FF - Guzaarish - Blog Link to Part 11, 12/ Pg 83, 84: 2 May - Page 2

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MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Congratz for new story !!!
love the pro
sdlife19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

few lines

for your new work


don't why but after reading name of your ff
i want to write something
and after reading prologue
this is what come in m y thoughts


khud se maangi ,jo dua
woh har dua ,
tere naam ki hai !

agar tu saath hai mere ,
toh yeh duniya kaam ki hai !
warna kya fark hai ,
phool aur pathar main !

agar tere saath juda hai
naam mera ,
toh kuch baat bhi hui !
warna har khushi ,jo mere naam ki hai
woh mere liye benaam hui !

bas ek tu muhe apna saath dede ,
saari duniya ki chod du main !
ek tera saath ho saath mein mere ,
us khuda se bhi muh mod du main !
tere pal to ek pal jeena soch kar bhi ,
yeh jeena chod du main !

bas tere pyaar ki chah ,
muhe saans lene se jyaada pyaari hai
ek tu sadaa saath dena mera
bas yahi tujh se
aur uss khuda se
meri GUJAARISH hai


hope you like it



Should i say thanks for it dear..or should i not..

i simply cant express tat u have brought my whole story in your poem. i mean the flow of my story will be the way you have expressed your words in the poem..

i will defo use it when i update my first part ..

just love you and thank you sooo muchhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sdlife19



Should i say thanks for it dear..or should i not..

i simply cant express tat u have brought my whole story in your poem. i mean the flow of my story will be the way you have expressed your words in the poem..

i will defo use it when i update my first part ..

just love you and thank you sooo muchhh


you really like it
this much

me lots of😳

and sharm se paani paani😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Congrats Di. Continue waiting for part 1 already b
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
congrats on your new story...lokking forward😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Di congrast for new FF...i loved the title alot👍🏼
awesome prologue..superb👏
eagerly waitign for Start..continue super soon
Thanks for starting new story 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
this title remind me a song
tu meri adhoori pyaas pyaas
tu aa gyi dil ko ras ras
waiting 4 u to cont it😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
interesting...

waiting eagerly fr d starting...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Congratulations di .! 😊

Waiting for it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Lovely... congo on your new FF... waiting for an update...

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