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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just looked closely at the picture. It is indeed pink at the tip! Wow! Absolutely wonderful. Nature amazes us in ways we can't even think of...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1


Mujhe toh bohut kuch yaad hai Onir... Sometimes I feel like a kid who is promised a trip to a place and then left at home Still whatever was there was worth it...

yeah I understand ... 😊
I feel the same...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So me, the late comer is finally here! šŸ˜†

This post is for chapter 17. (Because I haven't read 18 yet!)
You know, I always, always adore people like Vicky. They have so many shades to them that are just visible to the near and dear ones. Their personality is the deepest, even though the general opinion is that they're shallow, as in live as the day comes. The words of little Vicky had so much wisdom in them. The condolence he gave to his friend was screaming of the tender heart inside him...

I loved the music piece you put in here. It was so soft and tender. Just the way Tweesha felt at the moment and just like the tender side we saw of Vicky. The concern he showed for Tweesha and the stray pet should've surprised me. And it did, but to a very minute degree because somewhere I might've subconsciously accepted that the ever laughing and fun-poking Vicky did have a soft side to him.

One thing I gathered from this chapter is, all isn't lost yet. There's still hope for Tweety to find her Vicky yet, and maybe more than just her friend this time around!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 18 ke liye kya bolun? So many things to say yet I can't find words!

I really liked the title you gave to this chapter. So perfect for what was in it!
I just remembered, I had once asked you the reason for naming a particular chapter the way you did but you couldn't reply to that one so I'm asking again even if the chapter is old now. Why did you name that chapter Tabula Rasa? I hadn't know the existence of such a term so I did some background check and now I'm curious about your view of the term as the chapter's title. Don't answer it if you don't want to or if in sounding too dumb asking this! šŸ˜†

The dream, or correctly the nightmare, reminded me of Palin's 'Beauty' wala Maan's way of getting over the guilt of running someone over with his car. The dream here, too, had a different conclusion than the real one and what brought this dream up, I think, was Maan's inner fear of 'what if I hadn't reached and reacted on the right time?'

But whatever the reason was, the fact remains that he's concerned over Geet. That's what made him go to check on her even when he knew the dream was just that, a dream, and she's alive and safe.

The room, which is supposedly the guest room, has so many memories he holds dear to himself? That's intriguing! I don't think I'll be able to take the secret of four years much more now! Just being dramatic. I'm definitely going to live through and with this! šŸ˜†

The music selection again left me spellbound. How do you have such perfectly fitting collection for different emotions portrayed in the story?! This piece was soothing, like relaxing me and letting me shed the worries - just the effect Geet was having on Maan...

Now why has he been feeling regret ever since Geet came in his life? Regret for saving her twice? I doubt it!

"And strangely the reason again is her. Geet."
Why 'again'? I can get two meanings from it but please clarify it yourself so I'll discard the one I know isn't correct. šŸ˜†

He does have some gentlemanliness in him, doesn't he? For not touching - or his conscience stopping him from touching - a girl when she isn't aware. The rest of the chapter, I was all gooey over the man staring at a girl, so I'm not going to elaborate on it or you'll have to put up with me going gaga over him! 😳

Loved, absolutely loved both the chapters. Bother of these chapters had the thehrao in them...
Not going to demand an update right away because you updated two back to back chapters, but I'll be waiting with greedy eyes for more! Thanks for updating Shika! šŸ¤—

EDIT: I went back to confirm that my comment was shorter than the chapter. Thank God it is! Or I would have cut it right up to half its length! šŸ˜†
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was trying to say something about chapters but then i read the comment just above my head and I became double "speechless"..Yes,i was already speechless after reading the chapter and then i read mayyo's comment and became double speechless...😊She has already said " everything" so perfectly...😊
Now ,my dear bratty..stop putting "music pieces" to your writings...
Your words are more than enough for me to visualize and feel everything your write..and now this "music",it makes me forget myself and the things around me completely ...I am not exaggerating if i say,I keep floating in their "world" through out...Your vivid description enchants me everytime i read you..I see faces of your characters,I drench myself in the rain,I can smell the places where they are...I am not wrong in saying that you are the "awesomest" writer...😃

ps-" he walked towards one of the windows in a mind to shut it down. However, another fresh bout of wind surged in, making the transparent curtains flutter, rise up and fall on his face.

The soft caress of the silk cloth made him close his eyes as a reflex as he raised his hand to touch it. He knew not if it was the serene night or the wind, or the smooth texture of the curtain, but he felt a lot lighter, for the first time in so many years. "

Why do i feel i have read it before too..Dejavu?????šŸ˜•


PPS-And strangely the reason again is her. Geet.

How??Do they know each other already????šŸ˜•


PPPS- I lub you for "yeh kya hua.."šŸ˜†


PPPs-I fell in love with vicky once again when he used his jacket as an umbrella..


PPPS-Bitch and pup story was so heartwarming..I am sure its a personal experience..BTW I am scared of dogs like anything..and tern "dogs" here includes pups too...šŸ˜›


PPPS- YOU ARE AWESOMEST...šŸ¤—

PPPS- sorry for lots of "PS"s...šŸ˜›šŸ¤£


Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it 😳...17-2 ,17-3...wowww šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aha found you 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan is getting affected by geet's presence
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1
nice...
painful...
so this is Laasya's POV and story?
Maan is Kriti's 3rd child?
but Laasya is or was married to Rajat Khurana?
what is Maan's surname then? Chatterjee or Khurana?
Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
nice part...
that was so emotional one dear...

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