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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

nice update lovd geet friends

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cyberprincess

@cyberprincess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Hi Neha dear, I'm commenting after a long time, I loved your Inteha very much can you believe I almost completed reading it again over night without sleep yaar :) it was too too good, you have written it soo well and I trust you will rock the Darmiyaan, what you are writing is all realistic, as you said life is not a bed of roses , have to take one step at a time.

I was expecting Maan after listening to what Geet said will agree but after a lot of thought, the space is needed especially Geet is too young to start having any feelings for Maan but she has been mature enough to try and be financially independent not to give additional burden on maan, at that age it is also difficult to take some decisions like that!

Geet's confusion that he is not sad to send her to hostel is nice yaar, such expectations are little things which keep a relation sweet.

Maan is also very understanding and ofcourse very mature due to his age and also having feeling for Geet is also very fine from his side,but knowing Geet is small though he was broken initally he is trying his best to keep her safe.

I will be looking forward for the coming up updates, also I encourage you not to change the story line as you said, dont be sad and keep rocking as you doing now! Best wishes.

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

awesome part dear

i loved it

oh wow maan let geet stay in hostel

and the gang were amazing

next will be interesting more

please cont soon

waiting

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Regarding ur note---pls guys its a request don't warn d writers...let dem write on der own,...v r fan of der creativity n writing style...den y Persue dem to change it? D story will lose d charm...n whts will b d difference if dey r forced to write wht v wanna read? Where would b d surprise element? My pov...

Back to updt...m loving dis story more...I knw hurt n pain is der bt dats nt d Only thing...geet joined school. Maan has joined his office n all...things r gng to change a lot...m glad dat he accepted her request...to stay I. Hostel...dis will change der thinking...m nt sure of maan's reason bt it's gud...

N don't look forward for der love story unless n until planned by d writer...it's just too hard to think of 26 yrs guy n 16 yr gals love story...just coz he is maan, I won't thi k abt it...m in for shocks n surprises...

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Superb update. For once i thought he wont agree but was surprised and please do continue as you have planned dear. Want to see how geet falls for maan

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

maan itna khush kyu hai😕?

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

awesome update
liked meera's gang
continue soon

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#628

That was surprise actually how Maan allowed her to stay in hosel..? & he is happy with decision.. Why? Wantto know Maan's monologue abt his decision.. Hopefully this distance will make Geet understand.. Yes she is just 16 now.. Not much mature yet.. But still time will tell..Nice update Neha.😊

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

awesome update

so he allowed her to live in hostel

dont know will they both specially maan will be able to live away from her??

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#630

Neha, first thing, I am a little sad that u told me abt this FF so late...but I started reading ti but not able to complete all intial parts due to lack of time.

Sio as I have got the gist of the story I have decided to read the updaes as they come and also catch up on past parts side by side...otherwise it will ebcome chicken and egg situatioon and i will never be able to catch up...

i loved last two parts a lot...Geet has more amturity for her age and she is just trying to comprehend the best thing for both of them...Maan offcourse have become more attached to this relationship but is somehwre understanding her thoughts too...

awesome story and a very refreshing take on thier age gap and problems ensuing from that...