FF: Destined Souls : Part 1 /Pg 16:16 April - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Awesome CS!!! 😉


i love Mayank n Mansi 😳

Maan n Baby Geet is just superb...😆


she i ssooo boootifooolll 😛


God could u ppl update frequently!!!

main tho spam karke karke block hi jaaaoungeee 🤣
Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Amazing CS

All the characters are unique and has their own struggle ahead and pictures are awesome.

The person who has selected is just fab.. 😊

But hope tat we get and update very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
awesome n interesting CS...
cant wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
mayank and maansi 😉 omg omg 😆 my fav and the most fav was my 2yr old maan and bachi geet waiting for the update jaldi jaldi dedo please😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Amazing CS.! 😊

Waiting to read more.! Update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
OMG I mloving the character sketch specially loved the couples parents Ammna/Rajeev and Ram/Gautami 😳...please continue soon ..eagerly waiting for the 1st update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
loved the concept
do pm me plz
wating
lots of love
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Everthing is just fantastic ..The prologues ..The character sketch..The concept😃...waiting ..waiting ...waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1


The Flight made a perfect landing at Heathrow Airport, Mohinder and Rano struggled their way out , Brij had all the while been engrossed with his baby sister, Rano's cousin had come for the receiving and they drove back home, the marriage celebrations were on full swing. Rano and Geetha chattered for hours, it was her cousin whose name paved the identity for her daughter. It was years after which they were meeting and night long they had been on talks, the whole house had slept , but he lightings of the house was no less than broad day light, a gang of trespassers saw the celebrations and decided to loot a little on their way, they slowly sneaked in through the back doors, Mohinder had been tired after the flight journey and was strolling in the garden, was smoking cigars, when he heard few abnormal sounds in the bush, he went near by to seek the owner of the nosie, when his eyes fell on the leap of crackers, he walked apast them ahead, and continued his walking session, the trespassers were alarmed with his presence, one of them took out his gun to aim at him so that they could get a clear enrty to the house, and would stuff their pockets with worth while belongings.


It was a peaceful morning at Andaman n Nicobar Islands, the jeep escorted them to the Miltiary quarters, Maan had dozed off during the journey, and Dev didn't leave a single chance to bug Mansi. Finally by noon they arrived home, the kids succumb to sleep while Mansi n Mayank got down on the job of renovation, the previous Army General had given up on service and this quarter was haunted for a decade, it was like almost after 12 years that some human treaded on these grounds to start a living again, his wife had committed suicide or it was portrayed like that , some suspected of murder by the local politicians who had threatened the General to burn down his family if he feeds the inside info to the vigilance Dept, somehow the case got covered up, but the local sheriifs still believed that this house was haunted with evil spirits and dreaded to walk this way. General Mayank never believed in all this woven stories and had decided to shift to Andaman for increase scale of pay, he was an ambitious person and didnt wanna let go off the chance.


The Parliament was in session today, Mr. Modi Dasgupta the black man as he was fondly called not due to his looks but due t his doings, he had done nothing good in his ebtire life, his every step would mean destruction to others, he lived a sadistic life enjoying his power and money to the limit of corruption , people addressed him beind his back as Yamraj, as his presence meant death to his enemies, he didn't shudder before he shot someone, he may have killed more Humans than an ordinary man would have killed mosquitoes in his entire life, but life and luck where always on his path, it is said that God helps the good ones, the righteous one but may be Modi Dasgupta was an exception to his rule.


NOTE : I have given out the basic information about all the 3 families around whom the story will revolve, Handa, Khuranaa, Dasgupta. The story will move ahead with leaps in between and will finally shape when the kids turn adult, till that the story will revolve around the 3 families just to show how the 3 kids have been brought up in life under what circumstances!


And this is the last time am giving the disclaimer :

Disclaimer : The above FF is a mixture of many Movies put together! Hope people don't point guns at jump at conclusions, it my copyright to write the way I dream for Maaneet, any coincidences in anyones life is purely co incidental and accidental but definitely not intentional.


Edited by Gurti_TheBrand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
sorry fro commenting late.. i forgot i had reserved it!!

but god ths FF looks scary... 😉

i mean deaths n robbery n stuff n black magic... gosh whatever it is gimme maaneet love story.. its all that i want! 😳
Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago

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