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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

Maan : kya kar rahi ho

Geet : Wo sam update nai de rahi hai toh usse iss Vase se marungi
Maan : toh muje kyu mara
Geet : try karne ko ki Sam ko kitna lagegi 😃


hawww 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗

Okey, before starting I wanted to clear some doubt that I noticed among the readers.


All were asking why Maan proposed her all of a sudden when it's just few days that they met.

In Part 35, I've already mentioned that "Its almost 3 weeks in Mumbai." That means all in all Geet is in mumbai from last one month, and also they were close in delhi as well, and maan started to feel for her when he was in delhi, and later on his feelings were getting stronger when he left her in delhi and came back in mumbai all alone.


And about Geet? Well , she was the girl who fall in love with the singer Maan just by hearing his voice, and when she saw his true caring and loving nature, off course she vl fall again and again on him, after all our maan is a prince, right?


Hope now everyone's confusion will be cleared 😊

Part 42


Geet: pinky is waiting

Geet said while unknowingly snaking her hands around Maan's neck

Maan: she has the keys, I told her to send you here

Geet: what? She knew it? She lied with me

geet said making a sad face

Maan: that's because I wanted to give you a surprise

Maan replied while playing with her curls near her face

It's so natural for both of them. Both of them didn't feel like they are new in this path of starting a new relation with each other.


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They were sitting and lost in each other's arms, when suddenly Geet came out from Maan's arm. Maan looked at her and saw a small frown appeared in her forehead.

Maan: What happened geet?

Geet: you still didn't confess your love, you actually love me na?

Geet asked while looking at him with a fear in her eyes. Maan sighed and cupped her face in both his palm.

Maan: geet I really mean what I wrote on that paper, whenever I saw tears on your eyes, I felt the need to protect you and save you, when I left you in Delhi I felt like a left a part of mine over there, I really didn't planned to cheat on you by telling you lies about my identity, I would reveal to you, but everything changed and you found out everything.

Geet noticed the sadness and guiltiness on his face when he was saying

Maan: the time I saw hatred in your eyes, I thought may be death was good that time and

Geet stopped him in mid-way by placing her hand on his lips.

Geet: sshhh, I was angry Maan, but trust me, I always have full faith on you, that time I was angry that why you didn't tell me all those days, I just needed some time to calm my anger, and when in the morning I woke up and went for you, you already left. I felt someone stabbed my heart when I saw the news on newspaper that I could not be there to support you when you needed me as a friend

Tears slipped from her eyes thinking about those two days.

Maan pulled her in his embrace and rocked her slowly in order to sooth her

Maan: I do love you my child woman

Geet wiped her nose on his shirt and cuddled more in his embrace while maan embraced her more tightly

Maan: jaan you ok?

Geet: don't call me jaan?

Maan: why?

Maan asked with a frown

Geet: mujhe gudgudi hota hai

Maan laughed at her comment and thought what to do with this child woman, that's why he brought balloons and teddy instead of flowers to surprise her

They talked until it's the time of sun rise, and then both went for their rooms. Maan left with Geet to leave her in her room and then returned for his room to have a good sleep

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All went for breakfast at around 11 as all went to sleep in late night. But for Maan and Geet it's different, as both were wide awake the whole night.

Geet was yawning in every two minutes, and Pinky kept poking her to control in front of all. On the other hand Maan was finding it hard to keep open his eyes and his eyes were totally red due to less sleep.

Natasha: Geet, beta are you alright?

Geet: ji aunty, just feeling sleepy, could not able to sleep whole night

Geet said with a pout

Daadi ma: aree, kyun beta? Did you face any problem here?

Geet: nehi daadi ma, wo kya hai na, wo

Maan felt like banging his head on her stupidity, while Geet made pouting face not to find a cause to explain

Pinky: Daadi ma, wo geet was so much used to with her pillow, you know she even brought her own pillow from Delhi, that's she couldn't able to sleep soundly all night, hai na geet?

Geet: haan daadi ma

Geet said grinning while nodding her head to agree with Pinky. Geet looked at Maan and found her giving angry glares to her to which she made a cute puppy face.

Ragini: it's so childish yaar, if she has so much problem then why to come for somewhere for night stay

Anurag: are, ye kaise baat hua? It's obviously not childish, it's her habit, and it's not only her, but my habit as well, I used to go to my sasural with my pillow

All laughed while hearing this and Ragini thought to change this topic as she without knowing that called Maan's father as a child

Ragini: accha, what's todays plan uncle?

Anurag: whatever the birthday girl want to do

Natasha: hum sab beach per chale, I missed those days when we four used to go in beach for outing, but now you are so busy in your works and

Anurag: accha accha, we will go to the beach then, no need to continue more

Daadi ma: topic change karna to koi aap ka pati dev se sikhe beta

Daadi ma told to Natasha, and then all headed to get ready for going out


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Blog


Will update another part at night 😊

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



will post tonight, n will PM both the links together at night after posting another part 😊
Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yuppiiee ..😃
me 1st.. 😃
amazing update..
awww mine cutiiee maaneet...😳 😉
haayee love dere scen...
jaan mat bolo...😳 😉
n reason... hahahahhahahha😆 😆
cutiiee update..
w8ng 4 next part...
Edited by zaidi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
confession of love maan father and geet ki jamegi good update poor maneet didn't got sleep



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Posted: 11 years ago
me-third
awsome-update😳
after-reading-his-feelings-still-geet-asked-him-tht-he-luvs-her😆
she-is-really-a-child
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Edited by Sexy_Witch - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update
Maan confessed :D
Lolzz ragini told maan's father child :P
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 42
nice part both confessed wat they feel
in dining both r yawning n feeling sleepy
how comes noone notified it,,
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superb update
poor them puri raat jaagne ke baad din me aankhen kholna bhi mushqil ho gya woh bhi sabke saamne😆😆
but they r just newly lovers toh chalta hai😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗


Part 43

Days started to went like this. Days turned into another month. Maan and Geet's love started blossoming more strongly. And here Geet's training started to come into end, only few days left for her going back to Delhi.

Though Maan was quite sad and upset with her going back, but always tried to act normal and helped her in shopping for her family. But poor Geet started to feel down in every hour, and either Maan or Pinky needed to distract her for breaking down.

Three days left for going back in Delhi

Geet and Pinky went to shopping

Pinky: geet, will you now stop calling him and concentrate here?

Geet: bas 2 minutes pinky, he said he will come here, and help me in for buying something for papa

Pinky: geet, maan must be busy, and he was with you in shopping for the last 2 days as well, maybe he's stuck in some work

Geet: but he's not picking up my call

Pinky: you already called him so many times, he will call you back when he will check his phone, now come on, let's go to that shop

Geet made a pouting face and went with Pinky. All the time Pinky saw her sad face, she was not concentrating on anything,


When Pinky choose a tops for her, she went to change on that without even noticing its 2 points smaller than her usual size. Then Pinky had to call her in mid-way to change the size and then told her to go and try that in trial room

Pinky's phone rang and she picked up the phone while looking at trial room to check on Geet

Pinky: Maan you better complete everything in hurry, here madam is either angry or worried

Maan: either and or? Matlab?

Pinky: she is not in sense in short

Maan laughed at her words

Maan: I just called you to ask in which floor you guys are now

Pinky: you are here

Maan: haan baba, that's why I'm asking na?

Pinky: come in 4th floor, we are in x shop

Maan cut the call and went towards the lift, today everything was turning wrong with him.


In morning Daadi ma came to wake him up, he still didn't know how much of their conversation Daadi ma heard, but her suspicious look could say she heard a way too much to understand that daal mai kuch kala hai.

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On other hand, in Khurana Mansion:

Daadi ma: daal mai kala kitna? Pura ka pura daal ki kala hai bahu, I'm telling you

Natasha: but my little boy hides things from me?

Natasha sighed with a sad face

Daadi ma: little boy? Didn't you notice your little boy's growing age?

Daadi ma rolled her eyes and told in a taunt

Natasha: maa ji my son is still a boy in heart, may be you misunderstood his convo, may be… haan… he was talking with adi, hai na?

Daadi ma: are haan, may be your boy still don't know the Indian law that gay is not acceptable in india publically

Natasha: kya?

Natasha spilled the juice she was drinking

Daadi ma: haan, otherwise why he will call adi as jaan and babu, hai na? aur I love you bhi? Awww my poor boy, so little by brain

Natasha made a sad face and looked at daadi ma

Natasha: aab kya karu maa ji

Daadi ma: hmmm, let him come today, we will ask him directly, how he dare hide things from us ladies

Natasha: what if he will not tell us

Daadi ma: simple, we will go and tell Anurag

Daadi ma answered shrugging her shoulders

Natasha: nehi nehi maa ji, let's not do this, you know na your son always ready to find fault on Maan, mai baat karti hoon na Maan se?

Daadi ma smiled at her innocent bahu, after so many years she still has the same innocence what she has when she came to this house as Khurana Bahu

Natasha: maa ji please, don't tell anything to Anurag

Daadi ma: I will not tell beti, don't worry, I was just pulling your leg

Natasha: How I wished to see Geet as Khurana Bahu

Daadi ma: me too

Daadi ma said while sitting beside her and both the Khurana ladies sighed in sadness all together. Well they didn't realize their little boy also has the same choice as them

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In mall:

Geet came out from trial room and found Maan along with Adi talking with Pinky. After they met with Adi on Natasha aunty's birthday party, and after that they became good friends and started to be in a group wherever they go

Geet came and stood near Pinky while glaring at Maan. Adi laughed at Maan while both of them shout at the same time

Geet+Maan: adi

Adi: hehehehe, sorry sorry, hehehehehehehe

Geet: where is your damn phone?

Maan: baby I was driving that time

Geet: you could tell adi to pick up the phone na? i was so tensed that you were not picking up my call

Geet said with a sad face, Maan pulled her by her hand and side hugged her

Maan: sorry jaan, will never do that again, pakka

Pinky: jezzz, sharam karo yaar, you guys are in public

Maan: if you are too shy to look then go and buy your things na?

Pinky: fine, im going, you guyz carry on, bye babu

Pinky and Adi laughed as Geet winched at her taunt

Adi: wait Pinky, im coming with you, me too don't want to see their public romance, chi chi

Geet: She always does that

Geet complained to Maan pouting with a sad baby face. Maan smiled at her while snacking his one hand around her waist

Maan: hey, they were just kidding babu, don't take their words seriously

Geet: but i don't like it, you are only my pucchu na? Then how can Pinky called you by this name when you call me yesterday

Maan felt like eating her pouting lips while she was busy in complaining

Maan: control maan, warna geet is going to hit you if you dare to do something stupid like that

Maan said to himself


Geet: are you listening?

Maan: haan jaan, let's avoid them and buy something for my hone wala papa

Geet grinned at him calling her papa as his papa, excitedly she just kissed Maan on his cheek and went to another side while telling him to follow her

And here poor Maan stood rotted on that place while trying to realize what actually his Geet did some times ago


Precap: will not give, i want at least 80 likes for next update, or else will not post another part, and yes I'M READY WITH NEXT PART AS WELL 😆


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