MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 3,4 pg19,20 july 3 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: prerna1

congrats on the new story dear
seems interesting
continue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
loved the update...
wonder who tried to harm geet...
waiting fr more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Congratz on new story dear
interestng concept
hope geet wil be fn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ash1991

loved the update...

wonder who tried to harm geet...
waiting fr more...



thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Superb start !!!!
geet fighting for her life :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2


Emotions never counted for him..he was a tough and ruthless soul who just knew and thinks of himself his everything was just related to him and his family that only counts his daadima.. his life was just a perfect for any non human ..he never had feeling she knew but what were those emotions that he felt when she was in his arms dying'she was counting her every breath to live and he was helpless the multi millionaire couldn't help but to see her life going away '

She was his .. her every coming coming breath was his..her life was his' in short she was the only thing he wants know' till now he never let her feel her that she was a part of mansion.. a part of his life..though they were husband and wife but she was just the only one who always fulfills her duty towards him as a true devotee to their relation'

Maan looked through the small glass she was almost losing' he never wanted her to go..if she was there then he will be the one who will win every battle of his life.. their life' he was in a deep remorse his all earnings were infront of him the pain the unwanted wounds he had inflicted upon her were in front of him'

He was a selfish

But she was selfless

He lived for himself

She lined for him and was somewhere ready to even leave him for him '

Eyes red ' tears fading his view'

He wanted to cry..he wanted to hold her and tell her that he was wrong..MAAN SINGH KHURANA was wrong' she was right he still remember her

"

It was after two months of their marriage 'maan was all aloof he never tried to come near her or even talk to her they were complete strangers for each other' infact he was distancing with her every second'every minute he never lets her do what she wants'he was a perfect stranger she know..

Ajnabee na hokar bhi ajnabee'

Geet was feeling like she was unwanted ..she was not needed in the house ..he was aloof ..her only support was daadima..she was the one who talks to her ' she dines with her when her husband was all the way busy in his own personal life where she was never included..for him.. his life counts only him'

Geet was frustrated that day , they were to go at a relative's place ..both of them were invited and she was all ready ..she was waiting for him..but when he came he never even looked at her..maan was all drowned in his work..for him this marriage was just to please his daadima and that he did.. but the main problem was that the girl he choose to marry was her ..and he himself told daadima that he will marry her only because she wants him to get settled..his own life emotions nothing mattered to him..'

Their was no love..no infatuation from his side but a certain deep attraction towards her that made him to every time she came 'maan looses his himself unaware to himself that he was falling for his wife'

It was eleven when maan arrived .. geet didn't questioned him..she was all ready and irritated by his behavior but still she never even opened her mouth for him.. silently she went to arrange dinner for him'

After good fifteen minutes she came with his dinner but maan ignored her and went to his study..

This was the first time she felt neglected and unwanted' but still she never said anything'.

"

Maan came out of his thought ..every second he had hurt her' every minute he was responsible for her gloomy eyes.. he knew she cries every night ..though they never shared same bed but his eyes his mind was always on her'. GEET'

She was loosing herself..maan knew that he wanted her..he will never let anything happen to her' he was somewhere responsible for her condition she shouldn't have came infront of him'

LAG JAANE DETI USE GOLI'

KOI FARAK NAHI PADHTA ' KON HAI WAISE BHI USKE PAAS NO ONE' even his DAADIMA was not his..she was the daai ma of his father and after his parents demise she was only there for him'

She was more than a family for him'

Maan heard someone saying..

" PAAS KI DARGAH PAR JO MANGOGE WO MIL JAYEGA "

For now he was in desperate need of her' he couldn't see her loosing her life because of him'

Maan was stood rooted his legs froze the maan singh khurana who never believed in almighty since the day his parents left him will now go and ask and beg for her' yah his ego was there which was not letting him realize that he was just doing it for her' for her because his heart craves for her one smile..because it longs for its one touch'. Dil ka dharakna usi se toh hai uska' bas maanne se inkaar hai'

Maan was about to go when the doctor informed him'

Doctor: Mr. khurana I am sorry to say that the bullet had pierced on her left side of the chest and due to excessive bleeding she is not responding we can now only wait for twenty four hours if she still didn't respond then I am sorry we wont be able to save her'

Meanwhile yash had informed daadima.. she immediately came to the hospital still she was unaware of the whole fact that who tried to kill maan' and how did geet knew'

Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa.. Aa.. Jo bandishein thi zamaane ki tod aaya hoon Main tere
vaaste duniya ko chhod aaya hoon Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2 Aaya hoon aaya, aaya tera
diwaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2 Tera diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana Aaya tere dar par
diwaana -2 Tera diwaana, (tera) Tera diwaana, (diwaana) Tera diwaana, tera Tera diwaana Tera
diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2 Ye hai tera hi saudaayee, ye hai
tera hi shahdaayee -2 Tere ishq mein hai isse mar jaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2 Aa...
Aa... Aa...

A serene atmosphere was there'everywhere there were the solicitors asking for something or the other' he tied a crisp white hanky on his forehead and took the chaadar as an offering to the lord..

Heavy steps and turmoil filled heart..one side he was feeling relaxed and on the other side the constant fear to loose her'

Maan tied the mannat ka dhaga for her and her life'

He never knew how to pray but strangely today he just bow down and asked for his life '

Maan: geet ne hamesha aap ko maana hai.. uske liye use theek kar dijiye'.

His words were filled with pain' but the main thing that his eyes were saying were his own actions'.

Maan was going 'a fakir baba have him a black thread'

" APNE LIYE USE MAANG KAHIN NAHI JAYEGI WOH"

~!~!~~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~~!~!~!

Maan: cant you say me what you want

geet: why did you have to save me...


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Maan is totlly in love with geet now waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
😛

Now he is feeling guilty ...Super onion smiley 107
Hope he'll change now...Super onion smiley 118
precap is interesting...Super onion smiley 074
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: singh24

😛


Now he is feeling guilty ...Super onion smiley 107
Hope he'll change now...Super onion smiley 118
precap is interesting...Super onion smiley 074




thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Awesome.
Maan is goin thru so many emotions dat too in one go.

Conti soon

bt y did maan shose geet to marry? Reason...

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