REVANGEFUL LOVE #4 UPDATED PT 36 pg 113 19/7/2013 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandymg

waiting!!!

continue soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
richa pls update this one yaar😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 33
MAAN leave that client almost dead behind. Due to some guard's information Piyush came to know about this and he tackle this blunder of him before Samarth came to know about this.

In evng:
Piyush enters in KM in a very bad mood. Somya read his face and asked for the reason.

'somya i told u agr abhi bhi ye ladka nai sambhla na to ek dinn ye aisa fasega jaha koi ise bachane wala nai hoga.',Piyush said angrily.

Somya put her hand on his shoulder and asked lovingly.'what happned? Why are u so much in anger on Maan?'

'did you know what he done today?',he asked frustratingly and she nodded no. Piyush told her everythin ands Somya too got tensed.

'piyush chahe kuchh b ho jaye ghar me kisi ko pata nai chalna chahiye sply dad ko.',she told worridly.

'dont worry i handle this time. But Somya har baar zaruri nai hai ki baat ko sambhal pau. I dont know ye ladka chahta kya hai. Bjaye responsible banne k or bigdta ja raha hai. Kuch kahunga to gussa ho jayega.',tense lines occured on his lagre forhead. He rubbed it between his forefinger and thumb.

'aap shant ho jaiye main Geet ot Maan dono se baat karungi. Pata nahi har thode dinn me kya ho jata hai. Jaise hi lagta sab normal ho raha dono firr se wai sab...',she too get tensed with his annoying behavior and shut suddnly lost in her thoughts.

Piyush went inside washroom to wash away his tensions and Somya lost in her thought sessions.

Two more days passed silently btween both. Neither they talk nor they even try. Both deliberatly avoiding each other. But not for so long because today Samarth passed a summon for both. One of his close friend invite Maan and Geet for a dinner as they were not in India when their marriage take place so they invite the couple for a dinner. No of them is intrested but cant denied his orders so reluctantly both get ready and went to venue. They behaved calm and composed their but talking session is as it is like before. Both behaves so well without letting the host know about their diffrences. After the dinner both leave the place and went from there.

In mid of their route car get struck on a lonely road
Maan come out to check out for a problem. He open the bonnet and found it over heat.

'Geet car garam ho gai hai main pani leke aata hu.tum bahar mat aana car me hi rehna.',hge came and instruct Geet. She too nodded yes and Maan locked all the doors carefully. He left in search of water. Geet waits for him and get feared when he took so much time in coming back. She feels suffocated so she open her side door and come out in fresh air. She start roaming around her car in tension. Meanwhile some ruffins come there on bikes. Seeing a girl like her alone they all smile wickedly and went near her. All sopped teir bikes near her and start abusing her in vulgar slang. Geet get angry and scare both. In fit of anger she waved her hand to hit thheir leader,but he clenched her wrist in between and trying to pull her to him. All other laugh devily seeing her struggle. Their head raised his another hand to touch her on her waist,when a strong hand came and clutch his hand strongly before he reached to Geet
Geet slant her head and a weak smile came on her face.

'Maan',she said meakly and stop struggling. But Maan is looking at that ruffin with his fire smitting eyes. His every nerve is burning in his recent. His stiffed shoulders and fluffring nostrils clealry told now what he is upto. He compressed his hand much hardly and made him winced in pain. He broke his all bones of hand and kicked off away. All other partners of him get alert and attck on him together,but less they aware of it that Maan is not remain human being when it comes to Geet. He turn into a wild beast who is untamed for anyone. He brutually pounded each and everyone. He Knocked their faces and every body part where he got chance. All get wounded badly but no one able to overpowered him. One by one all ran away in darkness but not the leader who showing wrong courage of touching his Geet.

Maan knocked him down and punching his face non stop. Watching his beastly act Geet get worrried for the consequences. She know what had happened if this goon is die. She came to her untamed husband who was not in sence. She shake his shoulder and pleads to stop,which he ignore dilebrately and continue with it.

Geet's get worried and made efforts but he doesnt paused. Finally she yelled on him.'Maan pls for my sake leave him.',the moment she chimmed Maan's hand stopped in air. He leave him and get up from him. Geet dragged Maan from his arm but his anger not coming down so before leaving he kicked hard to him to settle down. Geet dragged him away to their car. She pleading conti.for leaving the place as soon as possible. Maan poured water in radiator and start his car. Both went away from there now. As both entered in KM Geet sighed and recentfully followed him in their room.
Both entered in their room and he banged his coat in frustration. Geet clenched his arm recentfully and moved him to face her.

'what do you think of yourself? He will die. Have you any idea what consequences you have to face after that? Kis baat ka itna gussa bhara hai tum me?',anger frustration and pain all bind in her question. She scared of him,scared of his Father's anger,scared for his life and future. All mixed up in her mind and as a result she shout over him
'so what? If you dont came in between i will definately kill him.',he snap back glaring her.

'why?',she asked going mad over his attitude.

'ye tum puchh rai ho? You know what he had done. He done a grave mistake of touching you and misbehaving with you.',He burst in anger grasping her arms.

Geet glared him with her recented eyes.'to iska matlab jaaan leloge uski. Raaah chalte koi na koi aise milta hi rahega to kya karoge,sabko maar daloge?',she too burst on him.

'ha',he streched his yes.'jo tumhare sath galat karne ki sochega b,main uski jaan le lunga. Suna tumne i will kill everyone',their convo is towering towards clash and both spitt fire in their words only.

Geet getting over of his stubborness.'so u to have done the same with me.',she said harshly without thingking its effects.

Maan's guilt rosed agin with this moment. He remove his hands over her. His eyes lowered down suddnly in shame and he step back slowly slowly. His remorse and painful eyes made her realize what she said unknowingly.

'Maan pls,i didnt meant that. I am sorry Maan,i doesnt want to hurt you.',she raised her hand towards him to stop as she repenting on her words,but now its too late. He already was on his remorse trip.

'no Geet why you saying sorry to me. Whatever i have done to you,i have to hear for my sin.',he said meakly and leave the room without glancing her.

Geet felt weak at knees and fall down on her bed in frustration. She held her head and clenched it firmly. She realy repenting on her words but now its not possible to bring him back,and she knew this.

Maan showered his frustration on his punching bag. He hit the bag as he hitting himself. His knuckles were alredy injured due to his earlier encounter and now it going more worst as he doing hard punches with until his body turn limp. About 3 am he enters in their room to check whether she is fine or not. Geet is sleeping on the floor,resting her head on the bed. Its clearly show she too was restless after his leave,. He went to her to scooped her but his courage leave him and he leave her as it is. He clenched his bleeded fists and come ot of the room.

Maan hearts is bleeding seeing her in pain,but he cant able to mend all this. He falls on couch in a hall area and slept soon. Around 6am Geet wake up with a jerk and looking for him in a hope may be he came in night. But his couch is empty. Now she scared. Many bad thoughts clenched her mind worsly. She came outside in his search and feel relief seeing him sleeping fine. She ran down to hall area and went closer to him. Geet sat on her knees near him and gazed him lovingly. She sighed as he is fine but soon her eyes poured fresh tears the moment she noticed his injured knuckles
Geet caress them with her soft palms and get up to made a fast move. Meanwhile Somya get up and noticed him sleeping in a hall area. Geet quickly bring ointment and trying to rubbed lightly without letting him know about this. Less she unaware that he is habitual of her feather touch too even in sleep mode. He get up quickly and Geet pulled back her hand but slowly. Both glance in each other eyes and Geet gave ointment tube to him without uttering a word.

Somya also came there and both stand up quickly. Maan trying to explaian her but her single glare made both shut.'i dont wana hear any excuse. Right now both of you go away from my sight. Geet took him to your room before papa came there and know about you. Tum dono ka jo b issue hai use apne kamre me rakho coz agar papa ko bhanak b padi then even i dont know what he do. So better u both take off right now.',she ordred and send both in their room. Somya take a relief breath and thought of talking with Geet first.

i starded this again and decide to complete it just only for my friend. And rest of you not to worry about likes any more coz from now like krna hai karo nahi karna hai mat karo i dont care. Just giving to complete my work only. As soon my all ongoing works finished i leave GF. Thank you all next will posted soon.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u richa for continuing this again.
well the update was really painful dont know when maan comes out of his guilt whenever he stops thinking about that something or other happens and the guilt again comes out but this time geet without any wrong intention in frustration to save and protect maan she blurted out it and throwing him into guilt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
FAB UD DR 😊

I AGREE WITH PIYUSH
HE IS RIGHT ON HIS PART
MAAN,S ANGER INCREASING DAY BY DAY

BOTH MAANEET WENT FOR DINNER ND
THAT INCIDENT HAPPENED😲

AGAIN GULIT RISEN IN MAAN BECOZ OF GEET,S WORDS
ND HE PUNISHED HIMSELF AGIAN
DNT KNOW WHEN WIL BE EVERYTHING FINE BTWN MAANEET

GEET IS HERSELF VERY GUILTY FOR HER
RUDE WORDS BT AGIAN D DAMAGE IS DONE
HOPE SOMAYA WIL PUT SUM BRAIN IN THEM

WAITNG 4 D NEXT DR


ND DR PLZ DNT STOP WRITTING THINK ABT YUR LOYAL READERS WHO ALWAYS LIKE ND CMNT YUR UD ND LET SILENT READERS GO TO HELL
Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it...
maan beaten the ruffins blue and white his anger was in no control...geet had to stop him from doing anything serious...
geet was angry on because of his anger and she unintenionally reminded him his sin and maan once again went into gulit trip...
waiting for next part

thanks for restarting it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
update emotional update only regret



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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update sweety tooo gud,maaneet angry n frustrated on eachother,,,,,,maan repnenting his deeds n geet regretting her words,both r in pain,,,,,loved the whole update alott continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish maan soon come out from his guilt awesome dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot for continuing this FF
the part was painful
both are in pain
When will they start living a pain free guilt free life?
Waiting for more so continue soon

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