THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 18

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

masaledar Maggie ko 😳😆

Kya masala milate rehte ho tum dono... 😆

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

you've got a point Onirji... magar aapko badi interest thi na Maggie's love life jaan-ne ki *cocking an eyebrow*

Ab tum dono besharam apni story sab ko bula bula kar bata raho ho to main kyun peeche rahu in shadows... 😛

Originally posted by: Onir

Kya masala milate rehte ho tum dono... 😆

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

chatpataka 😉

chatpata bhi... aur pathaka bhi...

Originally posted by: Onir

Ab tum dono besharam apni story sab ko bula bula kar bata raho ho to main kyun peeche rahu in shadows... 😛

Aur main toh tumhe advice de rahi thi for good relations... aur tum mujhe hi ... bhalai ka zamana hi nahi hai...

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

oho... acchaji 😳

Onirji bhalai ka zamana kab tha abhi hone ke liye... suna nahi yeh kaliyug hai baba... gor kaliyug 😆

Sahi kaha... tumhe bahut knowledge hai na kalyug ka... 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Sahi kaha... tumhe bahut knowledge hai na kalyug ka... 😆

Tell me something. How did my name end up in the thanking note? I hadn't even read the chapter or liked it when you put the note. 😆

And as for your note, ny suggestion is to keep it the long romance you're planning it to be. I'd love to read the contrasting love stories promised here!

Sabse pehle. Lovely song! I was never really into old songs but the ones you've been giving with these chapters have just made me love them. This one is so madhur. 😊

You took me to a dreamland Avi! I was so into the innocent way he pulled her up into his arms, the way he made her react and reach out for him, the way they swirled in each other's embrace that when it ended, I had this big smile on my face. I seriously had the fluttering feeling in my stomach. 😳

And when the dream was harshly interrupted, I was brought back into the painful realtor of a you g boy struggling to keep his father's and his grandmother's hardwork alive. There's innocence in him the way he wishes to not let his Dadi suffer, and yet at the same time, there's strong willpower, an active mind and smartness.

I especially loved his father's both advices that he recalled at very apt times. Offense is indeed the best defence. When you can't find a shield for yourself, counter attack the opponent! The other advise has me wondering about the man himself. He must have been a strong pillar, a man who'll stand by his point of view when he believes he's right. I absolutely admire such men and this is what has come into Maan as well, the strength to stand by what is right.

And the young boy makes an appearance again, after a boss deals with his employees. All I'm wishing right now is that he gets a chance to materialise his plans. I'm already in love with this Maan! Really want to keep reading about him. 😳

I forgot to mention in my comment to the previous chapter. The locket. It has my curiosity peaked and I want to know what story is behind it.

Loving the story Avi! So glad you decided to go on with it! 🤗