MG(SS):Love from Across (Last Part X-Pg 22) 16/05 - Page 8

the story takes interesting turns and with each update, a new revelation is out that makes it fun to comprehend the story

no doubt last two chapters depicted d tale of their beautiful relationship...

Tat was another fab update...
They r tied together... Tat amulet part was done beautifully...
There is some MU hoping it would get cleared but if it does, will they ever be happy???? Living with the thought tat the other doesnt reciprocate there feelings is better than the thought of being wronged by themselves into believing so...
Lovely part...

Originally posted by: yappingduck

the story takes interesting turns and with each update, a new revelation is out that makes it fun to comprehend the story

There are questions, there are emotions...all unsaid

Originally posted by: palindrome

Their beautiful past ,increases the pain of their present tenfolds for me..

I am really waiting to know the reason behind their separation..

because she had professed her indifference towards him years back.

I can smell a "misunderstanding" here...

Loved the "verses"at the starting and the "end"..

and Don't thank me yaar ..Your story deserves more readers,moreover,the wonderful readers here deserve to read such wonderful tale...

Keep up the good work dear..

I have not watched the vms yet..I bet they would be as good as your words are...😊

Why, Thank you!

Originally posted by: Diva7

no doubt last two chapters depicted d tale of their beautiful relationship...

ok question hour ... they were so gud together, thn y all dis ??? how, when n where they met fr d frst tym????

n VM ws luvly ...will definitely watch other vms fr sure😊

awesome chapter luvd it😛

The last two chapters were the heart of their past.. Yes, they were great together, in love, perfection personified!

Originally posted by: ar_art

Tat was another fab update...
They r tied together... Tat amulet part was done beautifully...
There is some MU hoping it would get cleared but if it does, will they ever be happy???? Living with the thought tat the other doesnt reciprocate there feelings is better than the thought of being wronged by themselves into believing so...
Lovely part...

Thank you!

awesome update...so does that mean she had some role in them parting away from each other...eagerly waiting for the futurre parts...continue sooon...thanx a looot for writing this story😊

Every update seems more beautiful than d other...

beautifuly written..
i just luv maan's character here...