If Only You Saw Me (6) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Onir

Practically new ho main abhi bhi... aap mere seniors ho... 😛😆

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Uff! I peeped in at the wrong time! ☺️

Originally posted by: dqno1

Pata nahi tera kya karoon...😲

Tch tch tch! 😆

ek aur leti ja 😡

Meri ginti kharab ho gayi warna main batati ke ye wala kaunse number pe aata hai. 😆

One of my brothers was in the same situation as Maan is here... bechare ka ghar se aana jaana mushkil ho jaata tha... Everyone else had a grand laugh but he was tortured... 😆

Poor him! 😆

The whole scene with Geet in his room was another...😡

Socha mauka hai, dastoor hai, chauka marega... par nahi...Mari kuch karne degi tab na..😡

You thought wo mauqe ka fayda uthayega? 😲 Maine kaha tha na wo shareef ladka hai! 😆

That was perhaps the most weird Hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho ... for 2 seconds 😡

Why do you think it was Hum Tum? It wasn't, actually. 😆

I am seriously waiting to get out of this newbie status so I can bug you more...😲to follow our demands... Do hafte aur aish kar le Mari.. 10 din baad mein nahi chodne wali... Nisha and Sweety both will be back aur tera vacation khatam...

Phir toh mujhe khoob fayda uthana chahiye iss time ka jab aadha mafia cannot bug me. 😃

______________Ladai Khatam ab ________________ Review____________________

Ye ladaayi thi? Mujhe review ka part hi laga. 😆

Seriously lovely writing.

*Bows down*

You make me follow every thought process, every sigh and wish of these two... and I so love them.

I'm glad! 😳

Him you have made the cutest fumbling bumbling Maan I have read in a long time...

I love cute fumbling guys! 😆

Girna tha toh pairon pe gira... aur kya karwayegi tu uss se...😉

Jo bhi wo karna chahega! 😉

Poor guy... upar se terror of a neighbor with a crush on him...😆

Abhi Anaya chuti nahi aur tumne kisi aur ko iske piche laga diya...😲

Ab aise bande ke upar kaun nahin marega? 😳 But important ye hai ke wo kis pe marta hai. 😉

I love her a lot too...

checking him out in the dining table reflection... kiya hai kabhi?😉

Naah! Kabhi dining table ka glasstop itna shiny nahin tha! 😆

laughing at Jess chasing him... bechare ki toh koi respect nahi...

Sach sach batao. Wouldn't you laugh at such a situation? 😆

Still they made a cute couple when he said he would drop her and she agreed...❤️

She couldn't deny now, could she? 😳

Most looking forward to their trip together..😳

Trip coming up next though I'm not sure ke kaisi hogi. 🤔

I am noticing ke apnipasand kahar update mein tu SBV daal rahi hai... kuch humara bhi kar...😊

As if you don't enjoy SBV!

Thanks for updating... sorry for late comment...

One of these days I'm going to pull my hair out for all the sorry's that I get! Sorry bolne ki kya zarurat hai?! Don't do that again, samjhi!

👏 Waiting for more soon... no delays allowed...

I'm trying not to delay the next chapter. 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Oops 😳
Waise Trip is coming 😉
What u think aisa hona chahiye ☺️

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

SBV😳

Originally posted by: saf24

Congrats on the new thread and superb update. Loved every bit of it especially the way you have incorporated both Geet and Maan's POV's. Beautifully written and looking forward to what have in store next.

Originally posted by: Viji79

I just caught up with all the updates in one go and I must say that you have a unique way of story telling. Wonder what ranbir is hiding.

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Jess..?? [LOL[also going for trip.. Poor Maan.. Nice update.. I thought Maan will bump with Geet but..this Jess.. 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Aisa toh bohat hi hard hai. But kuch kuch hona chahiye. 😉