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Posted: 12 years ago
Chlo updt dene jati hu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


aree abhi kahungi na.. abhi to reply dena shuru hi kiya tha😆😆

Chaloo mela baabu ..mela bachha.. vote kardo ..konsa bedtime story sunna hai next me



😆hame aapka andaaz pasandh aaya monaji!

already voted and commented too

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



arrey main kaha bolthi hoo??? mein tho shaanth swabhaav ki hoo yaara...main tho sirf tum logo ko reply karthi hoo... agar tum log zyaada baat karoge tho automatically main bhi zyaada baat karoongi na tab?





Sab milker Gap-Sap
maar rahe hai...
Mujhe bhool gaye...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Sab milker Gap-Sap
maar rahe hai...
Mujhe bhool gaye...




aut thoda late aathi...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Today I am feeling so proud that I completed this story but feeling sad too. Yet I have satisfaction that I got yours love and support entirely.I want to give a warm hug to you all that I enjoyed my time with you all here. Don;t know who would keep step along with me in my next journey so who would not, please accept my Thanks with open heart and who will walk with me.. they would get my Thanks and love there only

😆 😆

To all



Last Part

Geet was closing her eyes down fearing from the fall which she had expected but that did not go to happen. She felt warm hands on her waist holding her with care and heat of breathes were showering her on face, making her feel diffident sensation inward. She did not dare to make her eyes open. What if he could see her through!! She feared with the outcome of this exhibition of her timid emotions.

She realized her body was being carried away with the parallel motion of his walk. She guessed her body was in his arms, she tried to make distance. Suddenly she felt a tremble of his step and her one hand automatically clutched around his neck tight closing down the little distance between their bodies. In other hand she was yet holding his photo tightly. She heard Maan chuckle and in baby-anger she opened eyes to be found him looking her with intense eyes.

She showed she was angry but was trying hard to hide her blush which Maan had already seen. He made her stand on feet. He took out the frame from her hold and kept it on table. Getting chance Geet tried to run away but the corner of her Dupatta had been caught in his hand and it slipped down revealing her head, following from shoulder and fell down on floor making her gasp in expectancy.

In term of hiding herself she turned around, faced back to him but did not realize, he could see him through mirror of dressing table and the realization made her hide face between both palms of hers.

Maan decreased the distance and started to untie strings of her small kurti. With freedom of each string Geet breaths were started to block in throat and when she felt his lips on her exposed skin her heartbeat seemed like leaving her forever, not ready to come back any soon.

When she felt the untie of last one her hand automatically held the cloth on front and she tried to escape but Maan hand did not leave her shoulder and she had to stop there with heavy breathing. She had no courage to face him nor could break and run from his hold, she pitied on her own condition and blushed hard.

She felt her Dupatta was coming back on her body slowly. Maan hands were covering her exposed marble skin with the thin material caressing her skin softly. Her hold on Kurti loosened and it slips down on floor silently and in term she turned back and hugged him tight. Maan tightened his arms to absorb heat of her body entirely. The softness of her skin was feeling magical against his hard muscles.

He could not hold back more. He carried her in arms and made her lay on flower decorated bed and covered her body entirely with his big one. He removed her jewelries with hands and his mouth helped in it too. His lips were measuring the distance of her body and hands were making it easy by creating the places clear from any materials. And finally when their bodies felt the freedom of any walls they started to explore them with complete love and passions. Their hands replaced with their lips and both started to be filled completely in each other fragrances. With a sudden loud moan Maan stepped in to touch her soul and Geet had tears of happiness with the feel of him inside her world of forbidden. He kissed her tears and then her lips to stamp the certainty of making her future as beautiful as it was passing at the moment and they immersed in each other arms with the dreams of their future..


After a week

"Maan leave me na''

"umm.. don't try to dare Geet'' Maan held her bare waist tighter pulled her to him.

She jerked his hand in anger and tried to run but he pulled her arm, she landed on his chest spreading her hairs down all over his face. Maan inhaled in her hairs patiently.

"Maan please chaliye na.. I want to tour this place. Since we are here you never let me go out of here!!!'

She complained having her baby anger on nose and sat up covering bare body under thin blanket. Maan kept his head on her lap and hugged from waist and slept smilingly.

"Maan!!!''

She whacked him.

"Here I'm getting angry on you and you' I am not going to talk to you!!!' she held blanket wrapped herself in and runs from there inside washroom and closed door with loud thud.

"Geet!! okay Jaan chalo!! Now don't be angry!!'

She runs out and kissed his cheek hurriedly and rushed back inside saying will be back in ten minutes and him to be ready too.

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Wearing a beautiful yellow suit she comes out and dried her hair when found his without blinking eyes on her. Her hand stopped and she looked down but then gained her composer.

"Ahmm!! Why did not you get ready yet Maan!!'

''Geet is it necessary to go as we can see beautiful sights here too!!''

He was in his naughty mood but Geet was in her sherni mode. She made face and started to remove her jewelries which she was wearing in excitement and threw it on bed. Maan got scared to see her anger and rushed inside washroom to get ready and Geet smirked wickedly.

"Love you Maan!!!'' She shouted from out and heard his groan from inside. She laughed her heart out..

They together come out of their small cottage of Shimla and walked toward a crowded place which was decorated with lights and having parties and celebrations for tourists. In night the place was not looking less than any heaven covered with white snow and high mountains and in mid dancing couples and romantic festivity. Geet became lost in this sight where Maan was getting bored. While seeing the couples having and enjoying their dances he had curious desire to spend time with her alone in their love filled room but here she.. !!

He found her lost and got an idea. He opened the first three buttons of his shirt to make it visible to the girls group nearby.

"Geet you wait here I'm coming to get something to drink'

He smiled and walked toward the group of girls who were ogling over his exposed sharp chest and this is what Geet witnessed. Her face became red in anger when found a girl was chatting Maan with plastering smile on her face and Maan too, was answering her with same zeal.

"How dare her!!!!'

With stomping feet she almost runs to him and held his arm mingled with her. She gave her angry glare to him and dragged far from there in fury. Maan was enjoying her anger tightened her hold around her and kissed her red cheek. She gave her glare.

"What were you doing with them???'

He smiled said nothing. It increased her temper more. "Maan I'm talking to you!!!!

Maan lifted her and kept in car and drove off to cottage. Before Geet could understand anything she was under him completely drowned in his passion and she smiled with her whole heart and kept swimming in his desired love'

There wont be any epilogue .. Pls cast this part as epilogue too.. Its my request.. 😊


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


😛 🥳 🥳
Last Part and Me 1st...
Kya moke pe choka maara hai...

I m going to miss WFU...
Mona..
for this Bful FF...






Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me second... yipee...

i can understand how emotional u may be feeling now ... as being just a reader am feeling so emotional that it ended... but koi na... decide which ff u r going to update and we will do the same dhamaka, no more dhamaka there !!!! ok...

i loved the part... suhaagraat and honeymoon combo!!!!😉😳

will love this ff and ofcourse u always...



Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




aut thoda late aathi...



Kya karoon...Kuch habits kabhi nahi badalti...😈
Me janam-jaat late-lateef...😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
itna wait karne ke baad kya mast update mila worth reading. U have written lovely when maneet became.So maan didnt allow geet to go out of cottage obliviously how can he allow when they were in their honeymoon how can geet expect maan to leave her when he was waiting for this day.Lovely ending and waiting for ur other ffs
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Sab milker Gap-Sap
maar rahe hai...
Mujhe bhool gaye...



khud toh late aati hai fir hume bolti hai

abhi pata hai na mai fir sone chali jaaungi


Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago

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