*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #2 pt 17pg 111 17/7/2013 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



Hum Tou Aise Hain Bhaiyya 😆 😉


and i m loving it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART - 14

Every passing day bring frustration in Maan. He is unable to handle things around him. Even he cant able to understand what's going on with him these days. He knows that Sam is his girl friend but whenever he is with her,his mind only asked about Geet. His suspecious mind violate his thoughts and disturbs him alot. Armaan and Viraj are busy in net practising for the final match. Geet and Ridzi always go to cheer up both which he doesnt like at all. All and only he wants her again in his life. Every time when she is with Armaan and gang Maan's blood start boiling and without any explaination. On the day of final match both girls went to cheer their team and Maan stay all alone in his collage. Team won the match and this is the celebration time for them. Geet slowly 2 start smiling and enjoying in their company while Maan,who considered Sam as his biggest happiness was unhappy with the circumstances shaping his world. Sam saw him depressed and decided to make up his mood so she invite him to spend some time with her. Maan went to her place but all turn in vein when he saw her other friends there too.

'what is this Sam? I was suppose to spend time together.',Maan cribbed.

'so what Maan? They are my friends? I want to make your mood fine.'she ans him back.

'but i m not feeling comfortable with the mob u know that.',he complaints.

'ya ofcourse not.u only feel comfortable with Geet only right?',she taunts.

'dont bring her btwn us u damnit.',he gritted in anger.

'y not? When all the time u bring her btwn us. Maan forgot sake let me know clearly what u want exactly. I tolrating ur wired behaviour all the time but u cant participate in my happiness.',Sam glared him whileblaming in a recent voice. Maan's anger tored with her complaints and alligation and without listening to her he leave the party hall,avoiding her every call. Sam felt frustrated with his annoying behaviour and cursed Geet for that.

Next mrng Viraj informed about this incident to Armaan and Ridzi. He told everything in detail.

'how can you know about this Viraj?'Ridzi asked.

'meri cousin Sam ki friend hai. She told me everything.'Viraj confirmed with a contend smile.

'good it means ab ek solid dhamaka or fir bang.'Armaan confirmed

'kaisa dhamaka friends?',a soft familiar voice make all three shivered badly. All 3 gulped hard and turn around in swift momnt. Geet was there standing on there heads.

'Geet tune kya suna?',Ridzi wants to know what she exactly hears.

'you guys are talking about some dhamaka what's that?',she told innocently.

All 3 sighed in relief.'actually we are talking about a party on Ridzi's farmhouse and you are coming there for sure.no tantrums ok?',Armaan confirmed.

All 3 convienced her for coming. Now its Maan's turn. Viraj take this responcibility on himself. He search for Maan and inpretext of talking to Ridzi he paased msg to him.

'dont worry Ridzi i 'll pick Geet for tonight's party.',he glance and Maan's eyes restlesness confirmed him that his effort works. He chuckled and moved on. Later Armaan invite him and he agreeds instantly without any tantrum. Even Sam found wiered that he dont make any sce. On a definate time all students start reaching on the vanue. Maan reached with Sam but his eyes scanning whole hall in her search only. Geet and Viraj still missing and this was not bearable for him. He waits and every sec of wait proves dreadful for him. All other students enjoying the cocktail,mocktails and other serving but Maan get restless and he dont even know the reason. When he fed up from waiting he went to Ridzi and asked for her. She scan his face and read the restlessness pasted on his face and his voice in also not clear. Ridzi really enjoying his impatientness and want to grew it more so she coldly told him that he wont know anything about her. Maan leave and Armaan called up Viraj to make sure that he will enteraed with more delay in party. Maan's patience leaved his side and he burst on Sam.

'lets go Sam.',he orderd bossily.

'where.i mean abi to aaye hai.',she stare him amusingly.

'but i get bored here.',he said coldly.

Sam also felt hanged with his strange behaviour. She wants to shout on him and Maan too. Maan was about to open his mouth when he saw Geet entred with Viraj in red coloured jumping suit(short dress in single piece). Maaan's mouth stayed wide open,while adoring her natural beauty,but soon it turned in jelous and possesiveness,when he noticed all eyes turned towards her. His nostrils fluffred furiously. Ridzi welcmd both and dragg them to dance floor. Musice started and all other couples joined them too.

'Maan you wanna come? Lets go for a dance.',she wants him to join her.

'you go.mera mood nahi hai.',he denied her plead completely.

Sam leave his side and took one as her partner. Soft music is playing and all couples dancing deliberately while Maan gazing Geet only. He sat in baar and start gulping drinks frequently.

Armaan leave with Ridzi as both wanna spend time together. The moment they leave DJ change the song and all couples start dancing passionately.

Beimaan, Dil bada be-imaan
Hota nahi aasaan isey hai samjhana
Beimaan, Dil bada be-imaan
Tere liye shaitan
Meri naa ek maana
Dil jeete yaa main jeetu
Dekhungi dekhega tu
Lo dil se sharat lag gaye
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi
Mujhe to teri aa aa aa aah yeah
Aaa aa aa aah yeah
Aahh aah aa aa Lat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri aa aah aa aa yeh
Aa aa aa aah yeah..
Roku jitna utni bagawat ho
Lagta hai aisa haal-e-dil ki tum zaroorat ho (x2)
Mujhko bhi tu zaroori
Tu bhi nashein main poori
O kaisi yeh talab lag gayi
Mujhe to teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh ghalat lag gayi (x2)
Mujhe to teri aa aa aa aah yeah
Aaa aa aa aah yeah aah aa Lat lag gayi (x2)
Mujhe to teri

Viraj danced with Geet and both enjoying. She smile and feeling good with the ppl around her. Viraj not crossed his limits but his dance moves boiled Maan. He drank more watching them like this, he glared both and fumed furiously.He wants her with him only.

Ek tu,ek main,ek baat hui apni
Hairaan hai kyun saara jahaan
Jo raat hui apni (x2)
Mujhse tu aake mila
Toh yeh hua hai sila
Ki sau tohmat lag gayi
Mujhe toh teri lat lag gayi, lag gayi
Zamaana kahe lat yeh galat lag gayi (x2)
Mujhe to teri aa aa aa aah yeah
Aaa aa aa aah yeah aa aa aa Lat lag gayi (x2)
Mujhe to teri...

when his concious leave him completely he came on dance floor and pushed Viraj strongly. All turned astonoished with his action. Geet too turned stunned. Maan was totally drunk and not in his concious. He clenched hard her wrist and pulled her to his hard frame. Geet wriggles for freedom,but Maan is too tuff.

'y u doing this to me ha? Uske sath b to dance kar rai thi na.then whats wrong with me?',his voice is broken and eyes turn red.

'Maan u drunk. Leave me right now.',she ordered him strongly but Maan is not in mood of listening. He forcing her to make her dance with him. Viraj came to intrupt and Maan again pushed him Viraj is able to ans him but seeing his condition he dont want to create mess. Geet weltred badly as his grip hurting her. He forced her to dance with him. Watching no other choice Geet slapped him in fit of anger. All there shocked more and turn numb. Maan's anger towred. He ragefully rush towrd Geet to ans back but before he urt her Armaan came btween both as a protective shield. He came inside again hearing strange nosies.

'enough Maan now u crossing ur limits.'Armaan gave warning to him. Maan stare him.

'stay away from Geet understood.ye mera or Geet ka personal matter hai.',he warned.

'ye party meri hai or Geet meri dost hai.so anything related to her effects me too.',Armaan snap back.

'ya ajkal to kuchh jada hi close ho gaye ho na tum dono.'he spit venemous inside him.

'stopit Maan.if i m not saying anything it doesnt mean u r right and we all are wrong. Tumne bahut pee li hai so go back to KM right now.'

'no aaj main Geet ko liye bina nahi jaunga.'he again trying to grab Geet but Armaan saved her. Which towered his anger he punched hard on Armaan's face and made his lips bleed. Armaan now also came in action and punced him. He falls on floor. Armaan thought may he get calm but it was only a start he get up and againg hit him. Argument take bad shape and turn into a dual. Ridzi shout and Viraj trying to seprate them. This game proved hard for him. Geet strt crying seeing them fight. Sam came and scold her.

'ye sab na sirf tumhari wajhse ho raha hai.y u dont leave us alone.',she blamed her for everythin.

Geet too felt guilty and scared too. Ridzi's anger rosed more. She clenched Sam's arm and turn to her.

'its not Geet's fault so dont blame her. Maan tumhara bf hai na to use kabu me rakhna tumhara kaam hai. Agr itna hi pyar karta hai tumse to wo Geet k pichhe kyu pada hai. Why he cant just leave her alone. Geet uske pichhe nahi wo iske pichhe aata hai.'Ridzi recentfully showed her true face of their relationship.

Meanwhile Armaan overpowered Maan and threw him away. He falls limply on floor. Sam have no ans to Ridzi que. She came to Maan and supports him. Some other students also came to support him in standing. Sam dragged him from there but Maan want to stay alone. He denied going with her. Armaan signled one friend and he take charge of drunken Maan. Maan went with him. Ridzi declare party's end and all students leave. Geet broked completely,bcoz she hurts with both's wounds. On one hand her best frnd,her love is wounded and hurt her on the other hand her best buddies wounded by Maan,which she doesnt like at all. Ridzi hugged Armaan and cleaned his oozimg blood.

'i m fine Ridzi dont worry,'he consoles her,seeing her teary eyes.

'i m sorry Armaan ye sab meri...',She wanna apolozise for Maan's behaviour but Armaan stops her

'pls Geet dont blame urself for anything. You are not at fault so relax. Maan ne jo b kiyanashe me kiya. Isliye mujhe usse b koi shikayat nai hai.',Armaan soothing her sore.

'lekin main use kabi maaf nai karungi. Today he cross his all limits and i wont forgive him at any cost.',Geet cleared,showing her anger on him.

Hearing her ruthless words Armaan and Ridzi get worried coz they dont want to widened the distance btween them.

'nai Geet...,'Ridzi trying to cover up Maan but she aint listen her and ran away from there.

'main dekhta hu use,tu rest kar.',Viraj ran behind her and make sure that they must dont get worried for her. Viraj catch up her on time and took her along with him to drop her home safely...

PRECAP:- MAAN'S REALIZATION ABOUT HIS LOVE TOWARDS GEET...

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Posted: 12 years ago
me first 🥳yipppeee...
now for the update
what the hell... is maan out of his mind... and Sam... badi ayi... Geet ko blame karne wali... serves her right... Ridzy ne accha diya use...
but now big red sign... Geet... all angry
Armaan aur Ridzy ne ye socha nahi hoga na... tat Geet could get tired of Maan's thoughtless actions... aur up Viraj Geet ke piche chala gaya... tho Maan might mistake them too... maan usually becomes brainless cos of anger and now he'll be practically brainlessly mad if he sees this... hopefully he doesnt as he is drunk and is going home..
Aur Armaan mere yaar... aur do dene tha Maan ko mere hisse keliye bhi... kina kuch blame kiya Geet ko first me... that too as though she was the only one to be blamed...
lovely update yaar...
precap is awesome... lovely...hey i just got one on Geet and maan here

dill de diya hai
jaan tujhe denge
iska mathlab yeh nahi
tere ilzaam bhi sahenge... (😆 i know it is bad... but thought Geet would say this to maan...)
Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update finally maan realised his love
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
due to armaan ridzi and virat doing all this the matter is more worsen
who were they to interfere in maaneet's matter
if maaneet didnt wanted anything so let them be like that why do all this
now the situation in worse and all this is done thanks to their plan to make maan restless

one thing was good that this will make maan realize his love for geet but what has this done to geet
first these frnds did all this thing and when maan couldnt tolerate he in drunken state did all thsi for this geet would never forgive him

contineu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear

Maan jealous seeing Geet dancing with Viraj


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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
teer laga nishana par
hope geet doesnt create lots of distance bw them

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

nice update
due to armaan ridzi and virat doing all this the matter is more worsen
who were they to interfere in maaneet's matter
if maaneet didnt wanted anything so let them be like that why do all this
now the situation in worse and all this is done thanks to their plan to make maan restless

one thing was good that this will make maan realize his love for geet but what has this done to geet
first these frnds did all this thing and when maan couldnt tolerate he in drunken state did all thsi for this geet would never forgive him

contineu soon


ek tu hi akkal ki devi hai jise ye dikhai nahi de raha ki wo dono apni feelings ko kam se kam sajh paye and all thanx to her friends only... Wo 3 interfere nahi karte na to kabi dono ko samjh nahi aata ki wo kya chahte hai...so dont blame them understood 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Armaan plan backfire but not to worry finally our idiot,dum maan knws hs feeling to geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow update maan super jealous great precap...

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