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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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1stly 4 PM me...4 this..😳..
Updates..😛.
turely ur updates r just ,
Dear...👏👏..

really..😃

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for ur
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tons of ...🤗.
last but not the list...😃...


keep the job up dear..👏..




keep ing dear...😃




dear...😳
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..







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Posted: 11 years ago
part-43
awesome update
daadima n natasha got to know about maan being in love bt with whom they will find it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗

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Ohk one important news for my Sargoshiyan readers, i was thinking about my future scenes for this story and thinking about changing my plans a lil bit, and yes, which MAY include a NOT HAPPY ENDING at all... sowwiieee gals... as u all know its my 1st story i pen down and may be after that i will not be here in IF as a writer, so i want to make u all remember my story even if it will be in ur chappals n galias... 😆

I'm thinking over it, do share what you want from me as a ending 😊 like the way i want, or like the way you all want?

Now enjoy 😃



Part 44


Maan: control maan, warna geet is going to hit you if you dare to do something stupid like that

Maan said to himself


Geet: are you listening?

Maan: haan jaan, let's avoid them and buy something for my hone wala papa

Geet grinned at him calling her papa as his papa, excitedly she just kissed Maan on his cheek and went to another side while telling him to follow her

And here poor Maan stood rotted on that place while trying to realize what actually his Geet did some times ago


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All came out from the shopping mall, among them Pinky was laughing and Geet was coming with a long pout on her face

Pinky: waise Geet, it's of no use re, see Maan already left for taking out his car

Geet: I hate him, whats wrong in only one small tiny miny scope of ice cream?

Pinky: accha? Who was the girl who was coughing the last week and could not able to sleep properly the whole week?

Geet again pouted in response

They look forward, when adi came towards them.

Adi: I will drop Pinky on my way, let's go

Geet: oyee hello? Am I invisible?

Adi chuckled to see her cranky mood

Adi: for you, your prince charming is coming baby

Pinky: haan, with a horse, ohh I forgot, with a white horse, hai na geet?

Geet: prince charming, my foot? He didnt give me my dessert, he's not a prince charming but a ravan, wo bhi kanjus ravan

Maan: accha? Chalo then you go with Adi, im taking Pinky

Geet didn't reply and stormed towards Maan's car, opned it and sat while making a hell angry face

Adi: you sure, she will be fine?

Maan: I guess yes

Pinky: but you sure you will be fine maan? I mean geet mam is going to beat you up

Pinky said with a very serious face while trying hard to control her laugh

Maan: hell yes, now you guyz go , bye

Pinky and Adi bid bye to Maan and sat on Adi's car

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Maan kept looking at her frown face, while she ignored him as if he is some non-visible ghost, and his girlfriend is more interested on the lights on the roads rather than looking and taking with him

Geet noticed Maan changing the route of her hostel but choose not to ask, and decided not to come out from the car until and unless the car would stop in front her hostel

But poor girl's innocent heart seemed to be melting when maan stopped the car near juhu beach, it's almost the time of sunset

Maan unlocked his seat belt and told geet

Maan: let's go jaan, you will love the sun set if we can reach near the south end of the beach timely.

(Well that's what I uncle suggested us when we visited there, I don't know how much perfect sunset look from other angle 😆)

Geet didn't reply and moved her face and looked outside. Maan sighed at her jhoota gussa when he can see her eyes were twinkling in excitement. For Maan, her eyes look the most attracting which are the direct windows of her heart.

Maan: you really don't wanna go?

Maan asked again and again awarded with her ignorance. Maan signed and went near her. He made her face him and cupped her face in both his palms

Maan: Jaan you remember the way you were coughing the whole week? And you are still not perfectly fine, so how could I let you eat ice cream?

Geet looked at his face which was clearly showing his concern for her

Ohh, I'm fully in love with this hotty boy " Geet mentally told herself. But controlled her smile and said in a pouting face

Geet: but one scope vl not harm that much

Maan: let's go or you will miss the sunset

Maan said while avoiding the ice cream topic, which geet could easily understand

Geet: I hate you

Maan: I love you too, now come on, hurry up

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Both started to walk down the beach on the white sands with no shoes, hand in hand. The wet sands under the feet made them feel relaxed and after many days, finally geet felt like she is away from the tension of leaving maan here in Mumbai.

Finally both reached their destination and sat down on the beach, Geet sat in between Maan's legs and slightly left her weight on maan's chest, while maan hugged her from behind and kept his head in Geet's shoulder.

Both stayed quiet and enjoyed the scenario. After the sun set many started to leave and only few was left here, where both of them stay like that

Sometimes words are not needed to express the feelings, here same happened on their case. Both had the same feelings of sadness for leaving each other's and had to be in two different cities.

Maan asked Geet while playing with her fingers

Maan: what are you worrying for?

Geet sighed and cuddled more towards him

Geet: I don't know

Maan: come on jaan, speak up

Geet: how papa will react about us babu?

Maan: you trust me?

Geet nodded while looking at him side way

Maan: then keep that trust on me, I will manage everything

Geet: but how Maan?

Maan: I will go just after two days when you will leave for delhi, will talk with Arjun bhaia first, and then with your papa

Geet: you know Maan, they will ask for your identity, and moreover, what about your family? will they like me? i always acted childishly in front of them?

Maan: don't you think they already like you the way you are? then they will love you this was as my life partner as well. and about my identity as Maan Singh Khurana, I think they already know that geet, as because the media and their publicity when I came in front of flash after dad's attack. But I am sure he will forgive me for my one mistake

Geet: but maan you know papa don't like music n singers and we are not even allowed

Maan: sshhh, the person for whom music was the passion years ago, he can never hate music geet, at least I can know that deep inside that love for music is still alive in your papa's heart, now stop all these, and let's talk enjoy our time

Maan said while hugged her tightly from back. Geet looked around checking if anyone noticing them or not, and then blushed in crimson red

They started to talk about many things, in one topic where geet said that she started to love romantic novels, maan whispered near Geet's ear hoarsely

Maan: I wanted give you something jaan, will you allow me?

Geet could feel his breath on her earlobe, she didn't reply in shyness and just nodded her head in acceptance

PRECAP: what's the gift, socho socho


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
first you decide
you want to give it a happy ending or sad ending
after that i will read further
I feel depressed when a story ends on it's sad note.
if you decide it to be a happy ending then I will edit my comment after reading it
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan is soo caring
i think geet's dad will accept them
and i want a happy ending
Edited by Sexy_Witch - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
who wnats sad ending dear. i wnt a happy ending
nice part dear loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one..maan'gift...hmm..hopefully a kisss... 😉 come on yaa its high time they r in a relationship..cant we expect tis much...waitng for the next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohk one important news for my Sargoshiyan readers, i was thinking about my future scenes for this story and thinking about changing my plans a lil bit, and yes, which MAY include a NOT HAPPY ENDING at all... sowwiieee gals... as u all know its my 1st story i pen down and may be after that i will not be here in IF as a writer, so i want to make u all remember my story even if it will be in ur chappals n galias... 😆

I'm thinking over it, do share what you want from me as a ending 😊 like the way i want, or like the way you all want?


IF IT IS NOT A HAPPY ENDING THEN I WILL THINK ABOUT READING FURTHER AS I DONT WANT TO READ A SAD MAANEET STORY. SO YOU DECIDE HOW YOU WANT TO END

GEET IS RIGHT TO BE WORRIED ABOUT HER DAD
HE HATES THE WORD MUSIC AND EVERYTHING ASSOCIATED WITH IT
Edited by punam2712 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsme update.but I dnt like sad endings. 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part
geet is upset abut leaving maan.
i dont think geet's father will agree for this alliance
but please give a happy ending😊

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