MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago
part11 oho geet was suffering alot she cont fulfil her cravings also what maan brough ice cream did he? he cared for her did he loved her at present he is saying that hedid felt sad for dng all these but y he did that itna cold kyun
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12 her wait was not ended at the most sad part for every women when ur love wont be with u when ur caring his love symbol it pained my heart alot billy iwas soo sad he was craving for love yar i am so much gloomy now how they cand do that the world was soo cruel
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Posted: 12 years ago
Iets a very painful story! I feel so sorry for Geet!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hate this maan too core how dare he treat his own wife like some kind of a street animal. He want baby from her but cant even take care of her small needs... Bull shit 😡
agar itna hi prob tha to usko preg.kyu kia. I realy hate this man.
Upar se uski family wo b disgusting hai.
Itne bade ghar me uska dhyan koi nai rakh raha wow. He only cares for His so called sam... Grrr
sweety i want you to make him repent badly or tab Geet usko maaf b na kare... I really want him repenting.. Itna gussa aa raha hai na mujhe
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U R CRUEL. U ALWAYS MAKE ME CRY...😭
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Part 13

Past

Today one more thought came to her mind but she knows that too be will unfulfilled. Staring moon without blink doesn't know when she slept there.

She woke as usual at her time, but found herself on bed n only thought came in her mind was must be arjun did her, as knew maan can't do this, days started passing, she didn't want to bother anyone know, as aniee is too expecting, so started suppressing her desires, n aniee too used to come less to her as her room was shifted downstairs, only arjun used to come n talk her sometym in that she used hear only, she stopped talking too, now days she only talk to her babies which is inside her, think about their names, their cutness, n all now days her life is smitten in this room, with her kids thought, as in small age she is gng to become mother, her body was not ready for soo much pain but she never bothered, her dress was making her more uncomfortable, arjun n aniee has brought some nighties for her but she avoid wearing it, as she hasn't wore this type of clothes, soo she used to be in her suits, which make her stubborn but she can't do anything cant shout on anyone, cant share her thoughts too.

Today whole mansion was decorated like bride, as today is aniee's godbharai, soo many guest were there in mansion n there was lots of chaos, all were singing songs, playing dhol, giving blessing to aniee, geet used to drool everything from her corridor, with smile on her face but with lots of sadness to, all were present except her, sam jenny all were there, after some tym she saw her chooti maa coming, she was happy to see her after 6 months, wanted to run n hug her tightly but she know she cant do this as all have strictly ordered her to be in her room, n maan privet kitchen was opened for her today as they don't want anyone suspect that she is here.

All were happy n she too wanted to goo there, as all were putting mehndi on their hands, with their hubby name, she stare her both hands n then mehndi from above, wanted to put, all ladies were teasing each other on their husband name, she was smiling with tears, but her heart arched when sam said to put maan name in her mehndi, tara n pari were teasing her, she was smiling, geet left from there n thought her chooti maa atleast come to see her, but she didn't come, all day everyone enjoyed, it was 3pm when her felt hungry, as today servants didn't come with her food, then she remb. The private kitchen of maan is opened for her as arjun n aniee said her without any option she went in kitchen n looks at every vessels but all were empty like all forgot to cook for her n after oil incident she never went in kitchen so don't know how to cook, she was cutely cribbing to her baba ji, when saw some carrots n pick one washed it n thought something is better than anything, while muching it she was checking fridge, she eyes, twinkled to see, lots of chocolates n ice-cream 1st thought to ignore as anyone will see then will shout but her childness wanted to have atleast one as she carved for small small things from childhood, the things which she used to demand was useless for her parents.

She looked here n there n when find nobody looking at her or is here she took out 1 big chocolate n sat on small couch there, n eating it with lots of sounds n happiness which was visible through her eyes. She looked at chocolate which was over, n made face n wanted to have more as still she is hungry n know by eating chocolates n ice-creams her tummy wont full, she looked again at the carrort n made face n was cribbing " nobody cares for us baby, sorry babies for making u both starve due to ur mumma, as they don't like me, but y they are making u starve, they said me to don't show my face, I don't said anything, but for u both they can care me na at last u both come till, chadoo babies mumma making u bore, let me try to make something for u both" she looked here n there, found pasta packets, but don't to how to make n more over don't know its taste too, she turned packet to look recipe, but there was none, she cribbed again "ullu ka patha, cant they add recipe for those, who don't know to make" n left it on slab n was about to leave when saw maan standing with crossed arms in MSK style, she was scared to see his stern face, n looked down with sorry face. "What u r doing in kitchen" asked raising hi eyebrow,

"Sorry"

"I didn't asked ur sorry I asked what u r doing" in stern voice

"Who I was hungry, n today servants didn't come with my food, so I came here as aniee dii said my today my food will be here only, sorry for disturbing m gng in room"

"Stop, seat I m calling any servant, they will bring ur food," maan called servants, n said to bring her food

"Sorry sir, but lunch is all finish" said servant while down casting his head

Maan was about to shout on him, when heard geet voice

"It's ok bhaiya, I will manage n maan ji u don't worry"

Maan signalled servant to leave n after he left geet asked in scared voice "can I take one more chocolate maan ji, if u don't have prob, n sorry for eating one"

She said while looking down, n waiting for maan to brust on her but she was more shocked to hear his words " hmm u can have as much u want these are for my babies, soo u can eat this, n seat here I will make something for u"

Geet looked at him with amusement while maan signalled her to seat with his eyes, maan gave her chocolates to eat n he was making pasta for her, she was excited for 1st tym, maan is taking care of her n babies, she is happy, n that any once can see from her eyes, meanwhile arjun came with her food, n was about to call geet when saw maan making pasta n geet eating chocolates, so he left from there as he saw a beautiful smile on her lips.

She was looking at maan with theif eyes, how he is making it after eating chocolate she went n stand near slab n looking how he is making it, n asked in amusement " u know cooking" but when maan looked at her she immediately said "sorry" with baby face, then maan answered her "hmm I know, u don't know cooking na" she said sadly "no I scare from cooking as I have once burnt my half body" maan looked at her n then again concentrated on his chopping.

Geet again asked " can u make it lil spicy" as she saw him putting very less spice. But maan didn't heard her but showed his eyes, then she said again "plzzz I want to eat something spicy from last 5 days, can u plzz add some spice" she said with lil hope n small pout n then looked other place as thought add spice, she again took another chocolate n started munching it as she was soo much hungry.

After 10 mins maan passed her plate, she looked at the plate with making faces, but maan glared n she silently took plate from him n took 1st spoon with lots of hesitation n but it was yummy, she loved it it was spicy, n looked at maan who was too eating as after coming from office he was too hungry, both were sharing 1st tym food together it was best moment for geet to teaser in her heart, she know, this day again come back in her life, today the moments she has spended with maan. Her all pain was lost today, she was loving every moment n praying to god to never end it. She looked at maan n then said "thanku for making it spicy n its soo tasty thanku for making food for me".

"I didn't make for u, I make for my babies, understand" maan said rudely

Geet smiled at him, n thought "at least for u rabies, u made it na, it is enough for me maan ji, I can live these moments till life tym" she smiled again ear to ear n started having pasta while making sound as usual.

After that she returned to room, n twirled in excitement for the things the moments she got today, she looked the clock it was gng to be 5pm, n got excited to see all the functions, but before that thought to take some rest as she had some back pain. Her sleep was broken by some sound, she opened her drowsy eye to see maan getting ready in beautiful black sherwani n looking handsome. But again sadness come in her face as she cant attend the function n can't be part of it.

Hmm soo kaesa tha yeh part, I think aaj koi nahi kahega I cried after reading it 😛 now thread comp. karo n next update lo agar aache bacho kaesa aaj kar dia toh kal le lena update 😆

Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
feeling soo bad for geet
she deserves happiness and care and she is not getting it

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love d update
M surprise! maan says my babies nd then cook food fr Geet
Today's update first tym give true happiness to Geet
No tears only happiness in my eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago
she didnt even had food for her and ws going to have just carrot😭 what more painfull can be

continue soon

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