di i jst came across it & read dis stry in a one go & as u promised dis stry made me cry, emotional,angry bt also make me grin lyk fool or laugh lyk mad... d way u showed each character & der importane not jst maaneet bt brij,pari,miri,baba,dadi,dev.adi,pinky & all is simply amazing di... i loved dis confident 4 oders bt lack of self confident grl geet, her sweet, innocent & lovely daughter miri, her caring & irritating brother brij jo pari ko dekh "nayi naveli dulhan" bann jata hai😉 & her lovely sweet baba...wid d xtra protective & confident frnd pari i seriously love her... & oder side we have an angry young man bt leaves his sanity totaly wen in vicinity of miss.handa...😆, his lady bonaparte aka dd aka dramebazz dadi jst so adorable & den his younger brother dev he is so smart & now wid geet trying to leave behind his only weakness soon... & especialy ur narrative part where u share ur incidence related wid stry i love it lyk anythng di... u r an amazing writer di & i simply adore ur style & d way u r progressing stry wid all character in a light is fabulous di... di jaldi updt karo na nxt part will be waiting eagerly... & plzzz do add me in ur pm list di plzzz...
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