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Posted: 11 years ago
Harika, brilliant, I am sorry that I am reading and responding late to your stories... presently travelling and work is killing me sorry😭😭😭

oh so does maan want his uncle also in jail thats the teaser abt hmm interesting 😊😊
so poor geet she is been tortured 😭😭
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

its going intresting n dangerous too...

so geet reached their alone n now maan traped her...

now let's see wht wil maan do with her on tht place...

or geet's nxt plan for shiljanath or tht lil girl escape...

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Posted: 11 years ago
as expected geet's friend is at wrong but her greedyness is death for geet i think maan doing some thing behind SN
he is in revenge phase but geet came inbetween i have this doubt also his prey is geet only


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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser is really interesting hope maan not playing any cruel game here
nor maan's uncle which causes the distruction
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awssuummm update n teaser dear
Edited by 01aaradhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

Harika, brilliant, I am sorry that I am reading and responding late to your stories... presently travelling and work is killing me sorry😭😭😭

oh so does maan want his uncle also in jail thats the teaser abt hmm interesting 😊😊
so poor geet she is been tortured 😭😭
update soon



thats ok yaar take ur time and comment <3

happy travelling😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh meri jaan se bhi pyari di eagerly eagerly eagerly eagerly eagerly waiting for d update di 😳
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PART 7:
read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!


Memsaab yaha se rasta gaon jaata hai aaj toh waise bhi koi bus ya train nahi hai ... aap chaho toh aaj raat hamare yaha mele mein aasakte ho, the lorry driver pepped out of the window. Her lips curved into a smile, she stepped up to reach him. The driver was an old man which is what geet loved it even more,


Dadaji chalo, geet said in excitement. Her work was done, but the problem was that she couldn't call priya to tell her about what happened ... due to the bad signal. She laughed in happiness, feeling proud on self.


@Village,

It was the time sun was setting, people were busy making arrangements for the stalls ... she went inside the hut of the old man. His family welcomed her with a warmth, geet admired them so much ... yeh hamara pota hai, he introduced the little boy to geet.


The boy and geet bonded well, she freshened up and left with them to the mela wanting to see the ram leela that was to happen as said to her.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLIQzxgFeNE[/YOUTUBE]

Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn


She saw the goat being killed and offered to the goddess, for a minute geet's heart wrenched to see the sight, the bullets were fired followed by the proffer. The dancers came taking over the celebration,


Re khat-khat haan khat-khat
Baaje dastak woh na ab tak aaya
Re tab se haan tab se
Haan dekhe raahein
Ki ab tu khol baahein aaja
Umad-ghumad ghumein
Re machle re mora mann
Goonje re baalam ke bol


Hamare saab aagaye ... people gathered in excitement to welcome their God ... their Almighty. Every year it was their custom to celebrate their festival with their Ram!! The man who saved their village and villagers. Who adopted them when they were facing a difficult time, Maan Singh Khurana!!


Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn


The chillim lit, the people flocked ... the kumkum was thrown in air and then it was put on his forehead. The old woman who treated maan as her own son came forward and kissed him over his face, hugged him in love and respect. Maan was made to sit ... A place where they would only see their god.


Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn


She danced her heart out with the dancers following them, their steps ... Her almost stopped seeing the gathering making a man sit who was watching everything with eyes blinking like that of a tiger. Ready to get his prey, she got frightened seeing him. A shiver ran through her veins, her body percolated with sweat. Did he made out what she did in the afternoon??

"Lili lemdi re
Leelo nagarvel no chhod
parbhu parodh na re
Maar gher uttaara karta jaao
Utaaro nahi karun re
Maar gher Sita juve vaat
Sita ekla re
Juve ram-lakhsman ni vaat ."

Meaning:
a green lemon tree
a green nagarvel (the one which is used for eating pan) plant.
god(indicating a person as respect) please visit our house.
have a stay at our house.
and God say's he won't be able to stay
as Goddess sita is waiting at there place.
Goddess sita is alone
and also waiting for god Ram and Lakhsman.

She turned around holding her duppatta, the typical traditional dress of the villagers seemed really sexy on her. Maan didn't miss the sweat beads on her waist which were draining so badly. His desire churned with a want ... his hormones didn't know that such hunger would ever be existing!! Maan got up looking her walking away. He followed geet,


O pal-pal re pal-pal beet'ta jal-jal
Naach ab chal aaja
Re tharr-tharr tharr-tharr
Haan kaanpe tharr-tharr
Haan darr darr jee se darr ab na na
Baagon mein bola, bola re bola
Morey badla re dil ka bhoogol


You cannot arrest me inspector ... tum logon ko nahi pata maan tumhe nahi chodega!! Nath warned the police who were putting handcuffs on his wrists. He was sure maan would take him away from this situation, he wont believe his deeds that he had been doing since years. How will he know?? He keeps himself busy all the time ... this is what Nath thought.


Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn


Maan held her wrist and pulled back in aggression ... she gazed his grip and then his back which seemed like an enigma. For once she thought he was truly for the mela, but now her doubts got confirmed that he knows ... she put his uncle in jail. Probably the police were bought by maan?? He might have bribed them??


Hey dhin tadaak dhin tadaak
Aaja ud ke saraat
Pairon se bedi zara khol


Maan threw her on the dancers and yelled ... nacho, I want to see you dance ... I want to see you smile ... I want to see your body dripped in sweat, alluring me.


Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhum dhaayn
Nagada sang dhol baaje, dhol baaje
Dhaayn dhaayn dhaayn dhum dhaayn


Maan snatched the revolver from one the goon and set the trigger on geet's forehead ... dance!! Warna mujhe khud pata nahi chalega goli kaha se chuke niklegi,


Leeli lemdi re
Leelo nagarvel no chhod
Parbhu parodh na re
Maar gher uttaara karta jaao
Utaaro nahi karun re
Maar gher Sita juve vaat
Sita ekla re
Juve ram-lakhman ni vaat

Hey... ho dhol baaje!


Her mind went blank with his behavior so was the villagers as neither of them had seen maan this way. He was not the maan they knew!!


What do you want?? She asked without any fear, looking at him ... with an intensity he was holding inside him.


Agar Nath ko police ke hawale karne ka aap yeh sazaa doge toh mujhe manzoor hai ... she finished with a determination. Geet didn't know if it was a wise idea but one thing that her heart was saying, this man isn't what she was feeling!! He would not kill her ... not even in wild dreams.



Tumne yeh sab karke sher ke muh mein haath daali ... I am impressed girl but I don't share the things I like with anyone!! So it doesn't matters if he is in the jail or out of the jail but I am gonna get you by hook or by crook, he pinned her against the wall and dangerously squeezed her neck ... tum nahi jaanti but if you could succeed its only because I helped you out ... the last words of him hit her head shocking her beyond words ... why did he?? That was why it all happened so easily!!



Half of his words seemed a puzzle to her ... what did he mean by ... but I don't share the things I like with anyone!! So it doesn't matters if he is in the jail or out of the jail but I am gonna get you by hook or by crook, why did he say it??


She was lost in her thoughts when few woman tied her hands and legs with cloth pieces, geet struggled to let go off but she couldn't.


Soon geet was carried and placed in the car, she couldn't even shout ... no one came to her rescue, every one simply watched the Ram Leela that was happening!! She fainted when she was given a heavy dose of sedative.


@Jail,

Nath: I want to speak to maan ... police please let me make a call to him ... Nath screamed his lungs out. But their ignorance irked him, the whole night passed there was no sign of maan. He couldn't even sleep a wink, he was beaten up badly by the police without any piece of cloth on his body. They gave him a third degree treatment, they tortured his every nerve and the person who made this happen was the one whom Nath was expecting to save him Maan Singh Khurana!!


*******


Kabse geet ko phone karne ki try kar rahi hoon woh utha nahi rahi hai ... priya got worried. Her guilt began to eat her up ... but the way her sister held her, she relaxed and told herself geet will be safe!!


Was geet really safe??


Precap: The hunt begins!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ooye haarikA
maine to update ka sandwitch banaa diya
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Posted: 11 years ago
bechaari geet
puzzal game start for her

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