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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Lo me bhi aa gai...Super onion smiley 053



PATHNE WAALE READY HAI... UPDATE THO DO
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Part 40

"Welcome Geet!!'' Maan held her hands and said.

"Maan ye toh..''

"Yes I know Geet. This is the same hotel and now, it's yours. You are the sole owner of this place Geet!!''

She looked him stunned. She was not able to reckon and thus, had unbelief on face. Not a single word came out from her mouth. Maan who knew, she would have same expression, smiled on her confused look.

He made her walk inside with him, holding from waist. He turned and came to face her, held both shoulders and looked in her big eyes.

"What happened Geet?''

"Maan I-I .. mean is this really .. !!' she did not understand how to express her inner.

Maan cupped her face. "Geet this place is yours, only yours! One day this place had caused those tears in your eyes, which are the most beautiful treasure in my life. This place given whimpers to your lips, which are my possession and I could not forget it. I decided that every brick, every wall every corner of here would beg for your apologies. Every little thing of here would belong to you only and only you would have the right to forgive them. Now these all are of yours. Everything and everyone here will wait for your one allow. You can do any of your wish here Geet!!''

Geet was defeated in front of his gesture. His love had no bound, no limit no impede. It was undefined, it was uncontrolled.. it was endless and she was immersing deeper in his galore adoration.

Though her heart could not fill exact word in her vocal but her eyes was showing how much, this all were bringing closer to him. How much she started worshiping his love, Maan could easily see through her crystal eyes. He hugged her, helped her to express overflowing emotions which was making her weak. She held him tighter not understanding what could be done more, in pay of what he was doing.

"Maan I don't know what I would do in return of your love. I have nothing to complete your any wish, how you do everything before my say'' Geet spoke hauling her moist eyes. "But Maan today I want to promise you something!''

He looked her impatiently..

"I promise Maan that from today, my every minute would wait for your face to be seen in front of my eyes. My every alone breath will not go ahead till you give me permission and every heartbeat; will wait for your voice to allow me to live further. They all would stop Maan if, would not see you or hear you or feel you around me''

Maan got lost in depth in her sentiments. It was immense than his own feel and he felt the favoured man in her world. It was everything which he could desire for knowing, he was not needed to ask anything else, from her. He clutched her closest of heart, ardor her love..

##

Brij was waiting for a call impatiently.

"Don't know if he would have done this work or not yet!!! today, at any cost i can't let anyone meet with that Maan. No one should see him again!!!'' he smirk

His phone rang. He excitedly replied but call was not in his favor "Brij, today Maan has not come office yet'' a dark voice came from other side

"What!!! Where are you!!''

"I'm waiting for him near KC road but his car did not appear yet. Should I wait here more?''

"Of course you will.. why the hell you are asking me!!! It's your duty and you will get thick amount for it!! Now wait and finish it as fast can be and keep in mind that I hate.. who fails!!!''

The man talked to Brij hung up and again kept eyes on road where he had been waiting for Maan car to be seen and he could execute his master's plan..

##

"Let's go Geet''

"Where Maan!!''

"Where I'm taking you'' he held her hand and pulled toward lift. They reached to a floor and next, they were inside the room which they had shared. Geet old memories came back in mind with fresh excitement. How she had felt when first day was spending with Maan, a stranger but today, he was the most known person for her. She was lost in her memory when suddenly lights went off. She feard..

"Maan!!''

Before her heart could beat in single baffle she found this place be showered in small blue and red bulb lights. She was amazed to see the beauty of this room in dimmed darkness which was so romantic. She turned to find Maan and saw, he was busy in lightening candles which were stood on a round shaped table which were filled with various dishes.

She found it perfect sight to be absorbed in heart. He was looking so captivating and alluring in his presence and she found it hard to restrain herself. With unthought she moved to him and stood before him like statue, without any motion. Maan after completing his job raised his head and found her stood blank.

"What happened Geet?'' he asked but knowing her inner turmoil and was enjoying it.

She did not reply as had not heard his voice. He asked again shaking her arms. Geet startled. "Ji..'' she felt embarrassed "Wo.. nothing'' she looked floor.

"Khana start kare!!''

She nodded and they started their food with Geet concealing his glimpse and Maan was, openly enjoying her act.

##

They finished their food. Maan went in washroom to clean hands when Geet was staring room when she found something on side table. She came and picked it. It was a small gift wrapped box. She wanted to open it but waited for Maan and Maan, was hiding waiting for her to open it. When she did not open Maan irritated came and shouted "Won't you open it!!''

She drew back. "Ji.. '' she hurriedly opened and found two rings.

Maan was ready for again same expression but this time Geet did understand it was for their. She smiled in happiness as thought they had married but she had not any ring in finger. She raised box to him. Maan picked a ring and put in her finger and then she did same. He held her hand and kissed that ring. It was looking beautiful in her hand and she kissed his cheek, in return..

Precap : " Maannn!!!!!!!!!!! '' Geet screamed...


"Where is Geet Dev!!!!!!! '' Madhav roared


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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hey mona its lovly updttt.maan given hotle as a gift 2 geet.cute date,raat abhi baki hein😉 bt precap s scary,brij kya karne wala hein???yaar dont want separation.i m sure maan sabki khabar ashe se lega.watng 4 nxt...
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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upar waala ring kaisa hai... dreamy ring for the dreamy couple...

loved the part... geet was so overwhelmed that she was not able to speak too... i loved maan to understand her every bit ...

really was a dreamy part except ofcourse maans saala brij and the precap...

waiting for the next

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
N Mr. Howwwttyy 😳 😳 😳

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Khurana at Geet set


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Posted: 12 years ago
lilyyy aaj bhi tu first place le gayi... lekin comment tho waha karthi nahi!!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lilyyy aaj bhi tu first place le gayi... lekin comment tho waha karthi nahi!!!😆

ist places only 4 mneet😉😆

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