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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">THE PHONE ALWAYS RINGS AT THE WRONG TIME😡</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">LOVED THE MAANEET MOMENTS</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">GEET WAS JEALOUS</font>


LOLzzz :D:D hota hai hota hai aise b hota hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ylaraib

part 3

awesome update
dev getting J
MAAN getting attracted towards geet
maan saving geet twice
geet angry and j seeing MAAN flirting with sam
awesome
will read part 4 later and comment on it
busy in exams dear
don't have time to even sleep till june


dear concentrate on ur studies first :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



to matlab maan ko realize hogaya hai
to maan ka accident karwa aur geet ko realize karwa😛


kamini Maan ko chot pahuchane ko bol rai hai 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 5

GEET's reaction is normal. Maan ran his fingers in his messier hairs and hit the obstacles in his way. He felt very strong for her and aware of that but she is not ready for a new relationship. She just hurted badly and now this sudden bold expression of him scared her badly. She was all confused with herself. Though she felt comfortable and save in his company but is in't that she gave its a name of love. Being a heart broken she cant able to trust any one so easily sply in case of Love.

Maan act was impatient. He must gave her time to make up her mind for him,but it was too late and no benifit of repenting. The res of the day,Geet spend in crying while locking herself in her lonely home. She sat on her bed curled up in herself and pouring tears. Dont know from what reason she hurted most. Is Dev's engagement or Maan's impatientness. She is not a doll to whom all used for their own reasons.

Maan calls her conti.she glance the screen,avoid and start crying more. Her aignorance killing him more and rosed his anger.

'damn it. Common Geet pick up the phone,we need to talk.',he yelled in frustration,but forget that she cant hear her from this far.

Maan's patience give up and he reached to her house in mid night and bang her door badly.

'Geet come out pls and talk to me. I can explain yaar.',he shouts,but no respond from her side is coming.

He hit the door with his foot but she wont ready to hear him right now. She want to be alone.

'Maan go away.right now i dont want to talk you.',after his numerous try she forced herslef to speak up.

'Geet pls',Maan beg.

'Maan i said no. I want to b alone for some time. Right now i dont wanna saw ur face even.',she shout from inside. Maan hurts and his heart wrenched with her reply. He know unknowingly he raised her sore.

'theek hai Geet aaj k baad main apna chehra tumhe kabi nahi dikhaunga.',he said annoyingly.

Maan came down heavy hearted and sat in his car,when one hard thing hit his head from behind. Blood start oozing from his head
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and he faints instantly.

Geet was not in state to react. She is crying for hours and dont know when she slept. Its 4 am. Her body is drenched in sweat and she wake up jerkly. Nightmare broke her sleep. She is sweating badly and her throat went dry. Maan's last word banging in her head. Unknown fear bounds her and she wants to talk to Maan right now. She calls him but his phone ans out of coverage area. She feared more and calls him for next sevral hours.

'pls Maan just for once pick up the call. Mera dil itna kyu ghbra rha hai? Kya matlab tha uska ki fir wo apna chehra kabi nai dikhayega.or kya connection hai mere us sapne se uska. Babaji pls Maan ko kuch mat hone dena.',she prayed for his well being and ran outside in order to reach his place. House's door was open wide. Her eyes filled with scaryness. She entred afraidly and found his all belongings were scattred everywhere on floor. Geet went go inide but no sign of him at all. Her eyes were tormenting only for his single glimpse.

At the same moment Maan open his dizzy eyes slowly 2. His vision is still blurred. He only saw one human figure. He look upwards to saw the face. Maan wriggles badly but his hand is tightly tied with ropes. A man is smirking more seeing his miserable condition.

'relax koi fayeda nai hai,tum kai nai bhag skte so be a good boy and tell me where is the file?',he said with a evil grinn on his face.

'tum ghatia ho ye to main janta tha par tim to coward bhi ho.',Maan yelled while wriggling to free himself to which his wrist also starts bleeding.

He grew angry and slapped him hardly. Maan slant and glared him furiously,to which he clenched his hairs and pulled back.'Maan dont force me to hurt you more. Geet nai aayegi yaha tume bachane. Wo to waise b tumse kafi naraz hai right?',he said viciously.

'dont you dare called her name with your mouth.',Maan bursts this time.

'woho you scared me.itne kam time me lagta hai kafi nazdeek pahunch gaye ho uske. Mere sath to bado morality talk karti thi fir ab kaha gaye wo sare rules and morals',He smirked again and taunts,which boile his blood. His nostrails fluffred and fists clenched hard.

'DEV',' he shout loud and Dev squeezed his cheeks inwrds.

'dont shout infront of me understood.itni hasiyat nai hai tumhari.'He leave his face with a jerk and slapped once again.'last time puch raha hu file kaha hai? 2 ghante hai tumhare paas. Agar mujhe nai bataya to tum soch b nai skte main kya kar skta hu.' he warned him viciously and orderd his men to keep their eyes on him. Dev come out from that old junkyard and moved from there.

Geet's condition going more worst with every passing momnt. She wont understand what she do now and to whom she asked for help. Her all tries go in vein. No clue is seeing. She went to office may she got some clue from there.she straight rush to his cabin,where she collapsed with Dev.

'sorry',he apolozise but not really.[/B
[B]Dev moved ahead,but Geet found somthing weired that what he is doing in his cabin. She went inside and found same condition as of his home. Geet get suspecious with Dev regarding Maan. She went to him and asked what he is doing in his cabin? Dev dont talk to her and avoid her all questions. She wont have any proof so she leave his cabin in her recent. She was going mad on all today. As her impatientness rosed with her fear of loosing Maan. But she have a strong feeling that may Dev know somthing about Maan,so in evening she followed him. She spying and reached to the same junkyard where Maan had been kept. Geet followed him silently and went behind him. Dev entred inside. Geet hide behind one strong tree. She wont able go inside easily as one guard is standing on the main door. She changed the direction and went from backside where she peeped inside from the window. Her eyes opened wide when she saw him torturing Maan. Maan's head is wounded. She felt weltered and wants to go inside as soon she can. Dev again tortured him but Maan denied like before. Dev get tired and orderd his men to torture him untill he open his mouth. He went outside and two heavy built men beats him. Geet's fists tighten but they much stronger for her. She got some idea. She immediately called romeo and told him about this fisco and orderd him to bring police as much faster he can. Romeo assured her and cuts the call. But geet cant stop herseif for so long as they beaten him conti. Meanwhile one of them go outside. Only one is remaining. She secreatlt entred from backside and grab one strong log. She moved silently and banged that goon's head strongly as much she can. He turned to her and saw her with his big scary eyes. Geet get nervous and log falls from her cod hands. He stepped towrds her. She scared and start moving backwrds. He itched his hand and she covered her face out of fear. At very momnt she heard a strange voice. She pepped from the gap of her fingers and found only Maan face. She remove hr hands and found that man laying unconcious on ground. She sighed and rush to Maan. His face is bleeding from many places. Geet's heart cried loud seeing him like that. She quicklu untied his ropes and freed him. Maan sood up from the chair and bith hugged anticipatedly. Maan gave her a bone crush hus as he is holding his life in his embrace and dont let go her this time
Both parted and Geet tenderly stroked her shivring fingers on his wounds. Her teras filled eyes and tence faced told her state of mind to him. She checked him again and again.

'kaha chale gaye the? Aise koi bolta hai kya ki ab apna chehra nai dikhunga. Pata hai kaise paglo jaise main tab se tumhe dhoond rai hu. Tumhare ghar ki halat dekh k jaan nikal gai thi meri.',she cribbing cutely and Maan only chuckled watching her concerned and tension for him. He enjoying her cute gestures.

Maan cupped her face.'relax Geet main theek hu. Or waise b tumne hi kaha tha shakal mat dikhana.'

Geet get mad over him and remove his hand angrily and slapped his arm with her both palms..'main to bahut kuch kehti hu wo to nai sunte. Apna dhyan nai rakh skte the. Maine kaha tha apni jaan khtre mat dalna.they y?',she showring her nager and was so restless. Maan read her body language which urgently needed to be calmed by him. He grabbed her. Though she wriggles but he crushed her inside his hard frame. Soon she get composed.

'Geet lets go from here. He will b there at any moment.'Maan alerts her. She nodded and both was about to reached to exit when their steps struck at a clap sound.

Both turned and saw Dev standing there. Maan pulled her behind him.

'wah kya ishq hai.'he gave his evil smirk again. 'so i was right. My plan is working and she is here.' both cant get him and glare him only. 'nai samjhe. Ok let me explain. Geet u are not smart enough ki Dev ka pichha karo or yaha tak aa jao. Tum yaha aai ho meri marzi se.'

'why her? File to mere paas hai?',Maan asked confusingly.

'oh common Maan dont test my intelligence. Dont you ever heared a story of magician whoes life is kept safe inside a bird. Geet is same in your case',Dev said with a wicked attitude.

Maan fumed,'dont you dare touch her ok?',Maan warned.

Dev instantlypoint gun on Maan's forhead and and his men clenched his both arms. He dragged Geet also.'Maan i m asking last time where is my file?',he grittted in anger.

'nai bataunga and i dont afraid of you',he cleared.

Dev change the direction of gun and placed it on Geet's temple who is fixed in his grip badly.'who told you that i m gonna shoot you. Apni jaan ki parwah nai hai par iski to hogi?',Dev now blackmail him emotionaly. Maan get numb seeing her life in danger. Now he had to act fast now. 'Tell me fast i said',Dev yelled.

Maan was in dilemma what he do now,when a siren sound of police jeep gave him a chance to escape.

Dev's attention diverts because of that sound and Maan quickly kicked off his gun far away from his reach.
Maan freed himself and Geet too bite on Dev's hand in order to make her free from his grip. Maan kicked off his men quickly,clenched Geet's hand and both ran away outside
Dev scold his men and ordered them to follow both. Maaneet ran outside for sake of their life and Dev's men followed them. Romeo came with police on the address she told him. The ropes on chair and other traces cleared their doubts. Insp.command his men to search all of them. Maaneet is running but soon found by Dev. Both come face to face again, Maan pushed her away to teach him better. Both attacked each other and giving touch time to one. Geet act quickly and call Romeo again. she
told him about their location and Romeo take Insp.in that direction. Maan and Dev hitting each other badly and make both bleeds,until police reach there. Dev's all men caught one by one. Insp.came and intrupt their fight by seprating them. Insp. took all of them to police station. Geet told everything to him but Dev denied completly and put all blames on both. Geet shocked more seeing Dev's worst side. She slapped him in fit of her anger over him.

'today i felt detest on myself that i love a person like u,who dont even deserve to be called a human being.',her anger boiled over and she threw it on him. Maan smirked seeing her attitude. This woman intrested and intrigued him. As well as beauty,she had brains,charachter and spirit,but also a temper.

'Stopit you all. This is PL,so behave yourself.',Insp shout on all,as they again going to collapsed.

They still arguing and no one ready to give up till Samarth Singh Khurana himself entered in the Police station with his security. All eyes struck on him. He was somwhere in the region of 57. Well built,six feet tall,dressed in smart office attire. He had a gleam on his face that no one can made eye contatc with him directly. He introduced himself and Insp.stood up in his welcome. He offred him seat but he denied.

'Insp.i only come here to settle down the issue. From past one year our India's branch facing many losses and i want the reason. Some is doing mess in my co.for his/her(he glance all 3)own benifits.',Samarth confirmed shortly.

Dev instantly trying to pretend himself.'sir i told you who are the one. This Geet and her so called boyfriend Maan in involved in this consipracy against you.'

Samarth glared Maan,'is he right?'

Geet intrupts before Maan said anything.'no sir Dev is liying to you. He do all this and know blame us for his sins.'

she defends both.

'o shut up u ok. Tumhare paas koi proof nai hai.bas hawa me bate kiye ja rai hu is Maan ko bacahne k liye.',Dev raised his voice to prove himself right.

Samarth glance all again and slapped Dev tightly. He showed him a file which having a all proofs against him and enough to prove him guilty. Dev was in shock and Maan grinned wide on his victory.

'Dev ye file to maine usi time send kar di thi jab tumhara call aaya tha. Main samjh gaya tha ki ab tum is file ko pane k liye kuchh b karoge.',Maan told him with a wide smile. Geet too sighed.

'Insp.arrest this man and put him behinds the bars.(then he turns to Maan)or aap sahebzade idhar aaiye humare paas.',he caaled Maan to him. Maan went to him and he embraced him lovingly first.then kissed on his forhead.'kya zarurat thi apni jaan khatre me dalne ki? What i told to ur mom if anything happens to you.',Samrth showing all love to him and leave all other astonished.

'sir aap Maan ko jante hai?',Geet asked innocently,to which both chuckled.

'Geet beta hum inhe tab se jante hai jab se ye paida hue hai.(seeing her confused eyes he cleared her)he is my younger son beta. He wants to sort the matter in his own way,thats why he came here. Maaan ko yaha kisi ne nai dekha tha,isliye uske liye sab pata lagna or b easy ho gaya.',Samarth revealed the truth and she again felt betrayed. Maan lied to her on all stages. She again used and disperced...


PRECAP-LAST PART WITH EPILOGUE.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved the way geet handled the dev thing by calling romeo
she is way too smart as dev assumed her to be 😳
geet ko bhi apni feelings realize hogayi
this kamina dev in PS also trying to say ki all is done by maan and geet😡

so finally samrat came and cleared everything
but in all this geet also thinks that he betrayed her
but koi gal nahi maan babu will manofy his meesthi ver very soon in his unique manner😳☺️
mere emotions se samaj ja ki kaisa manana chaiya mere ko 😉

continue soon richu darling 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem update geet feeling betryed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
loved the way geet handled the dev thing by calling romeo
she is way too smart as dev assumed her to be 😳
geet ko bhi apni feelings realize hogayi
this kamina dev in PS also trying to say ki all is done by maan and geet😡

so finally samrat came and cleared everything
but in all this geet also thinks that he betrayed her
but koi gal nahi maan babu will manofy his meesthi ver very soon in his unique manner😳☺️
mere emotions se samaj ja ki kaisa manana chaiya mere ko 😉

continue soon richu darling 😳


😆 tu nai bhi kehti to bhi maine waisa hi sce deti jaisa tu imagine kar rahi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
abb kya karega maan...geet ko kaise samjhayega...geet k jagah per geet sahi hai...koi bhi betrayed feel kar sakti hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
loved it...
ab geet phir se gussa hogayi...
maan babu haina manane ke liye...
waiting for the next part...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
bindaas...
lovely update...!!!!!!!
maan ji shatir hain aur pehle hi file bhijwa di...gr8...
aww poor baby geet felt betrayed again...!!!!!!
never mind maan babu bcha lenge!!!!

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