come in terms whats going on around him her name was still un known to him but as per aniee pari nain and her hazels he thinking soo deep still looking at her.
Geet got conscious with someone piercing gaze searched here and there and caught him staring at her there eyes met again. Being heroine she is used of it but today it felt soo different she didn't wanted to take her eyes off from him. He is looking soo genuine and his eyes have some magic she wanted the time to stand still swetha hugged her all of sudden making her startled wished her smiling big confusing her and she makes her way to maan before geet ask anything wished him tries to hug him maan who was last in geet didn't given any importance to her just stood like statue
Seeing no reaction from him swetha breaks the hug feeling humiliated extended her hand for hand shake and said
"Mr.MSK I am swetha tiwari personal assistant to GK and a international model I worked under your "Khurana fashions" at London did you remember me or not nice to meet you"
Maan glanced at her listening KF from her shakes his hand with her swetha got tiny heart attach seeing his gesture caught his hand sensually pecked his hand. she know she is sounds too crazy KF was running by his close friend she has huge crush on maan but she didn't get any chance to meet him for get meeting him she did get chance to get his one glance so she is using her golden chance but she don't know with whom she is dealing
Seeing all these happenings geet averted her gaze from them she chided herself for thinking he is genuine he can stop her right but he didn't he is also cheapo like those spoilt brat. She knows very well about swetha but she don't have anything to do with her well she was appointed by that sheela she came along with her to party because of Rahul only whom she respected a lot. Geet leave it all you are here for your chutki so just live this moment with her
But geet missed the scene what maan did for kissing him he gave her a disgust look pushed her way from him just left her alone as he was not in his senses right now (me: if not swethe gaye kaam se lol)
After cake cutting all feeded him aniee pounced on him like always with cake but she can sense his restlessness but right now she was afraid to confront him gathering her courage she said
"Bhai all this is for you only from your chutki plz give me one smile I want nothing only one smile" said aniee in low tone
"Chutki" is only thing he can say with chocked voice seeing her hugged her with at most love but in back of his mind her hazels still hunting him
"Bhai you forgot me it's too bad you just wait I will complain about this to maa" said Dev making face
"Arey just stop it your drama at least today ok plz let him enjoy without your buckering" said meera
"Looking like someone became fan of husband's bro for getting her husband and also his Bro" said Amy to make maan realize he also present there
"Amy she is my sister dares to say a word againt her got it" warned maan saying soo he hugged the all of them making Meera ana Aniee seeing his facial expressions
"Uffo pari nain where did she leave all of sudden" said aniee searching for her in the crowd. "Here we go" said aniee after seeing her being blocked by her fans who were presented in the party
"Acha hua I was out of that Mr.MSK sight now" thought geet but in real she is missing her maa seeing all those family moments of her chutki
"Dadi maa where is maa "asked maan in dadi ears he left the sentence middle dadi maa understand his unsaid words said
"Niana was not feeling well so she didn't came here and" maan can sense her state placed his hand on her shoulder blinked his eyes. His eyes were searching for his "Pari nain" only
"Dadi maa I wonna tell you one thing today" said maan looking straightly in to her eyes dadi maa nodded her head maan continued

"my geet is alive dadi maa I am searching for her now I came here in search of her only I came to know she is in India only will you be with me in this" asked maan with hopeful expressions
dadi maa eyes widened in shock all her hopes shattered to brought him back from his past listening this

"But she is not alive right then how it can be possible" thought dadi maa with horrified expressions seeing her last face maan shook her slightly to brought her back to reality

"dadi maa she was my pari nain then how can I forgot her when I am suffering in my pain she came to me like an angel that's why I kept her name like "pari nain" only I still remember her innocent smile her tiny hands which used to wipe away my tears when I am sad she is three years kid only but still she cont see sadness in my face what ever happened is play of your son but this time I want everything have to be done the way I want I will search her dadi maa" said maan with determined face and continued

"I know you all fear for my reaction for arranging this party but I already decided to come to this palace at morning itself"

"I really wonna thank all for bringing me here I got some new work to get solved" maan thought glancing at geet

Before he could complete his sentence dadi maa fainted making every one startled this is soo much for her to handle morning Ranjith confrontation and now maan

prev:Part 9 next. PART 11








I hope evryone like it if not sorry for that well maaneet were not that persons who will fall at 1st sight itself in my story so i plotted like this only and i added past beacues of Maanshi as she was asking me and said i twas looking incomplete. Well hope everyone get to know the hidden secret if not wait for next


This update is for my sam aka Maageetforever she is pestsring me for update
@ valli 22 Di kaha kho gaya aap plz come back soon i am waiting for you

dedicating this SS to trio

muskan di, aniee di and valli di

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

pooja


sorry for spelling and grammer mistakes
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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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awesome part
maan past is so emotional he very much attached to his baby pari
geet nit feeling good seeing maan with swetha
maan believes that his pari nain is alive
daadi fainted so much in one day
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago

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