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awesome update loved it finally maaneet are together & Maan found his Geet 😳
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abhi jaldi kar dungi cause cant stay for long on lappi 😕
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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



(Yesterday I was down with fever so pls bear small update for today. I will try to bring properly from tomorrow )


Part 52

Her eyes had drops of sorrow with accompany of shine of dreams. She was drowsing. Many dashes were beckoning inside those closed eyes and everything was giving her much disturbance that she was having difficulties in sleep till she saw him, her Maan. When he appears, everything became so calm and a smile arose on her lips.

Maan every now and then was staring her, is she alright!! But when saw her smile, his heart started dancing. It felt so delight that wanted to wake her up and ask what was reason of her happiness, so he would save this source of joy for whole life, for her. Least he knew it was only his appearance who had filled her every moment with extreme raptures.

After driving of few far, Maan body started aching. When he was not with Geet, nothing was felt to him. neither his wound nor his pain but now, when he had got Geet back everything started coming on normal . Somehow he drove for little more but it was not easy but how could say her! He wondered. Looking her journeying in her wonderland, he had no heart to call her and wake up. He stopped car in fatigue and rested head on seat-head, having severe pain in wound and a gasp came out from his breath

Geet who was enjoying her dream with Maan, suddenly saw disturbed-lines on his face alike he was in extreme pain.

"What happened Maan!" She asked worriedly. She waited for him to reply but he was quite. Geet went closer, asked again with more concern but Maan this time also, did not reply. It made Geet wailed, she could not see him in pain nor could know what happened him and in her dream, her eyes started falling down tears which was visible in real. Maan shocked seeing her cry in her sleep..

Geet" He shook her ..

Geet!!' Again rocked her and she shaken up, opened eyes in jolt and instantly started checking him.

Maan aap thik toh hai na!!' She could not differentiate between her dream and reality. She had seen him in pain and was only, she had remembered. Maan who was in shock, looking her strange behaviour did not say anything in daze.

Maan why don't you tell me!!!!!!!" Her anticipation turned up in form of annoys and she shouted him.

Geet I'm alright!" He held her from both shoulders, stopped from whatever she was doing.

Geet I am perfectly fine jaan" He took her in arms, kept near his heart. She closed eyes when the sound of his heartbeats touched her ears. She felt relaxed and snuggled absorbing his warmth more.

Maan felt relaxed to see her in peace. His one hand started giving soft massage in her hairs while second was holding firmly from waist. His finger was playing and enjoying mingling with her silky straight hairs and he kept chin on her head. She didn't realize when she adjusted in his lap, sitting comfortably.

Geet can I ask something" He softly said. She nodded.

Why were you smiling in dream" he was eager to know reason.

Geet remembered it was him only and she smiled shyly. She hid face in his chest and blushed.

What happened? "Maan found her act curious because couldn't see her blush in night. " Bolo na Geet"

She shook head and kept smiling

"Nahi batana chahti!!"

She denied, sliding arms around his neck.

Her comfort gesture gave him some clue. He smiled for while and said "Was it me!"

How did you know!!!' She looked him surprised and then realized she revealed her secret! Blood rushed to up and gave scarlet effect on cheek.

"It was me Geet!" His eyes deepen in her and it took her breath away. His warm whisper felt her like she could burn any soon as she was feeling her body on fire.

She slowly again shook head but this movement was so slight that she own could not feel any move in herself. Maan had longing of her, her love in his eyes which was so visible now when Geet had returned back in her real-self. He bent little down and reached to her level where her lips were so close to him and without giving a second thought he took them in his. Geet shivered when his skin touched her but it was the thing she could relish anytime. Maan kissed her slowly not to give her rush and she supported him with entirely. She pulled him closer from neck and in process her hand touched his bandage on head. She instantly moved back in confusion and when checked and realized what it was, her eyes widen in shock.


Precap: " Brij where is Geet!!'' Dev held his collar and shouted...



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