If Only You Saw Me (8) - Page 85

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh really... then start I too want to read some of your shayaris 😉

But you know na Mayyo never updates on Sunday as she types on sundays... 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

If it wasn't for you all, this story would have still been in the notes of my iPod with only the first chapter written. So thank you! 🤗

I should seriously thank all those who compelled you to start writing this story... 🤗 I would have seriously missed out on such a beautiful story... 😊

You don't mind if I take even more time for the chapters? You sure? 😆

Ab I know you will never make me wait more so no issues really... 😉 On a serious note I really don't mind waiting as I know there's something coming worth the wait. 😊

If the person is like Maan, I doubt anyone will be able to see him gloomy! 😳 And I'm going to wait for you to disclose that list.

I did disclose some what of the things on the list... & the list is too long, with each update some thing always gets added...

I think every person who portrays to be a lively and mostly childish person has a very mature side to him. That is how Ayush is to me. Glad you're liking Ayush and Anaya! I hadn't really thought much about AA going on a date because I was so busy with the leads. 😆

Yes... Even I've met someone like Ayush. So I get it. I would prefer you be busy with the leads as next on the cards is the Date (Real) followed by a confession & proposal... With offcourse acceptance...

Yes, they're equally attracted towards each other and most of the times, aware of it too. I know about libraries being the auspicious places of the ignition of love stories, courtesy TV and films, but this one story started from the common room. 😳

Awareness is the first step to many things to follow... Library love stories are great to watch & give the viewer a great break from stress... 😉

He's absolutely adorable for me with all these little things you've mentioned! 😊

Name someone here who doesn't adore him...

She trusts him and he lives up to her trust... 😳

Glad to know that you liked it! I wasn't sure while writing, how it all will turn out as a whole. 😊

Probably, yes. He has a long way to go. But does he have enough time to cover that long distance?

Yes time is less, but never mind with the steps that he has taken in last few updates & since this story started hope still is alive... 😊

Ab tortoise bhi toh kabhi na kabhi qadam aagey badhata hai na! 😉

For Maan, the confession, the words he spoke, it was all real. The 'pretence' was just a cover to get his feelings across. 😳

I loved the whole date... my tortoise is making quite a progress ... proving somewhere that slow & steady wins the race... 😆

I hope soon comes sooner!

Thank you Twinnie! 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetkj

a pleasant surprise turned down into a shocking news.!! 🤢

Originally posted by: dqno1

What should I read?

no one is updating...

Dad is resting...😕

Mari are you bribable for a teaser?

😊

Originally posted by: Onir

I know ... Mayyo ek teaser de de... 😊

@Avi: so enjoying your time ... My role has got reversed as that of yours...

Originally posted by: dqno1

How?

Yes enjoying... I cooked so much since morning... so they just had a heavy lunch.

Once Dad comes everyone comes to visit and we have to go to the whole social rigmarole too.. so dinner somewhere lunch somewhere b'fast somewhere else...

I am itching to write some more but not possible right now...

Originally posted by: Onir

Mom and Granny have gone to Mangalore for a week for a holiday...

So I'm left as the only female in the house, with Dad & bro...

So all the cleaning & up keep has come on me... while my brother keeps making a mess. Men are such a mess I tell you. Only good thing is that Dad is cooking.

Oh great! Enjoy your time with your Dad. Have lots of fun. I know visiting relations & all the other things sometimes is a little tiring but yet fun. Don't worry about writing you can enjoy for now. We will bug you later (To think of it you're so sweet that we never have to bug you... 😊)

🤗