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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice parts
loved them
loved maaneet moments
maan loves geet but geet didn't realize her feeling for maan
they fight, they cribbed they lost in each other
and finally the twist
dev kidnapped maan and tortured him but geet try to save maan
and finally another shocking and surprising twist is maan is samarth khurana's younger son
loved it
but geet's reaction is justified
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updates

nice ones 👏

thnx for pm dear

ohh!! last one 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
LAST PART+ EPILOGUE

GEET stare him disgustingly. Her oceaned eyes are windows of her soul and Maan clearly read her round face and what she is feeling now. Eyes that at moment were sparkling with anger. Deciding to sort out her doubts he said,'Geet listen to...'

Maan even not able to finish,as she ran from there suddenly. Samarth raised his questioning brow and stare Maan suspeciously.

'Dad i can explain later right now i have an emergency.',Maan only confirmed his helplessness and ran after Geet.

Meanwhile Samarth recieve a call from his family.

'ha beta bolo kya baat hai?',Samarth asked from the caller.

'Dad is evrything ok?',his elder son asked.

'yes beta all problems are sort out,'he confirmed him.

'Dad pls aap pehle dadima se baat keejiye,wo kafi gussa ho rai hai.',Angad told him.

'Samarth where is my son? Baat karvaiye humari unse?',she commands rudely.

'ma Maan is not with me right now.',Samarth told her mother.

'kya matlab apke sath nai hai. Ek to humare mana karne k bawjood apne unhe yaha akela bhej dia.Aap jante hai unka dil kabu me nai rehta. Samarth agar humare bachhe ko kuchh...',she was hell angry and burst on Samarth.

'ma ma calm down. Maan is not with me right now but he is absolutely fine. Kuchh nai hua hai use. And apse ek baat kahu? apko badi fikar hoti thi na Maan ki canadian girlfriends dekh k,to mujhe lagta ab apko pareshan nai hona padega. I think ur dream of bringing Indian bride for Maan is going to fulfill soon.',he said contently,having no tension at all.

'Samrath beta aap kya keh rae hai hume kuch samjh nai aa raha hai',Dadi said angrily.

'maa main apse baad me baat karta hu sab kuch confirm karne k baad.',Samarth cuts the call and complete d formalities of PL.

Geet locked herself in her flat. Maan bangs the door but she aint intrested in heraing any more lies from him. She is very angry and wants to stay away,which is actually she trying to fooling herself only. Maan,who is use too of rock climbing and campaing. He go back side of her house and reached to the kitchen window through pipe. He entred in her house from the window and found her sobbing. Maan's heart sinks and he trying to persuade her. The moment she found him in her home her anger towered more.

'Geet listen to me.i can explain.',He saw her furious eyes and pleads softly.

Geet itched her and threw somthing on him. It was only the slightest moment but he noticed it and looked amused. He slant and saved himself. Geet conti.with it. Maan pleading and she throwing things one by one on him. In just a few mins whole marble floor is decorated with wall hangings,cushions,pillows, books,lamp shade and many more things. When she tired and her breath get halted Maan quickly grab her. Her creamy white cheeks turn red due to her anger. She weltering in his grip and making best to shove him away. Maan felt annoyed seeing her behaviour and to composed her he slammed his lips on hers
Her hands were pinned besides her head and her knees rubbing his thighs provokly as she sat on drawer table. Her eyes widned with sudden kiss. This man had a great effect on her. her all denials melts in his touch. Her lips parted beneath the pressure of his. when he deepened the kiss,he leave her arms,which went round his neck and,her whole body melting,she kissed him back. Her initial protest was stifled now. She flushed furiously while kissing when her knee hit with his hardness protruded againt the front of his jeans. She gasped into his mouth and could feel herself getting warm down below her v*****,which throbbed badly. His hands went to her full bossoms pressing and kneading them tenderly. He made her flew away in his world of passion. Maan parted and bend to devour her neck first. He moved down and she moaned loud as his mouth took her curve over her dress. He wants to remove all the barriers but he step back sencing her anger is vanished now.

Feeling shocked at her own behaviour,she felt embarressed at her own actions. Maan cupped her face and made her glance in his dark hysterical eyes.

'Geet pls listen to me now.i know you feel hurt with my lie but i have valued reason for this.',Maan's jaw stiffed and muscles tensed.

Geet's almond eyes are still wet. She remove his hands and argued,'you lied to me at every step. I agree i used you to make Dev jelous but never hide my any secreat from you. And you what you did to me? You too do the same like dev.',she again sobbing badly.

Maan again place his hand on his cheek and wiped off her tears.,'Geet mere paas or koi option nahi tha. Dev yaha pe gadbad kar ra tha or mujhe pata lagna tha wo insaan kon hai. Jab tumne apne friend k rup me mujhe introduced kia or accountant bana diya to mujhe laga ye opprtunity mere liye b achhi hai. Tumhari b help ho jayegi or mera b kaam ho jayega. Geet lekin insab k alwa maine tumse kabi jhoot nai bola. The moments we share are not fake.' his voice is broken and reflecting his pain.
'you too use me all the time and making fun of me.hai na?tumne soch hoga ye to hai bewakuf. Maan you had a family. You never understand how it feel live ur days alone,unloved and lonely with no partner and no family. First i trust on Dev but he used me for position and when i longing for ur friendship u too did the same.',she broked off.

His face taut,he demands,'Do you really wish we'd never met?'

she tried to say yes,but was unable to;completely wrought now,she burst into tears.

'oh hell!,i m sorry',pulling her into his arms,he cradled her dark head against his chest.

Struggling with sobs that kept raising in her throat,she heard the anguish in his voice as he repeated,'i m sorry,i m sorry... Dont cry my love,pls dont cry...'

she could feel the warmth of his skin and his thunderig heart bneath her cheek;could smell the clean male scent of him. Her all feeling for him suddenly came back like a tidal wave.

When he lifted her face to kiss away the tears she clung to him,and when he kissed her mouth she kissed him back with all the love that was filling her heart.
love you Geet.be mine forever. I promised i never leave your side anyhow.',gathering her into his arm,Maan held her close.

The look on his face wrung her heart and brought fresh tears in her eyes.,'no u lied again',she doubted.

He began to kiss her,tender,passionate kisses sweeter than anything. Betwwen the kisses he murmured,you mean the world to me. I love you more than i believed it was possible to love anyone. I wont deny there have been other women,but the way i feel about you is different,unprecedented the instant i set eyes on you,you affected me strangely,touched my heart...'

unbearably moved she took a deep breath and to stop herself crying teased plaintively,'promise? Tum jhoot to nai bol rae ho? Sabke jaise mujhe chhod k to nai jaoge?'

'promise',he said confidently glancing in her oceaned eyes.

Suddnly her tone turned commanding and she fists his collar,'or dusri ladkio ko b nai dekhoge?'

Maan chuckled and said teasingly,'except one.', she glared him and pouts. Maan adore her cute antics and whispered huskily,'dont you want to know about whom i m talking?(but she sat stiffly without moving. Maan get more closer and whisper in her ears)i m talking about our daughter sweetheart.'

His confession made her shied furiously and her long lashes turn down lower automaticaly.

'now miss Geet handa are you ready to become a mrs GMSK?',he asked softly with his all love.

She nodded shily.

'then tell me in you voice.'

'I Love You,'she said simply.

'That's what i wanted to hear,'he murmured,and kissed her again.

Geet wrapped her arm around him and he too embraced her lovingly...
EPILOGUE

WARNING - 18+

AFTER ONE YEAR:
LOCATION:THE SAME RENTED SMALL HOUSE,WHICH IS NOW A PART OF KHURANA LEGACY.

The sparkle in your eye,
The warmth of your skin.
Your breath on my neck,
That shakes me within.
The touch of your hand,
The smell of your hair.
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.
Your kiss on my lips,
Your body near mine.
The stroke of your touch,
That feeling inside.
The Compassion in your embrace.
The power in your face.
The beating of your heart.
That we may never part
The beauty of your kiss,
and that magic in your touch.
It is for all these reasons and more,
Why I love you so much'''..


Cold breeze is oozing,birds tweeting and sun's light beam is peeping from the gaps between the long green curtains. A large king size bed covered with white sheet is attached with textured wall. Maan is half laying on his right elbow,resting his head on hand,gazing Geet lovengly. Maan bend and kissed her,to which she smiles back to him
Her supple pink lips tasted soo sweet bneath his hungry lips. Geet parted her lips and allowing him to deepen the kiss.she wrapped hr arms around his neck and snaked one hand in hs hairs and pulled hm mor. Maan bite her lower lip nd suck one by one. he licked hr lips.Geet to kissed him back wid d hunger matched to him. his fingers dug into d soft skin of hr waist.His tongue invaded in hr mouth and explore evry corner of hr mouth with his tongue. reluctantly both parted for some oxygen.Her lips swollen more. Both panting badly. Hs eyelids are heavy wid d desires. He lost himself in d hot nd exquisite fulfilment, her body offered.he buried his head in her neck and leave a wet kisses on hr nek to hr calvic bone. Geet unbuttoned his shirt with her trembling hands nd remove it. Maan coverd hr wid hs body. Both look in each others eyes naughtily .driven by desires and d intensity of a passion such as she nevr known b4,letting hr hands caress on his cheek.she wanted more than dis.she wanted all of him. He bend on hr face nd kiss evry where not leaving any place untouched.his hands slipped down so he could claim the aching fullness of hr eager breasts. He squezeed both one by one. She moaned hs name in pleasure. He is d one who drive her to heaven of pleasure. He lick her hardened peaks with hs wet tounge and teased her. He rasied a little bit. He cant stop his gaze devouring hr curvaceous body. Hr full pink lips suddnly curved into a smile as hs deep dark eyes twinkled. She shoved her hand against hs hardend chest,his deliciously muscular taut body. Maan slowly kissed her throat and she closed her eyes tossing hr head back wid a silent gasp. Geet felt his teeth nibbling her neck.while biting,she felt hs hands skimming from her bare shoulder down to the leanth of her arm. With the proficiency of a master,he read her body's silent language. Drawing his toungue teasingly down the silken valley between her aching brests and chuckling softly at her stifled little groan of need. His one hand sliding over each breast,he cupped them as if dey were prize roses. Vry gently he dipped hs head to suckle frst on one and then the other,tasting each sensitive tip b4 exploring pink halo around it wid his toungue. He incresed her pleasure wid d cooling dew of his saliva. She wanted him more,wanted hm as she never wanted any man.Wanted him without d barriers of any clothes between dem. Maan bite on hr waist to whch she feels pain and cleanched d sheet tightly. Maan leave hr fr few sec.to gt rid of his shorts. He also ripped off her panty. Maan kissed on her toe frst,den her ankle,her calf and den thighs. She parted her legs to feel him against her. He grind hs hardend part on hr sensitive area,feeling her ready wetness. He entered in hr wid a jerk.

"Maaannn",she moaned in pleasure and encircling his waist in her legs tighter pulling him closer as he thrust in and out again nd again with a friction of sec. Maan pulld her up. Geet dig her nails in his bare skin,and suck his lips and his earlobes. He moved his hands on her back. They continue this for sevral hours until their bodies get tired completely.he removed and both parted from each other and laid to calm down their over excited bodies.

Both hyperventilated.

Maan(wid a deep concern in his eyes asked huskily):r u ok sweetheart?

She nodded and smiled slightly.Maan turned half to her and kissed on her forhead. Geet moved to him and buried herself in him. Maan laid on his back and she rested her head on his shoulder andwrapped her arm around his waist. Maan coverd them with duvet and both drifted to a peaceful sleep...

Start a day with passionate moments,both again went to sleep for few hours. After their marriage of six months it bcom Maan's daily routine. Thats why in pretext of handling India's office he bring her here,where no one disturbs them.
In past six months they hardly go 20 times only to a office. Neither Maan go himself nor he allowed her to go. Both fully enjoying their passion filled honey moon.

When Maan proposed her she was scared of his parents reaction but after seeing her all aproved her easily. Dadima take advise of their family priest and he finalize the date of marriage. Both's marriage was held on grand scale and after 3 days of their marriage Maan convienced everyone that for some time he will stay back in India and handle here's branch office. Dadima allowed and both came there,where he alredy buyed the same house which Geet hired for him on rent coz it is the same place where Maan expressed his love to her in intence manner and realized himself that how much he fond of her.

Both found their true love which completes their emptyness. All we can say its a Destiny's Play only which bring two complete stranger closer and turned them into a one soul...

ITS OFFICIAL ENDS HERE. I HOPE YOU ENJOYING READING ALL PARTS. PLS SHARE YOUR VIEWS. THIS WAS MY SMALL RETURN GIFT FOR ALL OF YOU. HOPE I dO JUSTICE WITH IT 😊
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update finally maneet confessed their love and honeymoon and staying in india



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice doll😊

finaly geetu pat gayi👏

they got married⭐️

settled in india😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila he was so close to loosing her due to his lies
but luckily that didnt happen
poor geet naa
she thought he too was cheating her
well he aint
he really does love her
awww wasnt that just cute how he managed to get her approval
and his father understood that maan is fida over geet
which would have made his dadi happy too
awww they have been married for six months now
and life couldnt be better for them than this
haila that was hott for sure
cheers for pm
that sure was some play of destiny right

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Posted: 12 years ago
speechless
richu tumhari ff's ka jawab nahi
amazing
passion,love,anger everything in ur stories
loved it
maaneet ki shadi ho gayi n they lived in India
superb
geet ko manane ka tarika was just awesome
mindblowing
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet accepted his love..
n got married..
maneet part was hot
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely shvly update Richi...:D:D
Starting was awsm..awww geet felt cheated as maan didnt told his identity to her..she thinks maan as dev coz dev too uses her in order to gain a superior positin in the cmpny...
Bt when maan confess his love , geet saw true feelings in his eys n accept the proposal..;:-):-):-):-)
n final part was..;-);-);-);-)...
Overall it was a lovely journey with this story of urs..:-) thnx fr gvng us such a wndrful story...keep rocking..luv u...<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is for you richa
epilogue and last part are too good

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