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sherleyangel

@sherleyangel

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

liked it

dont much tym for posting now

but i will post long later

but u keep on updating longer ones

gudnyt

sleep tight

continue soon

waiting

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Very interesting part
Especially t way maan took it for granted that those words for him
Not even once could he fathom t pain of her one sided love with no future
One sided love with an hope is still bearable but for her seeing anisha & maan
She had no hope no expectation no future
Just pain
Even now all she got is pain
He still doesn't seem to openly put in words wat she means to him
Now & always
Not once has he tried to share her grief that is very much his of losing t baby
All he is trying to do is entertain her
Take her out in trip leave her alone
Not once able to tell her wat she wants to hear
Wants to feel
Not wants does he trying to understand her pain
He is looking else not her heart that beholds !!!

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

finally things are falling good .Waiting for next part and who is the guest ????

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

awesome part aish...he found her diary and reminded that anisha too has one and now he can find out the reason behind her behaviour.

loved the verses wrote by geet...they were so perfect for the situation can describe her feelings very clearly.

loved how you described geet's state of mind, the fight bet heart & mind.

Who was there, why she shouted like that..?
cont soon dear...

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luvmg

@luvmg

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

geet read anisha's diary now maan is reading geet's

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

waiting for an update...

and time for new thread

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Geet's pain and silent treatment is really hurting.

What is annoying is that since coming back home Maan has not been fully devoted to her... this part was better as he is making some efforts... but I really feel he needs to be with her 24x7 now. Him jumping to work in between is not looking like a good idea.

I wonder who the guest will be... i'm sure it is a stray dog or some other domestic animal.. and that for sure will help her this time?

Please update soon dear...