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amazing update...
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maan is fine bt sandy still behind him...
can't wait fr sm sweet maneet romence...
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awesome update
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geet maan romance on air
nice bt sandeep ko kuch karna hoga
cont soon
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I m typing the next part...will post tonight😊

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chapter-74



The whole day went by uneventful much to maan's suspicion. He knew geet was not the types to sit back and not retaliate on being instigated. And her extra sweet behaviour was a proof of something nasty going in her mind. But she didn't created any drama for the rest of the day.

It was late night. Dev had come to give maan company and requested geet to leave for home. Armed guards and a trusted driver was already standing at the parking for geet. So, geet wished maan good night with a sugary smile and left to meet Meera, who had a night shift on the first floor. Finally, after bidding bye to meera geet moved towards the entrance only to realize that she has left her cell phone on meera's desk. Hurriedly she ran back, but neither meera was there nor my phone. She asked her collegue, who informed her that she might be on the terrace.



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After geet left the room, dev sat beside maan briefing him regarding some important deal. Maan, though was on bed rest, but he had got his laptop in the hospital, which he uses only in the absence of geet as she would never allow him to stress.

Dev, what is the progress regarding Mehras' Hotel construction...??...maan asked going through some file. Dev squirmed in his place not knowing how to break the news.

Maan looked up at his lack of answer and raised a brow...What...??

Bro, woh actually, dad has cancelled their deal. After this shooting incident he was totally enrage and didn't want to take any more chances...dev softly replied.

Maan closed his eyes in exasperation knowing his father would do something like this only. He opened his eyes and asked again...what reason did he cite...??

Don't worry, bro. Dad handle it well. As you were incharge of the project and this was to be completed early as mehras had pressed initially about their lack of time, dad used this agaisnt them and cancelled the deal citing your health problem being the reason...dev added with a smirk...I guess sandy was not very happy with it. This project was like an entry ticket for him in KC and he appeared all red...!!

Hmm...well thats good. But I was hoping to keep him near me. But it was anyways not possible with me here in the hospital, its good that dad took this step...!!

Maan went back to read the file, while dev began scanning the room to pass time. Then his eyes fell on meera, who passed the room.

Uh, bro...you read the file, I'll come in a minute...he said getting up. Maan just nod as he was busy in the file and dev left the room in search of meera. He then saw her taking the lift, but couldn't reach in time. He looked at the light blinking for the terrace so took another lift to terrace.

Upon reaching the terrace, he looked around for meera and saw her leaning over the boundary wall looking down.

Hey meera...he called from behind and when she turn to look at him went over to her side.

Hi dev, tum yahan...??...I thought you were accompanying maan...she tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear. Wind was cool and wayward.

Yeah, I was there only, but saw you passing by so thought to meet you. But if you knew I was here and even crossed bro's room, why didn't you come to meet me, huh...??...dev asked with an offended look and then added...are you avoiding me, meera...??

Meera looked here and there and then with a stronger resolve looked at him...no dev, I am not avoiding you. I had to give a file to a collegue on maan's floor and then when I saw that I had sometime before my shift start, I thought to get some fresh air...!!

Okay, so no avoiding. Good...dev smiled and leaned over the boundary like meera. But as his hand touched hers, she moved away and then thinking something spoke...

Dev, I wanted to talk to you about something...!!

Tell me...!!

I think you should stop meeting me...her voice was soft but stern.

What...??...why...??...dev asked totally perplexed.

I think it'll be better for your relationship with jiya...

Meera, you can't...

One minute, dev, let me complete...she cut in the mid...I know the problem was solved in goa and all, but the fact is that she is your girlfriend and she feels insecure when you are around me. Her anger and insecurity is justified as any girl would like to have maximum time with her boyfriend and being with me, you deprive her of that time...!!

You can't be serious...his voice was full of irritation.

I am serious, dev. I don't want you people to have problems because of me. Please try and understand...!!

Its ridiculous, meera. If jiya has some problem, she would tell me. Everything has been sorted out. Please, don't think you are responsible for anything...he pushed his hair back in frustration...it was a misunderstanding in goa and I am not going to part with my best friend because of jiya's stupid misunderstanding. If you want she'll apologise to you again...

No, dev. Why will she apologise...??...are you mad...??...she took a deep breath...there is no need for any apology. I just wanted everything better between you two...!!

Then trust me, meera. Everything is good and even if it gets messy I'll not lose our friendship over anyone's petty jealousy...he was loud and clear not leaving any space for further discussion.

He held meera's hand and said earnestly...you are very special to me, meera and I can't imagine my life without you. Please don't put such ridiculous conditions before me ever again, okay...!!

And before she knew he embrace her in a protective shield...I don't want to lose you, meera. Don't ever say that again...!!

She felt her heart weeping feeling his arms around her and hearing his heart felt confession. How easily he said all that, but can her heart survive being in his proximity and not expecting...?? she gulped her tears back, which had blocked her throat and said coming out of his hold...

Hey, alright...I am sorry, okay. I'll not say it again. Now don't make such a bad face, you don't look good in that...she tried to cheer him up masking her own pain.

Thats were you are wrong, girl. Dev Khurana always looks best irrespective of his circumstances. You know how girls used to swoon at mere sight of me back in school and even in college...he gave his charming smile making meera smile in return.

Oh please, stop flattering yourself and face the reality Mr. Dev Khurana...she chuckled and thats when her pager beeped...oops...!!...duty time. I have to go now...!!

Cool, I'll also leave. Bro must be waiting...both moved towards the lift and pressed their respective floor. Dev stepped out first and then meera went down for first floor.

He went to check on maan and found him working on his laptop. He made his way to the pantry to get some coffee for himself. He took the filled cup from below the coffee maker and then turn to go back to the room, when he saw geet standing at the door.

Geet...??...you are still here...??...what are you doing here...??...he asked baffled at her sudden appearence, when she had left some 15 minutes back. But instead of answering any of his questions, she came to him and said...

Stay away from meera...she said with a stern look on her face, while dev stood there dumbfounded. But then he thought she was again in one of her 'possessive best friend' mode...

Oh come on yaar, don't you think your dialogue has become boring...he chuckled and tried to move, when she blocked his path.

I am serious...!!

Her voice was very calm, but strict giving dev the feel that she was actually serious.

Whats wrong with you...??...and she is my friend as well, so there is no way I am doing that...he replied a bit agitated this time. He walked past her and was about to leave the room, when she blurted out...

I saw you both upstairs and I have been watching you in goa as well...!!

Dev turned at that and said...what are you trying to say, geet...??...if you are talking about the misunderstanding that took place between jiya and me then it has nothing to do with meera...!!

Oh please...!!...she let out a sarcastic laugh and continued...I don't give a damn to what you or that girlfriend of your do, but I'll not tolerate anyone and I mean ANYONE hurting my friend...!!

I can never hurt meera...dev retorted with equal vigor.

Achcha...!!...then what were you doing in goa...??...that night at beach, your closeness to meera, which led that 'so called-misunderstanding' to occur in the first place...??

Dev instantly remembered how he got carried away with meera. He knew it was wrong and so he apologised too, but how can he stay away form her...??

Meera is a very innocent girl, dev, and you know that very well. By doing all this you are just hurting her feelings. I don't want her to suffer a heart break...and then thought 'which she already is suffering'...you must understand that it may be normal for you, but not for her...!!

That was not intentional and I have apologised...he tried to reason with her.

Your apology will not heal her heart which will be severe injured due to your wayward emotions...!!...she came near him and said in a strict tone...first sort out your messy heart and know what it really wants otherwise you'll only hurt people related to it...with that she turn around and move towards the door. Once at the door, she stopped and said looking over her shoulders...

And one more thing, dev. If I find your girlfriend insulting or badmouthing meera again, it'll be my fist and her face. Better warn her...!!

Geet gave a murderous glare to dev and then left the room with a stunned dev behind.


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It was around 8 in the morning when geet arrived. Dev had left early in the morning. Maan was reading the newspaper and was quite engrossed into it. So, he barely raise his head and wished her. but all his interest in newspaper evaporates in thin air, when he realized what geet was wearing.

She was dressed in a blue mid thigh summer dress, perfectly showing her butterfly blades and impeccably white and satin like shoulders. Her long slender legs were on display due to the length rather lack of length in the dress. In short she was looking like a siren and maan's jaw was touching the floor of the private room.


When she noticed his reaction, she did a metal salsa at her first success and thought...just wait and watch Mr. I-am-so-disciplined...!!

She flashed her pearls greeting him a cheerful good morning...

Good morning, maan. Its such a bright day...and went towards the vase on his bedside table to replace the flowers with tthe ones she got for him.

Maan's eyes were stuck to her like a glue where ever she moved and he gulped a bit audibly. She turn to him with that sweet smile plastered on her face and enquired...so, how are you feeling today...??...see, I have got your breakfast...and flashed the big tiffen box in front of him.

He wanted to say something...anything, but nothing came out of his mouth. His throat was suddenly dry while his eyes were having the sight of heaven. She set the tray on the stand keeping it on the bed and started opening the tiffen. Soon the delicious smell of his favourite Italian and rano aunty's gulab jamun enticed his nose...

Umm...she moaned 'innocently' inhaling the sweet aroma of the sweet dish and exclaimed...mama, is just the best cook in the world. These gulab jamuns look yumm...!!

Maan gulped down another set of blockage in his throat hearing her not-so-innocent moan...god...!!...is she planning to kill him...??

Geet took out two plates and started serving the breakfast, but maan's total attention was on geet. Suddenly, a plate ful of boiled bland veggies and 'daliya'. His wide eyed enchanted look turned to a baffled frown in an instant...

What the hell is this...??...geet, why are you giving me all these...??...you brought Italian and some dessert, right...??...toh mujhe woh serve karo na...!!

He made a face seeing all the colourless as well as pathetically coloured substances on the plate. Geet again passed him a sweet smile like she was the angel of god and answered...

Oh ho, maan...!!...you know you are not allowed to eat heavy food. This is the food for you. Italian and gulab jamun toh mere liye hai, but trust me tumhara khana bhi mama ne hi banaya hai. Especially this daliya...and pushed the plate in his hand adding relishing in her sweet revenge...and by the way, we should always follow the rules, right...!!

OH...!!...so this was her plan...!!...this little imp...he glared at her now totally out of her enchantment as she gobbled down spoonful of pasta.

She saw him boring holes in her plate as well as her face and smirked evilly inside...hah...!!...in your face Khurana...!!...but her facial expression was that of a cute naive lamb as she asked him with the fakest surprised expression...arey maan, why aren't you eating...??...come on, there is no need to shy...!!

Shy my foot...!!...maan grumbled inwardly seeing her now savouring the sweet gulab jamuns...god, if only I knew she would do this. I'll not leave you for this mishty...he thought and then making the yukkiest face started stirring the food in his plate. They finished the food and then geet handed him his medicine which he ate without any whinning this time. Poor guy thought medicine to be better than daliya.

Meanwhile a nurse along with the doctor entered the room. Dr. Raina was a well qualified physician in his early thirtys. He was charming and quite handsome and geet was all set for her second strike. She saw the nurse with all sponge bath tray and smirked again...Oh, this is going to be fun...she mentally rubbed her hands in glee.

Maan too saw them both and thought finally he would get back at geet through the nurse coz he knew she won't pull a stunt in front of the doctor. But all his thought process came to a halt when geet stood up from the bed and stood in front of the doctor.

Uh, are you new here...??...last evening toh koi dusre doctor the...and then added with a smile and...a blush...and you seem so young to be a doctor...!!

Maan's ears and nose were flaring like that of a raging bull seeing his fiance openly flirting with his doctor. He closed his eyes and fisted his palm to control the burning urge to lash out on someone.

Geet saw all this from the corner of her eyes and smirked...now, taste your own medicine, devil...!!

The doctor saw geet and was thoroughly under her charm with one look. He gave her his best charming smile and forwarded his hand...hi, I am Dr. Sumit Raina and I am the attending doc for the morning shift. Generally morning shift meri hi hoti hai, but I was on holiday...!!

Oh...she gave him a coy smile and fluttered her lashes...please do your work...and moved aside to give him space.

Dr. Raina came to maan and gave him a polite smile...good morning Mr. Khurana, how are you feeling...??

'Feeling like murdering someone'...I am fine, doctor...he curtly replied and geet controlled her grin. The doctor went on checking maan's report and finally said...

Your recovery is really good. I am glad you have nice people taking care of you...he said eyeing geet and maan felt like punching the doc then and there.

I thought it was the responsiblity of doctors to make a patient well...came maan's acridic taunt to which doctor just gave a nervous smile...

Of...of course...he cleared his throat and then made some changes in the medicine...I guess you'll be fit to be discharged soon. I'll consult my senior and the in-charge of the case and let you know, mr. Khurana...!!

I want to be discharged as soon as possible doc...maan gave him a piercing gaze to which he nervouly nodded.

Anyways, nurse will give you the sponge bath. I think I should leave...!!

Of course...maan chiped in. Geet saw the doc moving towards the door and called out...excuse me doctor, let me come with you. I should give maan some privacy with his sponge bath...she said eyeing nurse and maan with a smile, but laughing evilly inside knowing the certainty of her victory.

What...??...where are you going...??...maan asked seeing her moving towards the doc.

Oh come on maan. You know nurse will give you a nice sponge bath, so I think I would talk for sometime with Dr. Raina here...then turning to the doc added...if you don't mind...!!

Of course not...came the instant reply making maan scowl in full term.

Maan just lost his patient and spat...just stay the hell where you are, geet. Nurse give her the tray, she'll give me the sponge bath...!!

But maan we should follow the rules...

To hell with the rules. Just get back here and do the work...and then he focused his heated gaze on the confused doctor and said in a warningly dangerous tone...and Dr. Raina, I can keep MY FIANCE well entertained so you can carry on with your work...!!...and added mentally...and keep your damn eyes off my girl...!1

His both message was well received by the doc, who nodded frantically and rushed out saving his life from the wrath of MSK. Nurse too reluctantly handed over the tray to a now grinning geet and left the room.

Geet raised her brow at maan and instantly quoted him...To hell with the rules...!!

What happened to the disciplinarian MSK, huh...??...but instead of answering he caught her wrist and hurled her on him, magically maintaining the balance of the tray. Both were nose to nose as he whispered threateningly on her lips...

You are in a mood to have fun, huh jaan...??...you got your quota full. Now, let me have mine...and with that he grabbed he neck in a soft but firm grip and attacked her delicious mouth which had turned sweeter than ever due to the gulab jamuns.

After taking his fill maan left her in a dazed state and warned again...do not ever pull that stunt again...his hand was still around her waist and he pulled her flush against him if that was possible and added...rules or no rules...you are only MINE...and once again captured her swoolen lips before she could come out of her previous dizziness.

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okay so here is the next update...a filler...??...you can call it, but the next part will have more movement😊...I'll update the next part tomorrow itself, so plzz give ur views on this one and comment😳

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anupam

P.S- I know the font size is small, I tried a lot to increase it but there is some problem I think. those who have problem reading small words plzz magnify it. I'll try again to increase the size, lets see.😕

Edited by shining_moon - 12 years ago
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loved geet's sweet revenge

and maan still working? even in hospital? let geet get to know about it

and dev should not bother meera again, she is really sweet and should not be pulled in mess by dev or jia
Edited by t_areeb - 12 years ago

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