Mg OneShot- ~Chori-Chori..Chupke-Chupke~ (season#2 link-pg36) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part2
As the last bell rang..a mix feeling of nervousness & excitment filled her. she was walking towards the main gate with her fast heartbeats. She wishd he will be there. As soon as she reached near the main gate..she somehow controlled her crazy heart and looked from the corner of her eyes..he was there!! Waiting like past few days.. Leaning against that big gulmor tree across the road. She pretended to talk to her friends..while in reality, all her attention was on him only.
She byed bye to others... As she & pooja started walking.. She noticed him coming behind them..maitaining a little distance. Her heart was beating faster every passing second. She was trying very hard to hide..watever was going in her heart& mind. They stoped to eat her fav "barf-golla". She liked it when he smiled looking at her enjoying her fav "kala khutta"..yes, she notice that! And when she asked that "golewala" to add some extra syrup..he laughed at her!! She pouted her lips..thinking..how dare he make fun of her..but then couldnt help smiling.
Next, she stopd at the garden which was her routine. She liked to spent time here & now she liked it even more as he was there too. She knew his gaze was on her all the while & she kind of enjoyed it! She like this feeling that was still new to her.
When they reached near her colony, pooja byed bye to her & went away.
She continued walking & knew that he was still following her. Her heart was going crazy..as she realised that they were the only two..on the otherwise empty road. For a moment her heart urged her to talk to him.. But then couldnt muster the courage. She purposely kept doing something or other.. Be it, moving that water bottle in her hand or kicking those stones on the road. She was liking his attaintion! She smiled at her own thoughts..& mantally chided her self.

When she reached near her house..she just ran inside..closing the door. She rushed to the window to see him. As she peeped thourgh the curtains of the window..she saw him coming towards her house. For a moment she panicked thinking that he is coming inside.. But then got confused when saw him bending down..& picking something. Soon She realised..that it was a "payal"..immediatly she checkd & found one of her "payal" missing. She turned..only to see him kissing it & keeping it in his pocket..! A blush crept her cheeks..& a shy smile came on her lips...seeing his gesture!
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she came out as she saw him leaving. She went towards the gate and kept looking at his retrating figure. But he stoped suddenly! She immediatly hided behing the pillar..guessing that he may turn around. He didnt turned..instead bend down to tie his shoe lace properly..and again resumed walking. She sighed..coming out.. And saw him turning at the corner..he was gone!
She was about to go back inside..when she notice something on the ground. She picked it up..it was a hankerchif..and by that "M" on it...which was done in a smiple but beautiful design she knew that it belonged to him!
She smiled crassing that "M". "MAAN.." she wisphered blushing! She brought it near her cheek & felt that soft cotton fabric on her skin..which has his feel. She was lost in that feel.
She looked up with a shy smile..only to get a shock of her life! Her heart stoped beating..seeing him standing in front of her..just a few meters away!

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
both d parts r awesome . continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Add me in ur pms this is fab
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
nyc part..
so geet knew dat he followed her... wooo..
n she is also in love with him...
n she knows his name...hmmm
n yeh both cameface to face...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so geet ko pata hai k maan usse follow karta hai aur woh usse enjoy bhi karti hai...omg...geet kya chhupa rustam nikli...she loves being followed by maan...wow...aur humein toh lagta hai k maan jaan bujh kkar apna hanky unha gida diya tha...usse pata tha k geet usse notice kar rahi hai...

superb n
wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVED BOTH THE PARTS
VERY NICE
SO BOTH LOOK AT EACH OTHER QUIETLY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update...well written..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wow... Tat was wonderful yar...
Maan is too smart :-)
N geet all this while knew he is following her...
Too gud ;-)
Ab kya karegi geet ???
Will now maan spk to her ????
Already waiting for next part ;-)
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#30
Fantastic update ...
really loved it ... ❤️
Continue soon pls...😊

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