MG SS:mommy daddy's tale part 2 page 15 april 6 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
awesome...
am liking this...
the precap is excellent...
looking forward...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrates on new ss dear
fabulous start
thanx for the pm
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice ss...
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plz pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulation for new MG SS
nice, lovely intersting start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for the new story dear

awesome start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting start...

now children will know their parents love story...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hei cute start...!!
I love Maaneet childhood stories always would wait for next part now :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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new start one new concept from Suhaana's mind...its really fun to read what u pen down..and waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2


Maan's princess was more than eager to know her daddy's tales.. for diya her mumma was lovely and sweet GEET KHURANA..her dadda's MISHTY which he fondly calls her his bitter sweet mishty .. and diya still memorize when she was five she asked her dadda's what's mishty and his dear dadda said that mishty means SWEET ..

WHEN DIYA WAS FIVE

Maan was tired after a long meeting he had a tough time in making the clients understand the need for having a small play area attached in the duplex that they were constructing… maan came and he tiredly sat on the couch.. he was loosing his tie..his eyes were closed when he found two small tiny soft hands on his forehead , a small smile played on his lips he knew that his baby was there , she couldn't see her dadda tired …

Diya caressed maan's head ..trying to gave some relief to him… maan wanted to stop her but he knew the moment he will try to stop her she will cry out loud and that will be not good for her… it could affect diya's health…

Recently they have got to know that diya is having schizophrenia and it was not good for his angel if she gets angry or depressed… diya was a premature child this has resulted in this type of depression…. Diya was standing on maan's lap and he was supporting her..

Diya when found maan's eyes closed ..

Diya: dadda is it hurt … diya will rub daada's head… as soon as maan found diya was about to grab a balm for him he stopped her .. he kissed her cute chubby cheeks… she snuggled to him.. diya rested her

head on maan's chest… she looked at maan with her same doe shaped eyes.. she was thinking something maan could sense and he will wait patiently till his baby will ask him what she wants to know….

Diya after fifteen minutes looked at maan she raised her head to see in his eyes..this was something his baby girl always does when she wants to know something interestingly important… maan pulled her to his face…

Diya giggled a little she was finding it ticklish as maan was tickling her so she should not get lost in something…

Diya: dadda what is mishty .. dadda say mumma mishty .what is mishty dadda…

Maan looked at her she was looking at him with her cute innocent eyes ..she lips slightly having a cute frown eyebrows twitched she was waiting for answer..

Maan didn't let her wait..

He while looking into his eyes answered her..

Maan: mishty means SWEET HEART … you know sweets… like diya eats lots of chocolate .. that's what mishty means…

Diya looked at maan with with wide eyes she was shocked to know that …

Diya: mumma is chocolate dadda…

Maan chuckled his baby princess was again struck at her chocolate ..he gave her two big bars which made diya to squeal in excitement ..she quickly made maan to peel both the bars and maan gladly did.. diya quickly went and gave one to parth … and within seconds she was again with maan.. now she was herself looking like a sweet chocolate…. All melted chocolate on her face..her little pink fingers licking the chocolate…

Maan: baby I don't know about your mama but I know a chocolate who is in my lap now…she offered her melted chocolate to maan and maan from her pinky finger licked as diya wanted…

PRESENT IN KITCHEN …

Diya : dadi tell us na..we want to know mama daddy's fairy tale… dadi see I have taken my medicine know ..please daadi..badi dadi you say na..

Diya was so excited ..and which made avantika to say the most exciting and electrifying story of maan's and geet's childhood which will was actually no less than a thriller and some time head ache for her as she remember her stubborn son..who was just five when it all started …

FLASHBACK

GEET HANDA ( 3 years)

MAAN SINGH KHURANA ( 5 years)

It was one of the newest and stimulating days..the bright morning which were chirping just to let the two sleepy souls know that its been a new morning and a new day for their first day at school….he stirred in his sleep making an irritated face..his mom had again set the new annoying alarm for him… he quickly get up and looked for that ugly duckling sound QUACK QUACK..GET UP MAAN.. QUACK QUACK..GET UP MAAN it was more than enough for him to make his calm mood mad..maan just hate duckings he loves roaring sound..just like sound of simba does and here his mom just did opposite..

Maan gave an angry glare to the yellow duck that was coming out of its house and just saying QUACK QUACK..GET UP MAAN… maan looked at it with a sulking face he wanted to take that duck from the cute and haunted house and place his roaring lion here in it and know he knew that today he wants a new alarm ..and he just wants it.. THIS UGLY DUCKING WONT WORK…

Maan get up from his bed and looked at himself in the mirror… he looked at his eyes..same dark complexion of his chocolate brown orbs..then he looked at his height .. daily maan see that how many inches he grew every night … that was what his daadima every night told him that if he will a good boy and will drink milk then the sleepy fairy will come and make him grew ..he will look elder and taller…well for stronger he will have to drink milk …

Avantika came to make her son awake and here she saw like daily she saw her maan was in front of the mirror… she knew if she will disturb his self drooling session then probably she will get a big angry baby glare from her junior khurana …

She thought to let him do what he wants till then she gets him all the things for his school..maan's clothes..that was a school uniform now..he was in montessory II and next year will be in first standard… but still her son looks like he is superior of all and she sometimes chuckles knowing that no one can mess wih maan singh khurana that he proudly calls himself… MSK.. well the junior khurana have a aura of perfection around him that no one can neglect…

When avantika was about to look at maan 's school bag and the books that needs to be arranged she found everything set her little maan had done everything…

AT HANDA"S

Handa's were a well known name in the city the textile and chain of hotels that they own were of no match with the lavish and luxuriant life they were having … the lush was of no compare but still the basic roots of their life their own rituals and culture the traditions were still intact.. RANO HANDA the younger daughter in law of handa's wife of mohindar handa ..she was the lovely wife and an obedient daughter in law..and not to forget her darling's sweet mama… geet's mother the three year old cute chirpy naughty baby girl of mohindar and rano…

Rano was busy in kitchen with simran her sister in law ..she was the wife of rajinder handa .. elder son of sukhdev handa and jaya handa.. having two songs elder one brij handa 6 years and younger one prem handa 5 years . doting brothers for their only sister geet…

As simran saw that rano was going was hurrying everything she knew why she was doing all this she wants to wake up her baby princess for the first day of her school geet was admitted in ST MARGARET .. in prep or pre montessory…

Simran took the bowl from rano's hands..rano looked at her in confusion..she wanted to finish all this before geet makes all mess with her tantrums…

Simran: rano tu jaa ..geet ko uta.. I will do all this…

Rano smiled at her sister in law and quickly went to her room to wake her baby princess as she went she saw geet all cuddled up in her pink huge teddy the duvet was on floor and her two poys were all loose…

Rano quickly took the duvet and sat beside her geet she caressed her face ..and geet snuggled more to mR SWEETY .her teddy bear …she couldn't stand her distance from MR SWEETY..

Rano kissed geet's cheeks and geet just slept more ..rano knew today she is going to have a difficult task in her hand she is going to make her wake up ….

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NEXT: it was a sudden push that made her to fall down..her baby blue eyes were having tears ready to fall down…but the next second ..they heard..

THUMP!!!!!

He was rubbing his elbow… frowning and glaring at her

here's a new story on maaneet

DESTINY RULES...

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3521833/mg-ss-destiny-rules-pt-3-4-pg19-20-july-3




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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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