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Posted: 12 years ago
aahh now yeh angad...i wonder maan ne aisa kya kiya...
now u mean to say k sameera is not at fault and doing it to get her love..strange and hard to believe after wat she has done...
but gr8 twist yar...
precap is gud..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome,hope maan bring Geet normale n new entry is interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update ...
loved it ...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye ab naya kaun aagay
mean sam is not bad
wow what a confusion
loved it
mystery hai bhai mystery
so update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
New entry is negative hope isme maaneet ek saath hi rahe
And precap is too heart wreaching hope geet apni sorrows se bahar nikal paaye
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



hain iss update ne to poori tarah se story change kar di...

now who is this Angad and who was Anjali...

what Maan did with her...why Angad wants revenge...

Sameera loves Geet but she was helping Angad in taking revenge...

if she loved Geet then instead of helping her sister she was helping Angad...very strange sisterly love...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Really sad at Geet's state tho Maan tried so much to make her understand about their baby being dead but in vain.Feeling bad for Maan.

And now Angad,here to take revenge fm Maan.Ok lets see what happens.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful dear...its nice :) update
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Posted: 12 years ago



RECAP

On that time they heard the police siren and both got scared while Angad said,"Veer'am sure he will be since Geet's kidnap happened he's searching for clues'and i dont like seeing him involved in my revenge..as a matter of fact he's keeping an eye on all the surroundings of Delhi..what is going on here can be informed to him straightly.Look i dont want him to be involved in this u know our secret place and tomorrow am gonna introduce myself as Angad Khanna to the inhabitants of Delhi the most famous singer and am sure Veer and Maan will come to know about this but for now i cant explain i want Maan to accept his mistake in front of Geet and Veer..i want the broken Maan Singh Khurana..then only Anjali sleeps in peace!"Sameera was shocked hearing a girl's name but dint argue with him and both hid themselves when a police jeep went across them.When the jeep went both Angad & Sameera ran towards their respective cars and both parted their ways towards their destiny.

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PART 37


Geet got up next day and as usual prepared black coffee to Maan and gave it in the bed only and she cutely went towards her baby doll and took care of it.Maan was breaking from inside seeing his jaan like this but cant stop his attempts and asked,"Geet..tumhaari baby tumse baat karti hai kya?"Geet raised her head and saw Maan thoughtfully and nodded,"Haan Maan..lekin aap aise kyun pooch rahe ho?"Maan asked more hoarsely controlling his over flowing emotions,"Do u feel the latching of the milk from baby?"Now Geet was stunned and saw the baby doll as if she was in big light while Maan got up and said softly,"Think about it!"Maan went to shower but it was more the tears of shower for him..his eyes dint stop pouring the tears and he dint stop his tears too.He only prayed how much he was missing Geet's warmth'she dint even gave importance to him..she was in her own world and her behaviour made him so hurted that he was praying every minute to the god to make Geet well.





Maan came outside and got ready as Geet had kept his dress on the bed.Maan was so happy like this abt Geet but she wasnt accepting the truth that her baby is no more.Maan sighed and got ready had breakfast..left Geet to her college and he head back to KC.Here Geet entered holding her baby doll seeing around her cutely and she saw Meera there.Geet ran towards Meera and hugged her and asked,"Kaise ho Meera?"Meera answered back with pleasant smile that she's ok.Then they went to attend class when their one of the lecture was pregnant had delivered a baby boy and had resumed her work after her 3 months of leave.Both Meera & Geet met with the madam as she was their favourite teacher and gave their hearty congratulations.




Meera said giving rose bouquet to her teacher Professor Viraani,"Congratulations madam!"Professor Viraani said giving warm smile,"Thank u Meera!How are u guys?Did u guys miss me?"Geet said,"Very much madam!"And in her innocence she confessed that she too delivered a baby.Professor Viraani was shocked hearing the news but saw she dint had any indications of becoming pregnant or after math of her body stretching.She was thin as before but more thin now as she dint ate any food these days which more worried Maan.Professor Viraani asked,"Are u kidding Singhania?"In college Geet was Singhania only despite she married to Maan.Geet said innocently,"No madam..look this is my baby!"She flashed the doll on Professor Viraani's face which made her alarmed and asked Meera,"Meera what is going on here..why is Geet talking like this?"Meera gave a sad smile and she started to explain distracting Geet.When Meera explained everything to Geet then Professor Viraani was shocked and saw sympathetically towards Geet who was cutely playing with her baby doll.




Professor Viraani thought to add some brains to Geet and asked,"Hmm'Geet!"Geet came towards her having that foolish grin and asked politely,"Yes madam!"Professor Viraani took the baby doll carefully and asked,"How old is'?"Geet answered,"She!"Professor Viraani said exasperatedly,"Ya'she!How old is she?"Geet racked her brains and said,"She's one week older!"Professor Viraani astonished,"U came outside taking ur one week born child..u dont have any elders in ur house to stop u come to the class..it will spoil urs & baby's health dear!"Geet racked her brains and said innocently,"But Maan let me out!"Professor Viraani asked,"Why beta?U should have asked the reason of that becoz woman who have delivered babies wont be let outside to the outer environment due to health issues..and babies safety.Dear i can only say that do what ur husband says and accept it..dont defy him'previously he has suffered seeing u like this but dont give him more pain dear."And she went from there.Geet was thoughful and she remembered their convo abt the baby as Maan was asking abt the feeling of baby latching the milk from her breast and she ran towards the college gate without informing Meera who was ahead continuously talking to herself.When Meera saw behind her then Geet wasnt there and she panicked and started searching Geet.





On that time Geet ran towards the gate and she immediately crossed the gate and sat inside her car where Maan had left for her to go back to home after college.The driver was apprehensive and asked politely,"Geet baby..aapko kahan jaana hai?"Geet said sternly,"Khurana Constructions!"Driver sensed something in her voice but dint exagerate and drove towards KC.Geet entered Maan's office totally broken.Sasha saw Geet's state but tried to stop her but before she cud do anything she was inside the conference hall where the meeting was going on.When Geet entered then every heads turned to Geet's direction including Maan.Maan saw Geet's devastated state and was abt to speak when Geet collapsed in front of Maan on her knees and started crying hoarsely inside his laps.Maan was shocked seeing Geet like this and spoke softly,"Jaan kya huva?"Geet dint answer him and sobbed harder closing her face inside his lap.Maan stroked her hairs lovingly and asked with concern,"What's wrong jaan?"Geet still dint answer on that time Maan said to his client,"Guys pardon me but we need privacy..go and have lunch in pantry and then we will speak!"One of his client said politely seeing Geet apprehensively,"Oh no Mr.Khurana we r ok we will resume this meeting tomorrow if u wont have any objection as seeing Mrs.Khurana's state we can understand u need to be with her importantly instead of us."Maan was grateful as he understood him and said gratefully,"Thank u for understanding me sir!"He said giving warm smile,"Not a problem Mr.Khurana..will see u tomorrow!"Maan shook his hand and said,"Adi!"Adi nodded politely and went with the clients while Maan cradled Geet inside his embrace pulling her on his lap.Geet was totally devastated with something and Maan wanted to ease his pain.





Geet was crying her heart out when Maan cant tolerate her cry and said rubbing her back painfully,"Dont cry..i cant tolerate it'please jaan talk to me..why r u so breakdown like this'.please tell me'please!"Geet said at once controlling her sobs,"Maan mera baby waakay mein mar gayi?"Maan was shocked to know this and his mind to say lies seeing her state but his mouth said truth,"Yes!"Geet's eyes widened with shock and blood drained from her face.Her face whiten and she felt dizzy and she immediately fainted shocking Maan.Maan immediately took Geet to hospital and doctor examined her and said,"She's well Mr.Khurana..something she got to know i think and it cleared her doubts and she is well she is in grief that her baby died and she's not in any shock or imagination'take care of her Mr.Khurana..this time she wants u standing beside her strongly!"Doctor patted Maan's shoulder and went from there.Maan entered the ward where Geet sat just like statue with blank expression.



Tears were brimming from her almond eyes unstoppable.Maan said painfully cant able to see her state like this,"Geet!"Geet turned and hugged him tight and screamed her top of the voice,"Mera baby waapis laado Maan..mera baby waapis laado..please!"





On that time Veer comes there but sees Maaneet together but her painful scream reaches asking Maan to bring her baby for his whole body shivers and cant able to control his grief and his eyes wells up with tears.For the first time of all his childhood of all his time of army training he dint cried but today his heart cries for them'for Geet who is in so much pain'for a moment he forgets what is going on around him and succumbs to his pain just like Maaneet who were cuddled up inside each other's embrace and crying to wash out their bottled emotions.Maaneet stayed in each other's arms where crying their heart out.There closeness was their solace crying their heart out draining their emotions..Geet is adjusting to the new truth that their baby's no more'Veer came inside cant able to see the scene and he instantly hugged both Maaneet tightly too.After few minutes or so Geet felt warm and she stirred to get free when Veer moved and said hoarsely,"I'll see to the discharge papers!"And he went from there not able to face Maaneet's look.





Maan cupped Geet's face and said,"Jaan mein humaare baby ko waapis toh nahin laa sakta lekin ek achchi news hai hum dono ke liye aur yeh hai ki hum dono firse maa baap bansakte hai'hum apne is pehli ki baby ki kami usme dhoond sakte hai'jaan mujhe maaloom hai ki is gham ko bhulaana tumhe asaan nahin lekin mujhe bhi bahut mushkil hai..lekin hum koshish toh kar sakte haina'kya tum mera saath dogi isme?"Geet slowly said,"Maan..mujhe kuch samay chaahiye!"Maan immediately said cutting her words,"Jaan mein tumhaare liye poori zindagi intezaar karne ke liye tayyaar hoon..lekin mein sirf itna chaahta hoon ki tum mujhe chodke mat jaavo'please yeh ek request hai'kyunki aaj tak ka safar tumhaare bina mein nahin face kar sakta'mujhe tumhaara saath chaahiye jaan..please mujhse door mat raho..in dino tere bina..mein bahut akela pad gaya tha'mujhe akela mat chodo'please!"Geet saw his tearful eyes and hugged him more tighter and said,"Nahin jaavoongi mein aapse door'please aap mat royiyega'mujhe achcha nahin lagta!"Maan chuckled seeing her cribbing but hugged her more tighter.








After sometime,Maan pulled himself from her and asked,"Jaan lekin tumhe kaise yakeen ho gaya ki humaara baby'.!"He stopped halfway seeing her fresh tears leak from almond eyes.Geet's lips quivered but said in trembling voice,"Woh humaare college mein Fluid Machines ke professor hai'Professor Viraani'unhone aaj college join kiya unke maternity leave ke baad'unhone mujhe samjhaaya'aur mein samjh gayi!"Geet innocently confessed while Maan thanked her professor whoever she's for pouring some brains inside her.Geet once again hugged and started crying but asked abruptly,"Aapne humaare bachche ko dekha tha kya?"Maan asked with shock,"Tumhe kaise pata?"Geet said softly,"Woh aap confidently mujhe girl kaha tha na jab mein us gudiyaan ko apna'!"Her words stopped and more fresh tears leaked and she said,"Kitna dard diya na meine aapko ignore karke..apne hi dhun mein rehkar'mujhe maaloom hai ki aap kitne sahe hai'agar mein kidnap..!"On that time her face whitens and she stops abruptly and saw Maan with fear.Maan asked curiously,"What is it jaan?Tumhe kine kidnap kiya tha..aur woh sleeping tablets tumne nahin khaaye honge haina?Kyunki tum khush thi is pregnancy se right?Toh fir kyun woh sleeping tablets liya!"







Geet said out of fear,"Aap mujhe chodenge na?"Maan was exasperated hearing her words and asked,"Jaan mein kyun chodunga tujhe?"Geet's face turned into disgust immediately,"Usne mujhe chooya hoga!"She freed herself from Maan's embrace and saw her body ti to toe..her arms were widened and she started rubbing it as if she's dirty and she's washing it with disgust.Maan was shocked seeing Geet's behaviour instantly and he asked worriedly,"Jaan kya huva tum aise kyun dekh rahe ho'.!"Geet started to rub her hands and stomach wherever her hands reaches..her face,her lips her nose'her chin..her neck..as if some thing pricky has been spread over on her skin and she's trying to get rid of it.Geet saw around her for something'some kind of inspiration'some kind of distraction'she saw the washroom door stood ajar.Geet got idea and she ran inside the washroom and turned shower on and stood under it rubbing her body.Maan ran behind her and saw her state as she rubbed her body with total disgust.She cant tolerate something and she cursed as if it isnt going..and she complained Maan who stood near the doorway,"Woh nahin jaa rahi hai Maan'.kyun nahin jaa rahi hai!"Maan asked with shock,"Kya?"Geet said softly with disgust,"Vikram ki khushboo'usne mujhe chooya tha!"






Maan immediately closed his eyes expecting this only and opened his eyes when his eyes blazed with fire'fire of anger on Vikram'he was in total anger but it vanished into thin air seeing Geet in that state.Maan immediately entered the shower naked abandoning his shirt,pant & inners.Geet was shocked seeing Maan like that but saw that he had locked the door before he entered inside the shower and his large right palm held her small waist.Maan pulled her towards his hard frame and pressed her.Geet's breath caught as desires explode inside her veins heating her blood.Geet was shocked seeing how her body bows to his touch.Maan's eyes fixed to her almond ones.He dint say anything from his mouth but his touch and his eyes his body said her everything.Geet felt some kind of claiming in his touch and she was so happy to be cherished.Maan slowly peeled off her dress and made her stand naked.He took her soft silky hair one side and kissed her right shoulder.His soft kiss heated her blood while she leaned on his hard chiseled chest.His hand moved from her shoulder to her hand and rubbed it filling his scent'his kiss.Geet involuntarily moaned and she rubbed her soft naked back to his hard frame.





Maan groaned and he softly bit her neck moving his soft lips.Her hairs started to stood all over body due to desires which were travelling from her head to toe.Her toe curled and it met his right leg.His index fingers travelled from her head to toe giving pleasure to her.His hands travelled from her face to her chin to her neck to her partition of the curves marking her as his.As he proceeded she felt his erection poke her bu**.Geet softly shrieked but she got more involved when his hands travelled involuntarily on her softness.Geet was shocked and she saw his fingers entering inside her softness.Geet moaned and softly said,"Maan i want u now!"But Maan said,"U were the one who were disgusted with Vikram's touch..so am removing his scent jaan by filling my scent'and now am not gonna take u..as doctor said that u need some space and the wound to heal up."Geet asked questioningly,"Wound?"Maan said showing towards her stomach where she was operated and the baby was removed,"This!"Geet said with shock,"Oh!Lekin mujhe yaad kyun nahin hai!"She try to rack her brains but Maan stopped in the right time,"Dont try it..leave ur memory alone..u will remember when u come out of shock fully..right now or i have to say till now u were so stubborn to not to accept that our baby is no more that's why u r in thru terrible ordeal..dont infect ur poor memory!"Geet pouted hearing his set of words while Maan chuckled and softly pecked her lips and said,"Get ready..we're going home!"Geet nodded while Maan came out of shower and rubbed the water droplets off from his body and wore his dress and went outside..after sometime he came back with Geet's new dress and inners and lovingly made her wear it by his hands.




Precap-New dawn of Maaneet life'Maaneet's second honeymoon..but entry of Angad Khanna too'let's see how Maaneet cope with this problem.😉

PART 38



Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago

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