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This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all



Part 81

For entire day Geet did not see Maan. For entire day she had been busy in preparations n all with Dadi and SD also did not give her any chance to ask about Maan. Geet also called him once but Maan said he will be busy in meeting so don't call him further. It was to go evening and still Geet did not know what for these preparations are going on.


At late evening, she was sitting with Dadi chatting with her when someone called her name. Get found it familiar and she turned back to see who was the owner of voice and her heartbeat stopped when she witnessed the most important person of her life was standing over there on door, facing her.


"Maa!!'


Geet mouth called her mother with such surprise that not even she could hear it and then she runs to hug her leaving everyone around with a smile on their faces. Geet hugged Rano and Rano to her daughter. They were having the emotions of happiness with fall of tears from eyes by gaining the arrival of unexpected.


"Maa you here..?'


And then Geet saw Maan who was standing at little far, standing with his apparent attitude but had a soft expression on face. Geet did not need to know more about Rano and Daarji arrival. She knew, it could only be her Maan. She met Daarji also where he asked for her forgiveness. Everything was coming out as dreams becoming true and she felt her happiness was going across any bounds.


SD welcomed them and after few formal talks she invited them to take rest. Geet wanted to talk Maan. He was there all the time but when Geet got chance to talk, he left. She followed him. Maan walked in her room and behind Geet also stepped in but found it was all vacant.


She searched in everywhere but Maan had gone.


"Where are you Maan!!' she whispered in hope.


"Close your eyes Geet I'll be there'' She hears his voice from back.


She turned back suddenly.


"No Geet.. Don't try to see me. There is only one way to find me, just close your eyes, I will be there with you''


Failing she closed eyes. She heard his footsteps coming near. Every small part of her body was attending on his move only and suddenly she felt something was touching her hands. It was cold, metallic touch and then she realized his lips were on her both hands. She smiled but it did not live for long. She felt emptiness and opened her eyes to find herself all alone but two beautiful bangles were sounding in her hands.


Her eyes caught a note she was holding. "What's it?' She did not know how did it came but knew it could be him only. She reads it.


"Wants to find me Geet?'

Geet went confused'


"ooho.. So Mr. Maan Singh Khurana wants me to play hide & seek!! Let's see who wins Maan!!' She reads further.


"A place where your eyes see the world behind you,

A place where your eyes can see the face of your love in your eyes itself,

Find the place and close your eyes Geet, you will get me there''

For sometime she thought and then got the place clue. Running across a long narrow corridor, passing from the rails of rooms she reached there, in front of a big mirror, hanging on wall on the end of corridor and closed her eyes, waited for him.

A heavy metal touched her ears and started to kiss her cheeks following with him. Her heart filled with his love when got his kiss on her earlobes and forehead. But then again emptiness made open her eyes. She looked around for him and then read further.

A place where many lives take birth to make world colourful,

A place where the colours shower in fragrances and I find the scent of your hairs there

Close your eyes and wait for me Geet I'll be there.."


Without delay she runs to garden and found something shining there lying on floor. She held it and found a gold anklet it was. Closing her eyes she eagerly waited for him.

The anklet started to slips out from her hold and she felt the touch of his hands on her leg. Her small feet rested on his knee and then the metal touched her. She smiled when felt his kiss touched her feet and her wish been fulfilled.

''A place will be witness of end and start of our days,

A place will follow the rules which we will make together with our desires & love,

Together we will dream for ours tomorrow and will make it true,

Close your eyes and find me Geet''

She blushed with these lines. She knew where Maan was talking for and runs there. The door was closed. She pushed it and opened. Maan room was dark but not completely. Geet stepped in with little feets. Her mind was occupied with his thoughts then she stopped abruptly.

Her heartbeat became rapid and body started to burn in fire. She started to feel the most unknown feeling which was hidden till now when she saw a beautiful red dress in front of her and thought of his making her wear this...

"No Babaji!!!''

She felt shiver even with the thought'


Precap: No precap 😛😛 😳



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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me first... kithne dino baad...

isko bolthe hai DHASU Update...

loved maans surprise by bringing her mom... he is such a loving guy yaar... hayeee...

loving their hide and seek play...

but it was definitely a wrong place to stop...


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Hmmm.. so Maan is playing Hide N Seek...with lots of
care and Romance...ahhmm..
Ye Maan Mishty ko kuch jyada hi nahi tease ker
raha hai...
Red Dress ..ahhmmm...ku apni hi watt laga raha hai..
..khud pe control kar payega kya...???
Maan brought Geet's Maa and Daarji for their dream
Wedding ...so sweet...
Waiting...
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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