Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part n the song too...
Omg!!!!! Geet's dream !!!!
Bechara maan...bachke rehna zara :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updt...I loved d song too...maan loves her
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

superb.but i think theme was much better when Maan was in Geet's house


that time i didnt hear this song sweets 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Parbinsalina

This is the first time i read an update when it is just posted or pmed... :p
anyways update is superb...
Mujhe dar lag raha tha geet ke prince charming ke baare mai sun ke... ;) super man for the super lady :D
maan's song is just out of the world... :*
waiting for next...
N one more thing... I dnt know know when i became Senior Member... Just now saw it... :D
to meri taraf se sabke liye treat ye hai ki aap aapne kitchen se kuch bhi khalo... 8-)



lol, congo for becoming d senior member 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

Wow..so loved it n geet ka dreamboy bechara...feeling pity for him :P
Well emptiness one of my of my fav song..wel described d scenes with song...
Just loves the update...
Ragini n geet again face off...uff mera maan burger bann gaya :(
Happy birthday rakhi Di

Loved d update...
Waiting for next. Shona...
Jaldi Dena :*


face off??? 🥱
samajh le aab 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
short??? for me its HUGE 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zaidi98

awww shoo sweeet n cuteee updatee..

uff geet k describtion about her dreaam man... geet ko milee tu plzz mjhee bhii address dena... 🤣
love da song... n da part where maan wz singing da song.. n geet blushng..
precap: poor maan... 😃 😆


mile to mai khud bhag jaungi. tujhe thodi na address dungi 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 38

This update is as a treat to all of my readers, its just im way too happy and sad together, so wrote this part 2day 😕 😊 will share the reason at the end of the update 😊

Maan looked at geet again and found a red blush in her cheeks which made maan startled. He thought he just imagined it, and sung the next lines which were actually meant for her in some case.

Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai, jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai

Geet looked back at him when Geet heard those lines. But Maan again looked back at the piano to hide his feelings for her. Because he's still not sure what Geet thought about him

That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

The song ended with Maan hammering softly the lines again and again.

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The whole drive to the hostel was in silence. Both of them were totally engrossed in their own thoughts. Both of them were feeling something new.

For Maan, he knew what was that feelings all about. He knew he's growing feelings for Geet was beyond the relations between two friends.

Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances,

Losing and finding happiness,

Appreciating the memories,

And realizing the changed relation change
Love is not about finding the right person,

But creating a right relationship.

It's not about how much love you have in the beginning

But how much love you build till the end

(Copied from Books of Quotes)

For geet, everything around her was making her all confused. She didn't know what to do. She wanted to run away from this, so that it could not able to drawn her deeper. But it's the fate

You can close your eyes to things you don't want to see

But you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel

No matter how much you try

You cannot stop your heart to beat in this new

tune of love

The car stopped near the hostel Gate, Maan looked at Geet and saw her looking ahead but not actually looking at any object particularly

Maan: Geet, we've reached

Still getting no response, he put his one hand on Geet's shoulder, making Geet aware that she reached her hostel

Geet: oh haan maan, tum kuch bol rahi thi?

Maan: you ok?

Geet: haan, what will happen to me?

Geet said uncomfortably. Maan saw her getting restless from last 2 hours. Even Daadi ma asked her again and again she was feeling ok or not.

Maan cupped her face and asked her softly

Maan: you are looking tensed. Kuch pareshani hai kya?

Geet nodded her head negatively and said meekly

Geet: I'm feeling tired, nothing else

Maan: ohk, then you go and take some rest. You will feel better

Geet: hmmm, I'm going now, bye maan

Maan: accha suno

Geet: Haan?

Maan: tomorrow late maat karna, you and pinky both ek saath aajna. And raat ko outhouse me rehna, ok?

Geet: ohk, will tell pinky. Good night

Maan: Good night, take care, aur suno, call me to inform when you will reach your room

Geet: Maan no tiger will eat me, really

Maan shrugged his shoulder and said cheekily

Maan: I know, but you can at least inform me of the number of tigers who got scared to see you face to face

Geet: grrr, I hate you

Saying so Geet went away while cribbing to her babaji

Maan saw her going away and replied softly to himself

Maan: and I love you


he smiled sweetly while keep looking at her retreating figure in the darkness

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Geet reached the room and saw Pinky in the study table, doing her assignment


Geet asked Pinky while sitting on her own bed

Geet: aaj kuch jyada miss kia kya?

Pinky: no not that much, accha sun, tere study table per lemonade rakha maine, kha lena

Geet: wo kyun? Tu mujhe khana de rahi hai, I mean food? You didn't hit you head in wall, right?

Pinky: are hurrr, maan called me to tell that you are feeling tired and was restless, uss ne dene bola

Geet look at her mobile where Maan's name was flashing in the screen.


She felt happy to learn how much he took care of her. A small smile crept her lips and she received the call

Geet: hmmm

Maan: pouch gayi

Geet: hmmm

Maan: lemonade mili?

Geet: hmmm

Maan: chalo then go and freshen up, and sleep early

Geet: hmmm

Maan: waise geet

Geet: haan

Maan: raaste mai kitni tiger ko daraya aaj ki liye?

Geet: bad night and horrible dreams

Saying so Geet cut the call

Pinky looked at her red tomato face and asked

Pinky: saab thik hai na?

Geet: haan kyun?

Pinky: nehi kuch nehi, tu so ja

Geet: haan, accha sun, kal jaldi nikalni hai, maan will come to take us

Pinky: haan daadi ma called me to tell this. Maza ayega

Geet: wo to ayega hi, but what we will tell in our house?

Pinky: daadi ma or Natasha aunty will manage, simple

Geet: hope so

Pinky: waise Geet don't you have any problem with her now?

Geet: with whom?

Geet asked while knotting her eye brow

Pinky: Daadi ma told me that tomorrow maan will take 3 of us together

Geet: three?

Pinky: u, me aur Ragini

Geet: what?

Geet asked while her eyes almost popped out to hear that chudail will go with them

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After an hour,

In geet's hostel

Geet sleeping in her bed and busy in talking with herself

Geet: tomorrow the first thing I will do is binding your and that rigini's head all together. You stupid didn't even tell me, no way I will go with her there. Aur maan, yaad rakhna, my babaji also can't save you from me this time

In Maan's room

Maan was sleeping peacefully in his room while all of sudden he woke up like he saw some horrible bad dreams actually

Maan: oh shit! I didn't tell Geet that ragini will be coming with hem tomorrow. Geet ki babaji, bacha lena kal


PRECAP: Ragini: 😡

Maan:

Geet: 😡

Pinky: 🥱

Sam: 😆


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Abhi next update will be after 85 likes 😉 jyada nehi mangi maine, to chappal maat pheko, and yes, dhamaka ane wala hai big big, almost 3 dhamaka, to jitni jaldi ho sake mere se update le lo, as from monday im starting my new semester 😆


ohk the real news now, for what this treat is, finally its confirmed and i can share with u all. i've got scholarship from Canada 😃 So i am finishing my both stories within October. as after that i don't know when i will be able to come here even for reading any ff. don't know how many of you will miss me, but yes i will miss you all, really



Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part..
so maan has realized his felings for geet...
woo great...
lets c whn will geet realize..

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