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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 14

Rano: Geet uto puttar dhere horahi hai...

G: kya mama... sone dono na... she turns around snuggles into her duvet again and drown in her dreams

Her mobile starts ringing...

R: Dehkle kisika call hai... Rano smiles as now her daughter will come out of her sleep... but can anyone disturb the sleep of our geet... na... it's stops ringing

R: Suraj sar par agaya hai...Wake up Geet... tu phone kyun nahi uta rahi hai

G: Mama... alram hi hai band hojayega... Kitna acha khawab dehk rahi thi aur tumne jaga diya...

R: Khawabo ki duniya se bahar aja (come out of your dream world)' kal teri shaadi hogi... sasural jayegi tho yese thodi chalega... kya sochenge ki ladki ko kuch nahi sikaya hai mama ne

But Geet couldn't hear anything as her mind was still thinking about her dream

G: Khawab... Khawab... kya woh haqikat tha ya sirf ek sapna... She checks her neck not finding anything runs to check herself in mirror her hand goes towards the partition in the hair and is stunned to see it not filled...too shocked to digest the fact that all those blissful moments that she felt was just her dream... she again falls back on bed n closes her eyes everything flashes back as a film...

Ude, khule aasaman mein khwabon ke parindey

Ude, dil ke jahaan main khaabon ke parinday

Oho, kya pata, jaayenge kahaan

Khule hain jo pal, kahe yeh nazar

Lagta hai ab hai jaage hum

Fiqrein jo thi, peechhe reh gayi

Nikle unse aage hum

Hawa mein beh rahi hai zindagi

Yeh hum se keh rahi hai zindagi

Oho, ab toh, jo bhi ho so ho

Those blissful moments were not real but just a beautiful story around all those things which had happened in her sister and brother's wedding. She had heard her mama explain Rajji those wedding rituals... and her cousins sharing the alarm trick... And the man who helped her in the dream was just a fragment of her imagination. Even after several tries she couldn't remember anyone like him. She opens the door to the balcony as the new zeal settles in her heart...

Ude, khule aasaman mein khwabon ke parindey

Ude, dil ke jahaan mein khwabon ke parindey

Oho, kya pata, jayenge kahaan

Kisi ne chhua toh yeh hua

Phirte hain mehke mehke hum

Khoye hain kahin baatein nayi

Jab hain aise behke hum

Hua hai yoon ke dil pighal gaye

Bas ek pal mein hum badal gaye

Oho.. ab to, jo bhi ho so ho..

Its time to put those dreams in action, so what If the person didn't exist in real; he will live in me always. All the love and attention she carved for in her life was so engraved in her mind that it came back to her as a dream' It was so required for her confused heart to get certain things clear and to see through the mist about them. He wasn't wrong; had I spoken out my fears and desires I would not have to ever suffer my loneliness... nor would I have to hide myself from this world...my family would have heard and will always stand beside me...He came in my dream to set me free from all my inhabitations and change my whole life.

Roshni mili

Ab raah mein hai ek dilkashi si barsi

Har khushi mili

Ab zindagi pe hai zindagi si barsi

Ab jeena hum ne seekha hai

Yaad hai kal, aaya tha wo pal

Jisme jaadoo aisa tha

Hum ho gaye jaise naye

Woh kal jaane kaisa tha

Kahe yeh dil ki jaa udhar hi tu

Jahan bhi leke jaaye aarzoo

Oho, ab toh...

Jo bhi ho so ho..

Life has given me another chance to make my dreams come true. I took time to realise the value of everyone in my life. This dream had the magic in it to make me love myself; but now there is no turning back, no matter what it takes now I will face this world without any hinderance & will mark my place in it. Feeling lite after like eternity she just closes her eyes to find that face; who has imprinted his mark on her mind, heart & soul.

Rano who was watching her... was amazaed to see the changing emotions in her face shocked, sober, happy & then calmness on her face & final as if achieving the goal she had a different glow in her face which was never seen by anyone

R: Geet puttar... tu teek haina... tab se dehk rahi hoon ajeeb tarase pesh arahi hai...

G: Having plastering a large smile ... Mama.. maine na ajeeb sa sapna dekha... tab se I was just remembering the same

R: Acha yesa kya tha sapne mein

G: I saw myself in future... I was like... blah blah... non stop chatter box hogayi shuru...That dream did help her open up to her heart to everyone and come out of her shell

R: Kal maine ladhke ki baath kya ki... tune sapne bhi dehkne shur kar diya... my daughter is ready to move in to next phase of her life... mann mein kuch uljan thi ki tum tayar ho ki nahi... par ab koi uljan nahi rahi... sapno ki duniya se bahar ajja... kal bataya tha na ki is weekend ko ladkhe wale arahe hai...hum chathe hai ki yeh ristha hojaye...

G: Mama... aap se ek baath bolu...

R: haan puttar bol na

G: muhje abhi shaadi nahi karni... I was really happy in my dream but I am not sure ki I will be same way happy too in real too... we don't know what's in the store for us... meri zindigi ki baag daoud main dusro ko soupne se phele kuch pal apne liye jeena chati hoon... kuch phechan bana na chati hoon...us sapne ko khud sach banana chati hoon...

R: par puttar... tu ek baar ladke ko dekh tho le...

G: Nahi mama... agar une main pasand agayi tho... asa bana lenge... aur abhi main koi bhi jhooti umed kisko nahi dena chati... If I don't try it now in future I will never be able to do it again... aaj meri mann mein koi darr ya kashmakash nahi hai... meri lakshya muhje saaf dekaiye derahi hai... aur use main hansil karna chathi hoon

Mohindar who was standing in the doorway listening to the mother- daughter duo all the while intervened: Teek hai Geet... Main aaj he ladke walo se baath karunga. You can live your life how you wanted it...

G: Thank you papa... she ran to hug him... finally to have all the love in her life...

G: doob tha huva insaan ko bus ek tinke ka sahare ki zarrurat hoti hai... aur aapne mera saath tama hai is mann mein ab baste hoo... main aapko yaha se kahi jane nahi doongi... aaj se yeh mann sirf maan ka... Thank you Maan for coming in my dreams, you made entry in my life & brought all the love which was meant to be mine...

THE END 😃

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Prev: Part 13 Next: Epilogue

Blog link... Love N Its Entry In My Life ' Part 14

Jeevana.😳

Edited by Jeevana. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

will comment after others ...

reasons ... well you already know ...😉

hai naa !!!
Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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😳
drrose31 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read again ... 😆

well i wanna comment but wanna know readers thoughts first so delaying that

plus you already know my views on that so chaddo ...

waiting for epi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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write there, that its the last part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chalo am off now ...
going for lunch

see yaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear
loved it
thanx for thepm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dear
Continue soon waiting for epilouge

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