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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ale ale ache bache nahi rothe ...



Don't worry tum bhi hamari rotu team me aane wali ho... update ke baad...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



pakad ke kyu ... darake dekhthe hai... kya patha brij ko waho hoshiyaarpur bhej de?

monaaa


Me koshish ki thi...but she gave me threat...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Yes Dear...after breaking their bones handover me...
I chop them tiny miny pieces...N
I roast them in... ...



and give them to this dragon... insaan ke layak tho hai nahi woh


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Posted: 12 years ago


Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



Part 42

What!!! What are you saying? And Geet will not go anywhere !!'' Dadi caressed Geet's hand which, she had rested on Dadi shoulder. Geet was extreme fearing to see Brij, got jittery in heart.

"You please go from here!'' Dadi turned leaving taking Geet along with her. Brij angered getting this behavior but he was prepared for it. Before both ladies could vanish inside he spoke "Dadima I have not come here for me but it's my compulsion which brought me on your door. Geet our mother, our mother is ..''

Geet stopped when heard Rano name. Instantly she turned and rushed to him "What happened to her!! What happened to Maa veerji!!!'' she almost shouted.

Brij made a fake sorrow filled face "Geet Maa is counting her last breath. She is waiting for you only!!!'' he created some tears to exhibit his grief.

Geet shocked, clutched her heart to control its split. She shook head in disbelief "No!!'' tears made way from her eyes.

"What proof you have Brij that Rano condition is serious!!!''

Dadi looked Geet, who was become blank but how she could believe him easily!!!'' She did not want to trust on him so blindily and so, made her step toward Geet and supported her but before she wanted to get everything cleared.

"Geet beta calm down!''

"Tell me Brij why we should believe you now. After a month you did remember that you have a sister who is alive!!!! And suddenly you appeared with this news, what proof you have!!!!''

After hearing Dadi, Geet's abruptly lost mind started to come back. She also doubted him as why suddenly he came here now when they own had threw her out from their life. He himself wanted to withdraw hands from me than why; he came here to take me now?'

"Geet I know what you are thinking that why suddenly I came here. I know I am not a person, not a brother to be turst upon but I came here only to fulfill the last wish of our mother. She is such ill that doctors said she would not survive more. Since the time you gone from there she only had been remembering you Geet. Not a minute passed when she did not take your name and slowly her condition started sinking down. I know I am the worst brother on this earth but I am not a monster Geet that cannot complete my dying mother's last wish. If you both cannot believe me see this letter which Maa had written with her own hand. ''

He showed letter. The letter was full of grief and sentiments that anyone could see the hidden tears in it and that, Geet felt. She felt that was the anxiety she had been feeling for her mother since few days and her heart melted. Thought Rano did not write about her ill health but Geet knew that she had habit of it, to hide her sickness. She runs to Dadi and showed her letter.

"Dadimaa Maa is ill, my maa is leaving me'' she broke down. Dadima I want to go, see my Maa!!''

"Geet what are you saying. You know you can't go there not at all in Maan's absence; it would not be good Beta! I understand how you feeling but just think once!''

"Dadima when I said Maan will not be with me. Let me call him I will ask him, will request to come with me. Please dadi please let me go. Maa will be waiting for me!!'' She said like plead. She was disquieting to see her mother. In next move she was calling Maan. His phone rang but he did not receive. Geet tried again n again but Maan did not pick it. She was feeling like will not survive if would not see her mother and finally she got discomfited. "Dadi, Maan is not taking phone''

Brij who was seeing everything got his smile when heard Maan did not take phone. "So it means, job is done''. He subdued his satisfied smirk.

"Dadi I am going!'' Geet spoke like she had decided. Dadi shocked. She was feeling so much helpless. "Geet aap kya kar rahi hai. Let me try once'' she also tried dialing Maan but this time it came switched off.

"Why his phone coming switched off'' she murmured.

"Dadi he was in important meeting. I guess because of it he got his phone off'' Geet said

"Geet you can wait at least till Maan comes back. I just cannot give you permission to leave without his know''

Seeing his plan is drowning Brij stepped in middle. "Dadi if you think Maa can survive till Maan come then let her wait for him but I'm going. For me my mother is more important than anyone in this world and I cannot waste a minute now!'' he spoke like taunted Geet and started taking his leave.

Geet who had lost her every bit of patience and mind felt Brij was saying right. "How can I leave my mother like this? I don't know when Maan will return and I know, he will not allow me to go HP again, at any cost. I want to see Maa only and nothing else I can think at this moment!!'' she thought senselessly and declared she is leaving with Brij.

"Geet what are you doing?'' Dadi tried to stop her but failed. Somewhere she could understand that Geet was not in her proper mind. She knew how much she had been missing her mother and if anything bad happen, if she doesn't meet her mother because of any delay, she will not forgive anyone ever after. Brij had created that scene, anyone could misunderstand it as really Rano will not live for more. And at last Dadi had to agree.

After only fifteen minutes Geet was ready to leave. She hugged dadi crying, apologies for going without Maan permission but she was helpless. Since childhood only one person she had treasured most and that was Rano. How could she avoid her visit, knowing she may not be able to meet mother again if miss this chance.

"Don't worry Geet, everything will be alright. I will send Maan as soon he returnes back'' Dadi confronted her. With heavy and scred heart she let Geet go.

##

The time when Geet was calling Maan, somewhere near KC road,

Who is he?'' one in crowd asked to other.

"I don't know. Did someone call ambulance!!!!'' Other shouted.

The whole crowd was witnessing a car accident where a man was laying on floor on his stomach covered in the midst of pool of blood. Seemed his car had been hit brutally with any giant vehical.

There a strange man heard victim's phone rang. He silently removed cell from his pocket and hit the switch off button and left, throwing his phone to some far. He picked out his phone and dialed Brij number.

"Paaji job is finished!!!'' and left..



Precap : "Where is Geet Dev!!!!!!! '' Madhav roared "Now you are happy to send Maan in this condition haina!!!!''


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



aaj tho mona ka thread smilyes se bhare pade hai!

and mona Gayab... Super onion smiley 120

yeee updateaa gaya,..
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

Me 1st...



My Maan's accident...Cute smiley 046

It is all bcoz that B*****,K**** Dev...Cute smiley 006
No.. they r not brothers...no..no...
They r Monsters...
Im so much angry with this Geet...Grrr..3d smiley 043
Maan.. Who saved her , love her , give so
much respect ...She didn't wait for him...3d smiley 043
Huuhhh...3d smiley 062
Dadima ki baat bhi nahi maani...Cute smiley 017
Akal ki dushman...Phone to ker leti Maa ko pahale...
Ya gher ke sab log Yamraaj ke paas chale gye...3d smiley 043
Duffer... Cute smiley 041
Hey Babaji!!! plzzz save my Maan...Cute smiley 059
Now only Madhavji can do something...Cute smiley 020
First of all iss Dev ko ulta latkao...bloody...Cute smiley 077
If one is in hand than others can't run...Cute smiley 020

Im so much upset...can't write any more...😭
Sochna padega...3d smiley 044

After all...3d smiley 027

Cute smiley 016 Cute smiley 016 Cute smiley 016 Cute smiley 016




Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
rula diya mainu tussi...

geetu aur maanu dono ka alag kia? maanu is hurt too and geet missing?

ab kya hoga????

ab tho madhavji aap hi kuch kar sakthe ho... dev ko darao dhamakao aur baat ugalaao and help maaneet...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Me koshish ki thi...but she gave me threat...😭



then its time to change our plan of action dear... agar dhamki se nahi dari tho pyaar se manalenge

let me try...

mona... for u
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



then its time to change our plan of action dear... agar dhamki se nahi dari tho pyaar se manalenge

let me try...

mona... for u



aweee


but sorryyy... now u will see my real face


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Posted: 12 years ago
Heart-wrenching and sad part. Brij and Dev succeeded in their plan. Maan's accident and Geet going with Brij. Feeling bad for Maneet. Madhava should arrest Dev and ask him to call Brij and bring Geet back.

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