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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

that was so cute a perfect blend of family and romance

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Bhawna Jeka

@bhawna02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow awesome update dr

love it alot

oh great maaneet made their honeymoon at home

geet mother in law is superb and very supportive

she has let geet to sleep till late

its really a cute and lovely family

its truly show that even in an arrange marriage you can find love just like our maan

maan is really naughty and always teasing geet

geet is truly such an innocent one and hv not understand maan is pulling her leg by making her scare about badi dadi

wow love the way the family are

do continue soon dr

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

geet is sooo cute everybody will like her...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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mehak173

@mehak173

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

lovely update .
They r such a cute family
Maan is too much yaar
All r teasing geet and demanding jr maneet
Geet fearing badi dadi but she accepted her with all her love geet's mil cribbing for it ...just had great time reading this do continue soon ...
Ah sorry i forget the joker ...mr vicky ha ha ha

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Lovely os! Waiting for it's continuation!

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

hayee me toh fida on my maaneet
n their romance
\n badi daddi
well sadi geet also won hr heart
now waiting 4 maaneet challege
lvd it

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lehr

@lehr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow what an update dear

loved maneet romance a lot

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

that was an amazing os di

u really rock at writing hah

kaise kaise aate hain aapko yeh saare ideas

cming back to the update

it was so beautiful

maan n geet r complete opposites

still so deeply in love with each other

complete khatti meethi jodi

maan's mother is a perfect saasu maa

which every girl would kill to have

she told geet not to come down before 10

so that her DIL could have a good night sleep

but well till maan is there how can geet be so lucky to have a long sleep

maan is so lost in his wifey

n geet is so innocent n blushy when maan looks at her like that

maan is busy scaring geet with his badi dadi's stories

n he is the only one who is not scared of badi dadi

or else even his own dadi is scared of her

vicky is so cute

n no wonder he is maan's laadla

luved maan n vicky bonding

badi dadi arrived at KM

n i must say i can almost imagine her as the most powerful rajputani

badi dadi is smitten by maan's wife

who can't love geet

after all she is the perfect combo of naughtiness n matureness

maan n geet jodi is so wow

they love each other so much even though it was an arranged marriage

maan's gift to was beautiful

they understand each other so well in such a short span of time

the rituals were portrayed so beautifully di

everything was just perfect

n badi dadi already loves geet more than maan

lol maan just lost the bet

maan's mom is cribbing rofl that was hilarious

geez maan is so shameless

but still if he won't do masti in front of his family

then who will he do it with

who will win the bet maan n vicky or geet

that they will not be able to touch geet on holi

letz see who wins it

update soon di

waiting eagerly

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Lovely OS dear.
Tooo cute.
Loved how u described maaneet's relationship. Awww.
Thank God badi dadi maa liked geet :)
Hehe sherni geet will rock the holi. ;)
Cant wait for more :)

Edited by sonu4ever - 12 years ago