Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...
geet irritating maan...waiting fr geets description of her prince charming...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB STORY...I READ OL PARTS OF FF N ITS REALLY INTERESTING N HATT KE 👏...
WAITING 4 NXT PART DESCRIPTION OFF GEET DREAM MAN SUPERB PARTT :))
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Posted: 12 years ago



Geet is teasing Maan too much and joined hands with Daadi she is creating too much trouble for him...

but it is very cute...

loved the update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DIDI (Rakhi Dutta).. this one is espicially for you today, lubbb u 🤗

Part 37

Geet: You are not my type you know? Well actually not anywhere near my dream boy

Geet said to maan showing so much attitudes

Maan: Accha tell me about your that dream boy. I mean what you want to see in your future life partner

Maan asked while sitting next to Geet

Geet: He will be totally unique, you know? That's why he will be my prince charming

Geet said as a matter of fact

Maan: Haan to tell me na, what quality you want to see in your prince charming

Maan asked totally in a serious tone. He himself didn't know why he felt this much jealous to see geet talking about someone else so dreamingly, though maan knew it's just her imagination, still maan felt something not right. Somewhere he didn't want geet to talk about someone else

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Geet: well, let me think. You know I always see him in my dreams

Maan: ermmm dreams?

Geet: haan, coming for me in a horse

Maan: kya? Geet, you are living in the modern era of science

Geet: haan to?

Maan: you can dream that he's coming in BMW or may be in Ferrari, but horse. Seriously?

Geet made a pouting face.

Geet: chaddo, mai nehi bolti kuch bhi

Maan: areee, nehi nehi, please yaar, I want to know

Geet: my dreamy boy has to cook for me

Maan made a horrible face like someone put bitter in his mouth

Maan: if he will cooks for you then what will you do in home

Geet: I will go to uni na?

Maan: puri zindegi uni jaogi?

Geet: nehi, but mujhe kitty parties bhi to jana na? wo jaise aunty log jate hai

Maan shook his head and said her,

Maan: next

Geet: well he can never ever shout on me?

Maan: if you will be in fault then?

Geet: still not

Maan: ye to sarasaar na insafi ho rahi hai

Geet: haan to? Mai bhi aap na life time use de rahi hoon na?

Maan: next bolo, age kitna hazam hogi nehi pata

Geet: he have to take me in vacation in every week

Maan: accha? per week one day, chalega?

Geet: haan chalega, as for another 2 days we will go to meet with papa

Maan: phir wo kam kab karega?

Geet: kar lega, tension kyun le rahi ho, wo to superman type hogi na

Geet said while winking at him

Maan uss ki bare mai kuch sochna bhi maat, warna zindegi bhar bina kam kare bekar rehna parega ' Maan thought to himself

Geet: aur bolu mai?

Maan: nehi nehi, abhi ki liye you go and talk with Daadi ma, she will need your help in planning as two days later, mom's birthday coming.

Geet: wow, you are telling me now? Waise what's your plan for aunty?

Maan: it's my secret. For now, u go and make plans with daadi ma, I need to complete this song

Geet made a face and was going out of his room, when maan called her from behind

Maan: geet, aaj raat I will drop you, thodi late jaogi to problem hogi kya?

Geet: before 10pm hogi to chalega, per kyun?

Maan: I want you to hear my this song first

Geet: really?

Geet asked while grinning ear to ear

Maan: haan baba, but in one condition

Geet: what?

Maan: you have to erase the earlier words you told against my song

Geet: pehle sunne to do, only then

Maan: thik hai, im sure you are going to love this song. Now go, I need to give it a final touch first

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Geet entered maan's room after 2 hours, when he had sends Nakul for calling Geet. In last two hours, two ladies planned the decorations and half completed the guest list.

Geet: Maan

Geet called maan when she didn't see him in his room.

Maan: geet yaha ajao

Maan called from another room, which was joined with his bed room

Geet entered the room to find Maan in front of the piano.


Maan: come and sit here

Geet came and sit beside Maan

~~ The song is Emptiness by Rohan Rathod~~

Maan started the music using the Prelude, which made geet looked at his fingers which was running perfectly on the piano keys

The music just mesmerized Geet and she understood how wrong she was to say this song horrible

All love of mine
With a song and a wine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie

But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on

Just when Geet thought that he's music was superb, Maan changed the piano tune into Mukhra, and also the whole song became more beautiful with Maan's voice.

In the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!

I feel this unrest
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold

In the meantime, Geet was already gaping at him. He was looking too cute while his whole concentration was on the song. She remembered the times, when she always wanted to see him once face to face. But sitting near him and listening him singing that too live, was something she never ever imagined

And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

Maan looked at Geet and saw her looking at him unbelievingly. Maan winked at her while singing which made Geet looked away towards the piano. Maan smiled at her and then again changed the tune into Interlude while humming the music softly this time



And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

This time Maan started the song's Hindi portion with piano's Stanza.

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera, haaye!

Tune mere jaana
Kabhi nahi jaana
Ishq mera, dard mera

Maan looked at geet again and found a red blush in her cheeks which made maan startled. He thought he just imagined it, and sung the next lines which were actually meant for her in some case.

Aashiq tera
Bhid me khoya rehta hai, jaane jahaan
Poocho to itna kehta hai

Geet looked back at him when Geet heard those lines. But Maan again looked back at the piano to hide his feelings for her. Because he's still not sure what Geet thought about him

That I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

The song ended with Maan hammering softly the lines again and again.

PRECAP: Ragini in Natasha's birthday party, Maan bana burger between Geet and Ragini

How's it? More songs to come in next few parts. And about the words Prelude, Mukhra, Stanza, these are cords for piano, I just add my own piano knowledge here,nothing else, hehehehe 😆


I read all ur comments, thnx a lot guyz for liking n commenting...😃... but sry couldnt reply. as i agn fall down n made a huge blue potato in my forehead, i know accidents nvr leave me alone 😆 kya karu, aise hi mujhe seh kar lo sab


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet description fab maan jealous and geet listening maan song precap awsem





Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb.but i think theme was much better when Maan was in Geet's house
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet telling about the qualities of her prince
and maan questions to her about it😆
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is the first time i read an update when it is just posted or pmed... :p
anyways update is superb...
Mujhe dar lag raha tha geet ke prince charming ke baare mai sun ke... ;) super man for the super lady :D
maan's song is just out of the world... :*
waiting for next...
N one more thing... I dnt know know when i became Senior Member... Just now saw it... :D
to meri taraf se sabke liye treat ye hai ki aap aapne kitchen se kuch bhi khalo... 8-)


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow such a beautiful song and lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm... that was so sweet of MAAN to sing first infront of GEET
when will GEET understand MAAN's feelings???
waiting so eagerly... n ha... her descriptions abt her dreamman is damn awesome 😆 bechara MAAN!!!
precap seems interesting... update soon...

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