Kamini pehle prologue me rula diya tune to...But I m sooo sooo sooo happy for that...
The perfect start of the story... Loved it like anything...
and The poem...uff it took my heart yaar...
Same character with diferent storyline...
Hayeee mera veer... first to hugs for that...
and then dadisa of maan...
Aahaa here we gona get maaneet childhood moments...
That would be intresting to read...
and waiting for story to unfold...
Last about maan... Kuch to raaz hai jo dhundna hai...
Will try to guess... But sachi U took my heart with just prologue yaar...
If prologue ka ye haal hai to jab story aage badhegi tab kya hoga... :P
Kasien Kahen hume kitni mohabbat hai
Ruh me utar gaye ho itni chahat hai...
Dard me bhi bas tera dedar karti hu
Mushkil me bhi bas tujhe saamne paati hu...
Teri ek muskurahat dil ko chain de jati hai
Tu nahi hai fir bhi tu yahi mere dil me hai...
Tujhe bhulana to sadio tak namumkin hai
Teri yaadein jeene ke liye bahaut hai...
Hone ja rahi hu mein ab apne hi dost ki
Fir bhi uski na ban paungi jaise rukmini krishna ki...
Wo akhri saans tak mera saath dega
tumhari kami ka ehsaas fir bhi tadpaayega...
Kasien kahe ki ab ye dil kabhi kisi ke liye nahi dhadkega
Phir mohabbat ka naam shayad hi juba pe aayega...
Kaise kahe ki ye dard-e-dil usko bhi tadpata hai
Mujhe tadapta dekh wo bhi tut jaata hai...
Jaane kya hai mujhme jo mera dost saath hai
Kaise kahe bas wahi ab is dil ko samajhta hai...
Na kuch bole na kuch maange usne apna banaya
Kaise kahen Zindagi ko uski wo mere dard ke naam kar gaya...
Luv ya for such a superb effort and start of story...
Hugsss... Continue soon...
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