Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
yuuhuuu update aa gaiii

but this is quite brief Sam , *greedy wala face* part 47 pleej jaldi dena otay? 😃

so Maan has told daadi n his mom. (as if they didnt already know 😆) yet they wanted to hear from him 😃
and LOL how they deliberately teased saying its Pinky 🤣 bechara Maan 😆

the precap is the same dekho mere Maan ko rulaana mat. ok when he gets a slap. see it means he stood up and talked . his love is proven😳 and he will take it for her. this is the only good I see in this . i hope Maan doesnt feel too hurt 😭

carry on soon im waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗


Part 47


Anukalp: accha? Maan what were you talking?

Daadi ma: son I will talk with you about that, now you complete your breakfast and go to office

Anukalp: that means something very urgent is cooking on my son's brain, mai bhi to sunu?

Maan: dad can we talk now? if you have time

Maan asked his dad, making the others shocked. Previously its Daadi ma and his mom, who used to save him and post all his demand in front of his dad, now from when Maan became so sincere?

Anukalp frowned to see his son talking to sincerely with him,

Anukalp: I do have time for my family, but let's hope you didn't do anything wrong

Maan: no dad, it's something else, ermmm something serious, really

Just then Anukalp's the phone rang and his secretary reminded him about his meeting

Anukalp: yes I'm coming, just complete all the printing, so that everything will be on place when I will enter for the meeting

After cutting the call, Anukalp looked at Maan

Anukalp: come to my study

Maan: its ok dad, you go, we can talk at night

Anukalp: no problem lets go and talk in study

Maan: no dad, it will take much time and you will get late, we will talk at night

Anukalp: you sure? Everything ok na son?

Maan: yes dad, it's just I want to share something important with you, but its not that urgent and can wait till night

Anukalp: ok, we will talk at night, bye now

Saying so Anukalp started to go towards the exits, while Maan's mom following him to bid good bye. Near the door Anukalp stopped and turned towards Maan

Anukalp: if its anything urgent, give me a call, I will come home, or you can come to the office anytime, ok?

Maan: yes dad

Maan smiled at his dad. No matter how much he tried to wear the angry man mask, somewhere deep within he has a very soft corner just for his family with a determination to safe his family from all bad deeds. May be that's why daadi ma never get afraid of his anger. Or mom always talk calmly in between their dad and son fight, cause somewhere all know that his dad is worried for his bright career, nothing else.

His chain of thoughts broke when Daadi ma poked him on his shoulder

Maan: you want something daadi?

Daadi ma: when are you going to meet her with us?

Maan: meet whom?

Daadi ma: with Geet you fool

Maan: now what type of question is this daadi ma? you are asking like you don't know who she is and how she looks like. You all already know her, right?

Natasha: yes but officially as Khurana Bahu you need to bring her, right? Or you don't want our blessings?

Natasha asked from behind,

Daadi ma: waise tomorrow she is going back in delhi na?

Maan: yes daadi

Maan replied making a sad face

Natasha: arree, then when are you planning to bring her here? accha wait, bring her today

Maan: today? But she wants to go for the shopping again

Natasha: haan, then go for shopping now, and let's have the dinner together, you know family dinner?

Maan: but dad

Daadi ma: first let him join the dinner, then you mom will talk with him seperately, I'm sure he likes geet

Daadi ma said while patting his cheek making maan grin from ear to ear

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In hostel waiting room:

Maan was waiting for Geet from checking his watch in every 5 minutes. Finally after half hour he saw Geet running towards him in his normal t shirt and jeans

Maan: oh god, I told her to be ready in something formal and here madam is in jeans, what will I do with her?

When Geet came a little near him, Maan asked her,

Maan: what took you so much time geet? And why are you not ready yet?

But geet didn't stop. She came running towards him and hugged him tightly.

Maan: wow, what a good welcome by my love

Maan joked but stopped in mid when he heard Geet sniffing

Maan: Geet, what happened? Geet, is everything ok?

Maan tried to come out of the hug but Geet just tightened her arms around him, and cried more hiding her face in his neck

Maan hugged her back when he guessed she is not going to stop so soon. He cocooned her in his arms and started to tell soothing words to make her calm. After some time Geet broke the hug , while Maan became more worried to see her red eyes.

Maan: geet, what

Geet: papa's here

Maan: what? Where?

Geet: in my room Maan. He came to surprise me, and he's taking me to Delhi, tonight

Maan: but you were supposed to go tomorrow

Geet: Maan, tomorrow bro's office boss coming with his son

Maan felt like someone stabbed him with a sharp knife.

Maan: but when all these took part? You never said me that

Geet: I didn't know, I never knew why they were telling me to come as soon as possible, I thought they were missing me

Geet cried more while telling that

Maan: but

Maan couldn't complete his words, when someone places one hand on his shoulder and turned him in a jerk, making both of them startled

What are you doing here? Why are you here with my daughter?

Geet:papa main

But Mohindar stopped her in middle

Mohindar: You said you need to return notes to your friends? Where are the notes Geet? And is this your friend?

Geet: Papa, papa maan

Mohindar: I know he's Maan, I do know him. ? He was in my house, did you forgot?

Maan: Uncle I

Mohindar: yes, I know you, no need to introduce yourself. I know you are not Maan Sharma at all. But you are the famous singer MSK, am I right Sir?

Geet: papa, he was going to tell

Mohindar: geet go and pack your bags

But geet kept looking at his father's angry face. Never in her life, she saw her papa in this much anger

Mohindar: didn't you hear what I said? Go right now. I will not repeat my words again

Maan: at least let me explain please. I really didn't

Before Maan could complete his sentence, a loud sound echoed the room and Geet saw widely at Maan's face, where a red hand mark was visible just within 5 seconds of the slap

END OF PART 47

Chalo chalo, ye part khatam, aur mood nehi hai aaj likhne ka

Next part after 8 pages with at least 80 likes. Sam too wants to complete the rona dhona parts soon 😆

Precap:

Maan's family vs Geet's Family

Anukalp and Mohindar = Angry

Daadi ma and Arjun= in explanation

Natasha and Ria= helpless

Maan and Geet = well you need to fulfill the quota to know


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update bt feel bad fr maaneet.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye awesome update nhi tha...
maan ko slap kiya geet ke dad ne n usse explain krne ka mauka bhi nhi diya
this is not fair
& aise galat jagah nhi rokte yaar, hum bechare bachho ko heart-attack aa gya toh😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rotten tomatoes on you... Yaha hi end karna tha kiya... 2days aur ruk ke ek long part likh leti :/
anyways.,,, ye part bohot hi gambhir tha :p first maan n anukalp's convo then geet's crying session n then BOMB... Geet's dad fixed her marriage with someone else n then the slap :( aaj itna kharab hai din :( update bhi happy wala nahi mila ;( ;( interesting precap... Update soon dear aur wo bhi happy wala :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice. But look at destiny, before anything could be explained the dads had to find out and ofcourse maan will again be in bad books of the dad and so maaneet are in trouble...
waiting eagerly for precap to happen where daadi and arjun explain and manofy the dads...
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭😭oh god..everything gone bad with mohinder papa arrival..poor maan got slap...precap scary..two angry maan face to face...amazing update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
God...wht just happened...y he slapped...I knw he lied n he was hugging geet too...
My dying to read further...guys complete d quota fast

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