If Only You Saw Me (7) - Page 64

Originally posted by: dqno1

Na chodungi tera haath
Ummeed hai mujhe, marte dum tak dega tu mera saath

Bandhan hai ye tera mera, sukh dukh baantne ka
Na waqt hai abhi tera yun zindagi se rukh modne ka

Tu hi toh hai zindagi meri
Tujhse judi hai har ek saans meri

Na chodo mujhe yun tanha is safar mein
Tere sang jeena hai aur marna bhi teri baahon ke ghar mein

Phir se banayeinge hum wo khushiyon ka aashiyan
Jiske dekhe thay sapne, jahan jhoomungi teri khushboo mein, o meri jaan

Na chodungi tera haath
Ummeed hai mujhe, marte dum tak dega tu mera saath..!

Mari for for Room 508👏

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Jiski poetry ki tareef kar rahi ho, it's a 'he'.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Jiski poetry ki tareef kar rahi ho, it's a 'he'.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uhh... Why do we feel embarrassed to see our old writings? 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

I am not embarassed!

I am very proud!

That was the first post I made and to get such a gift as a first comment.

I was flying high!

Thanks again for make me feel so special...

Tu chupi rustami hain but chalega... kuch to hai...🤗

Originally posted by: sweetkj

😲😲😲

a 'he' on geet forum!!

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Let me rephrase:
Why do I feel embarrassed to read my old writings? 😆

But really, your work was the one which compelled me to write it. 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Avi, she res'd it in the evening I guess. Maine abhi tak wo start nahin kiya hai toh I didn't reserve a spot.

As for the next update, remember the once a week wala quota of mine? 😆