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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

awesome update

sam gadhi

maaneet moments were amazing

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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

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shri12

@shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Awesome Part
maaneet are getting closer and they regret with their proximity

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

wow lovely cute emotional update.. te way my maan dropping geet in her room and taking her car and talking to her in phone was lovely.. te way my maan teasing his geet and geet falling for him was lovely.. te way sam wants to irritating geet and geet drunken and my maan carrying her to home and sleeping with her was lovely.. te way my maan teasing and te way geet cuming to old self was lovely.. te way geet searching house for my maan and but got a booth house, te way my maaneet cleaning and painting and losing themselves was so lovely.. te way geet felt guilty and ran away and my maan ki gussa was lovely..i love te update..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

haila what was all that about man
well am lad that stupid dev decided to get engaged to sam
you know this reminds me of pyaar toh hona hi tha
as in when kajol finds out that her fiance got engaged to someone else but this was more funnier
man that was so cute when he was trying to tell her not to run after that stupid dev
maan is right he did use her for sure
but then she dont have to worry as she has maan naa
and thats the best things that can happen to her
awww they were having so much fun decorating his rented house
but things got bit heated there for sure
and of course what ddint happen should have happened
well i guess its still early for that right
funny how in such short span of time maan has come so closer to geet compared with that dev
guess that was bound to be right
cheers for pm

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

gr8 part yar!!!!!

i maen the line wen he says..:"itni jaldi??abhi toh maine kuch kiya hi nai!!!

hehee...

life in danger???

maan ki k geet ki???

normally i wud have thought geet ki becoz voh aise vahan se achanak chali gayi...!!!!

but now i knw u love to surprise toh may be maan ki...and then may be geet will fall for him...

continue soon yar!!!!!

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

loved the update
hyee both got lost in each other
grrr I hate Maan's phone it rings at the wrong time

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megha

@totinee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

ye Maaneetki phoneka problem keya hey?hamesha galat waqt per baj-jate hey...😡achcha hua Maan apna phone tor dia.warna main hi tor deti(in my dream).ye keya kia 2mne Richi?aysa koi kartahey vala?ayse bchme rokhdi...🥺

awsm update!!!!!DP-ka her ek prt main 2-3 times read kartihu.pata nehi kun ek ber me maan nehi varti.Richi,thank u so much for starting such a wonderful story...

Edited by totinee - 12 years ago

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Gurtian....

@Gurtian....

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

so MSK doing jharu bcoz of Geet.achcha hey.aur aapna ID chhupao!!!!

bt richu,ayse kun donoko rokh di 2mne?ye achcha nehi hua.plz jaldise nxt update dedena...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Maan-Geet are attracted towards each other...

Geet mind also knows now that Dev only used her...

Sameera is so disgusting...when Dev is with her then why she is jealous and trying to hurt Geet every time...or she is also attracted now towards Maan and want him also...

precap is interesting...I think Maan's life is in danger...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...