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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi sheen😊

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Hi Lily 😊
Ekdum Kattu Patakha 😉😆
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( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )





Part 65


"Where is Maan?' Geet was thinking while doing her kitchen works when Nakul came and said Maan has called her in gym.

"Gym me? But what is he doing there!!' she wondered and left for there.

"Maan!' she called his name as it was empty inside, no one she could see. "Maan are you there!!'

But not any sound she heard. After finding him for fairly five to ten minutes she left perplexing and worried little. She also checked again in his room but he was not there too. Disappointedly she came back.

After an half an hour again a servant came said Maan calling her on terrace. Wasting no time she runs there and called him but for her dismay Maan was not there also. Now she started fuming with this hide n seek of him.

"Oo ho! so he is taking revenge from me. Now I will show him who wins this game' With determination she returned back in kitchen and when again someone came and said Maan is calling her in study she didn't response anything. Though her heart wanted to go and check if, he was really there but mind scolded her.

It was dinner time when Geet and Dadi were sitting in dinning and chatting when suddenly Maan appears and took his seat.

"Aree Maan why did you come here. You should be in your room Beta take rest'

"I don't need more rest Dadi I'm fine!' And he looked to Geet who was burning inside and was sitting silent, listening their talk. Maan smirked seeing her fume that increased her anger more. She turned her face and had food stealing glances in between and every time found, him looking at her with fun eyes. Though she was so eager to know what was running in his mind but did not show.

They finished dinner and Dadi went in room saying good night to both. As she left Geet also pushed chair back and begun to leave but expected him to stop her but no! He was casually engrossed in his plate. Geet was hell irritated with his this cold expression and she left finally glaring him, being mad.

"What does he think of himself!! One he called me two times.. no! three times here and there and now not even looking at me. Babaji, see! How my leg is paining because of him going up and down and he.. I will not forgive him not at all!! He will have to see my anger this time. Geet just ignore him okay!! Did you forget what Dadima had said!! Hmm!! I will not talk to him!!''

Geet was hell annoyed and angry with Maan. She was dashing utensils in anger which was making loud sound.

"Geet don't throw my poor utensils!! What I will eat in tomorrow!!''

She saw Maan who was stood there at door of kitchen with crossing arms, she just felt like bang same bowl on his head but then calmed down her wild thoughts. Without answering him back she crossed him and left to her room, with a loud thud she closed door. In anger she did not manage to walk properly and hit with a chair in dark. "Ahh!!' she clutched her feet in pain but did not forget to curse Maan for this also.

"Babaji why you are doing this with me'

"What Babaji done Geet'

Her eyes widen in dark to hear Maan voice. Limping she reached to switchboard and turned lights on but it did not work. She tried many times did on and off switches but no lights were working. With hell irritation she pressed all those switches but no lights were going on.

"Babaji ab isse kya ho gaya'' she was fearing in dark when she felt someone was there with her. She could hear his intimate and loud breathing and she knew well, who it was. Though she felt calm after having his presence there in dark but decided not to show him.

She heard his footsteps, coming closer and finally smelled his scent and then she heard his deep voice,

"Lights will not work Geet!'

Geet turned toward his voice confused.

Geet, I want to tell you something.' Maan spoke very close to her ears that she gasped.

"Kya' she could only whisper

Geet heartbeat was becoming high with his every move.

"I'm getting married Geet!!'

Geet- Mean?' At once she couldn't understand what he said. And why he said "I am' it made her perplexed.

"It means that Dadi has fixed my marriage with a girl'

"With whom!' she knew it was she only still wanted to hear from his mouth. Her heart was beating in weird manner.

"You want to know about her?'

She nodded hesitatingly.

Maan smiled. He walked to a candle which was kept in room and enlightened it. In its mild light he stared her.

"She is the most beautiful girl of this world. Her eyes shine in dark like Moon shines in night"

Geet shied down her eyes in response hearing his words and his eyes which was giving her a lively sensation in heart.

Maan went to next candle and enlightened it. "When she smiles in shy, colour of dusking sun reflects on her cheeks which lead to my rushing heart"

A shy smile forms on Geet lips and her cheeks becomes rose scarlet.

Maan slowly lightened another candle and stares her blushing face.

''When she fights with me I can see those veiled love for me in her heart which she never discloses"

"When her lips kiss my name while saying it, my desire increase to taste my own name from her lips"

He walks to her. Geet gaps in anticipations. He comes closer and removed a swirling curl from her forehead and stared them with firm eyes.

"When her hairs touch her skin I feel like to do envy with them. It's my finger possession only no one else."

He moved closer and brushed his lips on her forehead then both eyes.

" I love when her skin cuddles toward me when I touch her with my pouring love''

He kissed at corner of her mouth and whispered there.

"I love to feel shiver of her lips against mine''

Geet had totally lost her sense with this intimacy. She closed her eyes feeling so weak to be stood against him with proper balance, without any fall.

"Geet will she accept me, will she be mine only, forever''

He raised her face holding chin. Geet opened her eyes and stared him who was waiting for her reply. She shied down her head, rested on his chest and nodded. Maan held her tight in his embrace, like never ever they will be parted from each others arms.


Precap: Little Romance Continues 😳😳 & Geet is angry with Maan because of marriage delayed date


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Love Maaneet moments...
Naughty maan teasing his angry Biwi...Giggle
But he knows how to Manofy her...so sweet...Thumbs Up
He is trying his best to make every moment of
their Marriage Bful for Geet...Blowing Kiss
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