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chapter-75



Maan and geet kissed and made up for the fight quite literally. So, now maan was busy in niharofying his mishty, who was looking quite an item. But after this whole revenge plan, geet was suddenly feeling very shy in front of maan. Her dress was not helping her either. She was still in his embrace as he has not allowed her to parade in that dress in the hospital after her little stunt.

Maan was busy getting cozy with her, when something peeping out from maan's blanket caught her eyes. She frowned and concentrated and then it suddenly stricked her...oh...!!...so he works in my absence...!!...she scowls at him as he tried to bury his face in her hair and shrug him off. He frown and gave her a 'what' look. But she simply glared.

What happened, sweetheart...??...he said tucking a strand behind her ear, but she swat his hand away and got off his lap. Reaching the opposite end of his bed, she pulled out the file and waved it in front of his wide eyes...uh-oh...!!

What the hell is this, Mr. Khurana...??...didn't I told you no work till you are in the hospital...??...I even accepted your demand to take leave until this sandy fiasco is solved, but you are breaking our pact behind my back...she hissed angrily.

He sigh and then caught her hand, pulling her closer. She tried to wriggle out, but he didn't let go...its not like that, love...!!

Then like what, huh...??

I didn't want to upset you and this file needed my immediate attention. Dev or dad couldn't do much here coz I started and designed this project. I swear its the only file I am working on and that too just an hour every night...he was sincere, melting geet's anger, but dev's name brought another bout of anger.

Oh that stupid brother of yours...she gritted her teeth making maan confused...I wish I could knock his empty skull and break a bone or two...!!

Whoa...!!...lady Tyson, relax...!!...why are you cursing my poor brother...??

Oh please, that moron is no saint, okay. And trust me, if he made meera cry ever again, I m just going to follow through my intentions...she said recalling meera's sad face she witnessed in goa as well as on terrace previous night.

What...??...what are you saying, geet...??...meera is dev's friend too, he would never hurt her intentionally...maan didn't know where this was going. He was surprised at geet's words.

He better not...he knew meera's important in geet's life, but he also knew his brother...something must have happened...!!

But he didn't want to upset geet more so he tried to divert her mind...achcha leave all this...he took the file and kept it on the table...tell me from where did you got this outfit...??...I haven't seen this before...he murmured, his palm gazing her exposed skin on the back.

Its a gift from sam di. But I never got a chance to wear it...she eyed him mischievously and added...until now...and grinned receiving a grin back.

You are one hell of a minx, you know that...he dipped his face into her neck and nuzzled making her giggle.

Abhi toh you are giggling and laughing, but I'll see what you'll do when mom will see you in this...maan smirk arrogantly knowing how conscious she had become of his family after their engagement.

Don't smirk Mr. MSK, main bhi geet handa hoon. Koi kaam adhura nahi karti...she seemed equally smug.

Matlab...??

Matlab yeh ki aunty is not coming today. Mama and aunty have gone to some jeweller in the suburbs. Some khandani karigar...she shrugged and then smirked back...so, I have only you to entice...and winked at him naughtily.



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Sandy gulped down his drink in one go and slammed the glass hard on the table letting out a string of profanities. The man standing before him trembled inside, but didn't show anything on his face...

What the F*** you mean, you couldn't get through...??

The man gulped to ease his throat and replied in a low voice...sir, khuranas have tightened their security for everyone and MSK is having the top level security at the hospital. The doctors and nurses appointed for him have also been kept under strict surveillance. Its almost impossible to breach the security, let alone harm MSK...he completed shivering at the fear of his master's wrath.

Sandy didn't say anything for a moment and next minute the man drop dead on the floor as sandy shot him with his silencer attached gun.

Bloody losers...!!...I don't like incompetent people...he snarled at the dead body and then picked up his cell to dial a number. As the call get connected, he snaps...get this damn garbage out of here...and then paused before ordering once more...and bring me those clothes...!!

Soon, some people dressed in black got inside the room and took away the dead body. A man from the group came to sandy and handed over a packet saying...sir, the id and clothes...!!

Sandy snatched the packet from his hands and left room. He dressed himself in the clothes of attending staff of the hospital in which maan was admitted and pocketed his fake id. He parked the car at some distance and got down. He was in beard and moustache making it difficult to identify him. With a confident look he entered the building. But just at the reception he was stopped for identity check. The cop checked his id and then searched his body with a metal detector. A beep sound started near his waist alerting the inspector.

Abbey, kya chupaya hai...??...the cop enquired roughly. Sandy gave him a menacing glaze but answered politely...kuch nahi, sahib...!!

Shirt upar kar...the officer snapped making him fist his palm in anger. But his face gave away nothing. He simply lifted his shirt and showed the metal attached to the belt.

Yeh kya hai...??...the officer shook the metal, but it seemed immovable, most probably a design.

Arey sahib, naya fancy belt hai...woh ek film mein dekha tha toh...

Thik hai, thik hai...the officer let go of him...jao...!!

Sandy smile wickedly and entered the lift. The lift too had a policeman. No one was allowed to maan's floor, except for family and very few friends mentioned in the prescribed list. He knew about that, so he stopped the lift at the third floor and took stairs through the fire exit section. He reached maan's floor and saw a policeman standing right in front of the glass door of fire exit. It was at the end of the corridor where maan's room was. He took out a handkerchief and sprinkled chloroform on it. Stealthily opening the door, he grabbed the cop from behind keeping the cloth on his nose and dragged him inside the fire exit staircase.

He came out composing himself and entered the corridor. It was evening now. Sun was almost set, but the corridor was lightened. He reached maan's room. The corridor didn't had any cop for privacy purpose. He peeked in the room from the slightly opened door. Maan was on his bed, eyes closed...must be sleeping...sandy thought and then glanced around his room. There was no one in the room. He smirked evilly at being given such generous opportunity and slid inside. He took out a big knife from beneath the broad metallic design on his belt and moved forward. The design was a magnet from the other side, which was holding the knife in place.

As he neared maan's bed, his leg hit the side table by mistake. He immediately looked around to see if anyone got alerted. But no one was there. Examining the knife with a dangerous maniacal gleam in his murky orbs, sandy loomed over maan's resting body and raised the knife.



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Sneha finished typing the letter asked by dev and handed it over to him. She asked him for an early leave...sir, if you don't mind, can I leave early. I wanted to pay a visit to maan sir, today...!!

Okay sneha...dev answered distractedly, which surprised sneha a lot. He was always this charming person, smiling and flirting, though less than her Vicky...okay, where did that come from...HER Vicky...??...she chided herself mentally at her audacious thought. Just because Vicky is attracted to her doesn't mean, she has got the right to ruin his life...she thought sadly. She concentrated back on dev and found him tense and visibly shaken. Something was wrong...!!

She thought to ask him, but then dropped the idea thinking it might be personal to him and she was not that open and friendly with dev. She was about to leave the room, when dev called her from behind...uh, sneha...!!

Yes sir...??

When are you planning to leave. I mean for the hospital...??...dev asked remembering something.

Woh, I was thinking to visit the hospital on my way home. I would leave in 10 minutes...she answered.

Okay, do one thing, wait for 15 minutes more. Actually Vicky too is going to visit bro, so he'll take you there. He is coming here only to deliver some files send by dad...dev finished.

She was about to protest, but then thought otherwise. She didn't have a valid reason to oppose. She can't avoid Vicky and may be she can convince him to move on. She had been thinking of broaching the subject to Vicky, but didn't get time. It seem a perfect opportunity.

Okay sir...she mumbled and left the room. She was packing her things in her bag to leave when vicky knocked on her door...hey...he smiled at her and entered the room.

Hi Vicky...she smiled back.

So, shall we leave...??...he asked gesturing towards the door.

Yeah, let me just take my bag...he grabbed her purse and placed her things hurriedly.

Its okay, take your time...he said leaning on the wall and watching her with amusement.

No, I am done. Lets go...she moved to the door followed by Vicky. He opened the car's door for her to get in and slid into the driver's seat. After some distance, sneha suddenly notice a car following them from the time they left the office, coz it was behind them when they left the parking...

Vicky...she called out in a panic filled voice startling voice.

What happened...??...he asked glancing at her worriedly.

Woh, someone is following us. That black car...she gestured behind them. Vicky saw the car in the rear view mirror and understood.

Relax sneha, its the security...he answered smoothly.

Security...??

Yeah...that attack on bhai has made us to take some precautionary steps...he gave a side glance at her noticing her expression. He knew he can't divulge info about sandy. It may trigger her fear attack and that was the last thing he wanted.

But, you know...she started realizing something...I have seen similar car following me once I was returning back to my home last Wednesday...!!

Uh, actually...he didn't know what to say. Things were under wraps till now and maan had strictly ordered not to disclose anything...especially to sneha for it could frighten her. He was busy forming excuses in his mind, when his phone buzzed saving him.

After he finished the call, he found sneha busy in her thoughts and then turned to him to ask. He feared she would took up from where she left before the phone call...uh, Vicky, I wanted to talk to you about something...she said looking at her lap.

Vicky frown at her hesitation...what is it...??...you can share anything...he gave her an encouraging smile, but his smile faltered at her words...

I want you to move on in your life...her words were soft, but impact was harsh. He drew a deep breath and asked...and why do you think I should do that...??

You know Vicky, I am not good enough for you. You are everything a girl can think of in her dream man. You can get anyone then why should you settle for someone...someone tainted...she closed her eyes pushing back her tears. Vicky at once pressed the brakes halting the car making the security car to stop at some distance before them. He got a call from security, whom he assured and then turned to sneha.

She was looking down unable to face him...look at me sneha...when she didn't make a move, he lifted her chin and saw her cheeks wet by tears. It pained him to see her like that.

I have told you before and I am telling you for the last time, you are the purest and loveliest girl I have ever known other than doll. So, don't you dare demean yourself like this ever again...his eyes bored into hers captivating her...am I clear...??

But, its true...her voice choked.

NO ITS NOT...he snapped back angrily, but seeing her flinch composed himself...if you think you are tainted just because of that one goddam night than you should stay away from me...!!

She immediately looked at him with wide eyes and then nodded feeling worst. But he was not finished yet...I didn't say that because of you...she frowned not understanding.

What I meant was if you are tainted that I am the darkest, murkiest, dirtiest and ugliest person in the world and being associated with me will be a curse for any girl...he said in no nonsense tone making her look at him with surprise.

Its true, sneha, and you know very well about how many affairs I had in the past...he replied looking straight into her eyes.

But , that was your past...she protested rising to his defence at once...and you never forced anyone...!!

So, did you. It was your past and you were forced not the other way round, so how you are tainted and I became a saint...he completed rather frustrated.

Sneha remained silent for sometime absorbing his words and finally break the ice...you are not a saint...she murmured with a tinge of smile on her face, while Vicky looked at her shocked. And then both of them burst into laughter. Her eyes shone with happiness as she realized just how much this man cares for her.

After sometime, she controlled herself and said in her usual soft voice...I like you, Vicky...more than I have ever liked anyone. But this is very new for me. Can I take some time to understand all this...??

Vicky felt his face splitting into two by a huge grin as he answered...my whole life is yours...making her heart stop for a moment. He was most earnest in his reply, which brought tears in her eyes.

Thank you...she whispered, while he blinked assuring and start the car once again.


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Geet was busy splashing water on her face, when she felt some noise in the room. She was now covered in a jacket much to maan's relief as he didn't wanted the other doctors to feast upon his owned vision. She had given maan his evening medicine, which would have started working by now. So, she thought to freshen up and do some work which she brought in the morning with her.

But the sudden noise caught her attention...maan toh so rahe honge...who can it be then...??...she thought and wiped her face with the towel. She opened the door slightly and the sight in front of her was horrifying. Someone was near maan's bed with a knife ready to attack. Her heart lurched into her mouth.

Everything else forgotten, she marched to the person grabbing his from behind...Stop...!!...who are you...??

Sandy was startled with the sudden interruption and tried to jerk her away, but she had gripped his hand firmly. He was agitated and pushed her with full force causing her to hit the table hard.

Aahh...!!...she yelped in pain because of the collision and sandy turned towards her. He was shocked to see geet. All this while he was waiting to get her alone and now, she was here before him...helpless and alone. Maan totally slipped out of his mind seeing geet and his feet moved towards her. Geet looked up and found the attacker moving towards her.

Another bout of fear surged through her heart seeing the predatory demeanour of the stranger. She felt her throat going dry...shit...!!...she glanced at maan, who was still on the bed and her eyes filled with unshed tears of helplessness. But she knew losing surrendering herself to fear will only decrease her chance. So, gathering her wits, she tried to indulge him in talks...

Who are you...??...why do you want to hurt maan...??...usne kya bigara hai tumhara...!!

But sandy was not in a mood to answer her questions. He knelt beside her, while she was trapped between the wall and him...you are beautiful, geet...his voice was laced with lust and danger. She cringed backward feeling him nearing her. He smelt of alcohol and evil making her stomach convulsed. He raised his hand and traced her bare legs.

She immediately tried to pull it back, but he held her firmly in his grip. She looked around for something to help her and saw the flower vase lying on the ground just beside. It must have tumbled down when she hit the table.

She saw him closing in on her and grabbed the vase. With one swift move, she hit him hard on his face with the vase. As the vase was made of plastic, it didn't harm him much, but her powerful stroke did made his nose bleed.

F***...!!...he grabbed his nose backing away from geet and she took her chance to move. But he reacted much faster than she thought and grabbed her arm thrashing her back against the wall.

You bi***...!!...you can't escape from me...and lurched forward to grab her, but he could never reach her for the formidable shield in between.

Geet had closed her eyes tight fearing the worst, but felt nothing and opened her to find maan shielding her from the man.

Maan was in the initial influence of drug, when he heard some loud noise disturbing his sleep following by a shrieking voice, which he could recognize, anywhere in this whole world, even in his sleep...GEET...!!...he felt she was in danger, he knew she needs him, but his eyes felt very heavy. He moved his hands and pressed the emergency button to alert the guards. Somehow, he managed to open his eyes and sit up and then tried to stabilize himself shaking his head. He glanced around the room to locate geet. What he saw made his blood boil. Geet was trapped in a corner and some filthy man was hovering over her.

But before he could do something, he saw her smashing the man's face with the flower vase and him backing off. He got up to help her, when the man grabbed her again and came in between them, before he could reach geet.

His eyes were boiling with murderous rage as he pushed the man backwards and turned to geet...

Are you alright...??...he asked to which she nodded. Maan again shifted his focus back to the man and got up to tackle him. He was slight wobbly due to the effect of medicine and sandy noticed it too. So, he took out his knife once more and attacked maan.

MAAN...!!...Geet's eyes widened in horror as maan grabbed sandy's hand blocking his attack. But he was a bit weak and sandy had put enough force, thus injuring maan's hand in the process. Sandy once again raised the knife to attack, but noises coming from the corridor caught his attention. So, instead he stepped back and ran out of the room.

Maan too went after him, but sandy was fast to reach the fire exit. The guards came to halt outside the room seeing maan...

Follow him, he is in the staff uniform, with beard covering his face...my height. He has gone towards the end of the corridor...maan immediately barked orders to the guards, who at once marched towards the direction.

Sandy knew he could not take the same way. So he had already slid out the glass window above the staircase wall. The window had a narrow brick outlet below it, which was just below the old garage shed beside the parking lot. As it was only two floors, sandy took his chance and jumped.


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Vicky parked the car and got down along with sneha. They started moving towards the exit of parking lot, when vicky's cell rang again...

Uh, sneha...tum chalo main bas 2 min me aata hun...!!

She nodded and went away. As she neared the entrance of parking lot, a man dashed into her with full force.

Ouch...she fell on the ground due to the impact and then looked up at the man. She rubbed her arm and saw the man staring at her not even apologising. She felt a strange chill running down her spine as the man continued staring at her. Suddenly, both of them heard footsteps nearing them and to her relief as well as surprise the man immediately ran away.

Vicky came out of the parking lot and found sneha on the ground...hey, what happened...he asked worried...are you okay...??...tum niche kya kar rahi ho...??

He helped her get up, while she answered...woh, someone dashed into me...!!

What...??...who...??...he looked around to search someone.

I don't know. Forget it, Vicky, I am fine and he might be in a hurry...she murmured looking at the way he went.

Okay, lets go...they both entered the building.



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Here, maan was pacing in the corridor waiting for the guards to bring him some news. Geet was by his side anxious and shaken. Meera was standing beside geet giving her support. Soon, the guards came informed him of his escape...

Dammit...!!...can't you guys do one work properly...he lashed out at them making everyone flinch. Whole hospital was alerted and now some policemen and most of the guards were there...How the hell did he enter...??...what the hell were you guys doing out there...??

Sir, we checked everyone personally...pata nahi kaise...

WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN...??...If you don't know than who will know...??...maan was totally enraged. His anger was mostly coz their carelessness led geet into danger.

Bhai, what happened...??...vicky came to them with sneha behind him. They were shocked to see the chaos and knew something had happened.

Someone intruded in my room...he spat frustratedly.

What...??...are you alright...??...and doll, she was with you, right...??...you both are okay, right...??...vicky was totally shaken by the news.

We are fine Vicky, relax...maan rubbed his forehead feeling the medicines kicking, but forcing himself from giving in...I have called adi and dev. They will be here shortly...!!...he then turned to the guards and ordered threateningly...check every inch of the hospital and secure every corner. I don't want any mishap...!!

How can someone just barge in...??...vicky was worried as well as confused, with such high security someone managed to pry.

Soon, dev and adi arrived and maan briefed them about the situation. Adi, dev and Vicky immediately got into action, while maan dragged geet inside the room. He checked her from head to toe and asked with concern filled voice...tumhe kahin lagi toh nahi na...??...are you hurt somewhere...??...did that bas***d hurt you...??...he was getting frantic with worry and tension.

Maan, I am absolutely fine. Please, you need to rest. Your medicines must be troubling you now. Please sleep for sometime...she pleaded in almost crying voice.

No, I am not sleeping...he was stubborn not ready to sleep a wink.

Please, see...yahan meera aur sneha dono hain. Baki sab bhi kuch der mein aa jayenge...please rest...her eyes burned with tears as she hugged him crying.

Hey, its okay, mishty. I am fine. Don't cry, please...he wiped her tears and sat on the bed...see, I am taking rest now, okay. Relax...!!

She sniff and watch as maan lie down on the bed and closed his eyes, slowly drifting into slumber.



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Edited by shining_moon - 12 years ago
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nice...😊
it was scary..
wow first to reply...
Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago
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ossum dear
that bas**** have no guts to touch msk girl
and yes finally sneha giving a chance
update BTMD
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hope Sandy gets caught soon..
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Lovely... waiting for next update...
Sandy u r gone...
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i'm loving ur speed..

so sneha is moving on...

sandy..😡
finally he saw sneha...
is he going to harm her as well???

nice update..


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