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priyasree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Beautiful update

Being a Keralite proud to read about Alapuzha

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

I don't have anything to say. I have one question, why? Why? Do you think this is it?

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-Crayon-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: AthenaA

Have been working on this story in a mind to complete it within a month. I have seen your love for this story so yeah, will repost it there :)

But do you see the love between them?

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: -Crayon-

But do you see the love between them?

good question...the protagonists hyv not yet overtly expressed their love..they have to still explore it...that s the beauty of the story..slow realization of love...

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

I don't mean to interfere in your story but I would love to have some conversation between the characters like the one we read in the initial updates..so that we could know how the relationship is evolving...of course even w/o dialogues, it was never less effective like we witnessed in last few updates..as u wish, it was just small suggestion...

update soon

Edited by memad - 10 years ago

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#386

sorry for being too demanding...pls pls can we readers have longer updates like the one in the initial updates...

also pls post this story in Madhubala forum..

Edited by memad - 10 years ago

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DontPanic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

I have posted the story in madhubala forum. And as for your suggestion goes, that's an intelligent suggestion. I'll think about it. Thanks

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: AthenaA
I have posted the story in madhubala forum. And as for your suggestion goes, that's an intelligent suggestion. I'll think about it. Thanks

thank u so much for replying...
Oh, I didn't know you already posted the story in Madhubala forum.. I am jumping there and surely gonna spam a lot..😉

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#389

finally finished reading this story...wow... beautifully written shikha...awesome story...loved every emotions you expressed for geet...why maan didn't tell her that he is blind date or groom when they met and discussed about the project...geet was hurt with his prank... first I too thought that maan & veer were two diff characters...she was confused with maan as her boss, her groom veer and her real maan with whom she fell in love...but glad that she finally found her maan in maan...liked the bonding bet pari-geet-her father...yash is really dumb ...can't he see how much pari loves him...but now dev came there...liked the interaction bet pari & dev...now geet & maan got married...waiting for more...update soon

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Onir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#390

Just started reading this story once again. The last update that I had read here was the revelation of Mann=Veer and the whole prank that they played on poor Geet.

The journey from that revelation to the Journal entry was so sweet... there were moments of doubts, sincerity, love, passion and friendship in between... with so many new bonds formed and so many questioned for their foundation.

Liked the flow and waiting to read more... 😊