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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice teaser.
Hope candy will not leave and go.
Both of them r in pain.
They have to open up and clear the misunderstanding.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet wants to go back...pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
u said jab 100 page par pahochenge tab update doogi
but ab toh 102 hai
fir bhi update nahi😭😭😭
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Geet come out from the room and feel like she is lost in this big house not finding any way as she is walking round and round on same floor but one gate caught her eye there '. "geet check their may be someone will be in and help you" geet thought and entered in the room.

Geet is watching everything with wide she never saw something so elegant yet beautiful this is really a commodious farmhouse with so much expensive items everywhere.

Geet is just standing near bed when her eye caught sceneries from room wall window ... ohh yes this room has a whole glass wall for beautiful sceneries is bliss for eye... geet forget everything and just go near wall and touch is very softly where she has a unknown spark in her eye to watch sunrise from their exact in front of window... "Beautiful" a moan escaped from her lips.

Other side maan just come from his Jim which is inside his room only and a saw figure is standing in his personal room and roaming her hand on window like she is touching outside beautiful sceneries... maan instantly know who is she as he knew no one will come in his room without his permission ... he felt irritated when someone interfere in his personal space ... but here his own heart his own dream come in his room today first time in form of geet his candy only his... his soul mate... she is looking very beautiful with those new rays on her face ... she is looking like some sparking golden angel with massive hair ... night creases on her suit... without any footwear... her heels have a power to make any man bow down in front of her' slight pink and white heels are attracting maan to kissed them... maan eye lifted to her thigh'. so beautiful and in shape ... maan felt a unknown proud this is his personal private property... her waist is look like some curvaceous gold fish beautiful yet elegant... maan wants to make her wear a waist chain there and claim her waist as his... her side of blossom made maan heart flip flop many times in last 10 days... and the most beautiful part is her face innocent yet beautiful... she is indeed an angel... whom he disrespected by slapping her ... "I am such a devil who made cry to this beautiful mermaid my mermaid... my angel... I will make you smile again like before I want this "queen of heaven" Encoded by your giggling... I promise my candy I promised" maan silently promise in his heart to protect her smile forever.



Maan with thief step go near geet and stand behind her... his upper half is bare and in lower a boxer only actually he is bare practically '. he never expect anyone in his room in this early morning... but now why he felt awkward from his soul... who is standing there clad in beautiful white anrkali... maan snick his one hand in geet waist and made her jumped out of her skin in fear... she panicked and wriggled to see who is this?

"It's me candy... your maan" maan husikly spoke and took her earlobe in his mouth and suck so gently.

Geet moment s stopped in her track only and her hand automatically went on maan hand... her brain is jammed with this sudden move and her emotional mind of status also not helping her... she lane on maan chest and leave her all weight on him only... a sod escaped from her mouth... "shhh" maan spoke and his lips went on same cheek where he slapped her that day... both are in trance without knowing what they are doing right now... maan trace her cheek with the tip of his tongue like he is worshipping her now asking sorry... some tears rolled down from geet eye and she closed her eye without any protest this encouraged maan more... he drink her tears softly and kissed her very tenderly and softly on her right eye... maan palm is moved upward and rest exact below her blossoms... geet breathes ragged in anticipation... her body is responding in natural way without her knowledge and constant.

"I am sorry candy" maan asked out of blue where his lips are still lingered on her cheek.

Geet trance broke and her eye open wide after feel her position... she closed her mouth with hand and a shiver ran though her soft body which made maan also come out from a dreamy moment... but he didn't felt guilty ... she is his candy... he has right on her...but geet turned and watched him with motionless eye ... other side maan is waiting for her answer but again her words shattered him badly.

"I want to go home" geet run outside without listen to maan.

Where maan just throw his hair back in frustration ... pain is visible in his eye ... he just come to know this relation is end here today ... his first and last love is always "An incomplete tale" now... just a blissful memory now.

*******



AT 8 am in the hall of farmhouse



Maan comes in his official gate up... and with firmed expression as always his face abandoned all emotions... his pace is like a royal Prince... his aroma is very arrogant yet attractive which can make anybody to bow in front of this Greek god... his rough and hard structure is making him more royal and solid... he is a man whom every girl wish as partner but not have guts to even stand near him also not here and not on bed... his hard body can make their heart flip flop in desire and fear both this is "GREAT NO.1 BUSINESS TYCOON THE MSK"... a name of terror in business world..., a name of protection in his family... and a hot topic between all rich and hot cheeks.

Rajji jaw dropped till the ground to see her simple jiju like this rajji woke up so earlier and went with sid and priya to see around outside ... first farmhouse is big shock now maan is also not less than a shock for her little brain... she can feel his hard and powerful aroma ... That it she slightly shivers to see his expression.

"Bro breakfast" priya tried to stop him.

"Not now... karan 2 minute in the car" maan spoke and went out without even give any chance to say anything to anyone.

But karan start to run here there and collect her socks and shoe with his lappy bag or else he knew maan will leave him without any doubt... and he is seem to in very bad mood right now ... "but why?" Only one question popped in every brain.

"Why was bro in such a bad mood vo bhi in earlier morning" priya wandered as what happened suddenly.

"I am damn sure... geet did something to spoiled my bro mood" annie spoke bitterly... and rajji sniffed in her place to after listened annie voice.

"Annieee... behave yourself ... is this the way ... you talked with your bhabhi" yash yelled on annie to make her flinch on her place as never her brother talk with her like that.

"Why are you yelling on annie?... she said right... geet hurt bro badly... we are not going to forgive her" meera protest against yash.

"Bas meera!!! Do you think one time about geet... who just met us 10 day ago and bro slapped her... just keep yourself on her place than you understand" priya scold meera ... priya is a peaceful lady but knew very well how to say wrong and right.

"We don't know anything bhabhi... she just hurt my bro... who sacrifice his all life for us his childhood his teen age everything ... I will not going to forgive geet at any cost" annie spoke and went from there without eating her breakfast.

Geet somehow managed to find her way but when she was on stair she listened whole argument which is because of her... her heart flinch in pain to see again so much hatred for her... maybe she is at a fault... or else why everyone hate her... geet once again made her way upstairs in her den for some hour till maan left her again to her house.


"am I very bad Krishna jii see... they are fighting because of me... how happy they are when they come to my house and now see... that why you also snatched my mumma papa me naa... I don't deserves anyone in my life... I am very bad so bad... I will go far away from this family or else my black shadow ruin them also... maybe I am bad omen" geet thought all rubbish about herself right know her all high studies and knowledge went in drain in front of this emotional torment... when real life take test of patience and knowledge many people failed there... this is a challenge that who use his cleverness and knowledge that time.

Geet just sat there silently her eye also betrayed her now... they are also not helping her and making her light after shedding tears now.

Rajji just quietly left from there outside as she thought geet is still sleep and if she will see her like that ... she will not able to tell her lie and will hurt her more if she will say so as safe side she left to outside garden swing without any other words.

Sid also left behind her as she is their guest and he knew now she is feeling devastated and may be somewhere insulted also by annie words.

**************


Here priya come into geet room and find her sitting near wall window and staring outside ... without any realization what is happening around her... somewhere priya is worried for her mainly saw her dead emotionless face.

"Geet good morning dear'. Come eat your breakfast dear" priya spoke gently without making it obvious like she find her here so upset.

"Hume bhook nahi hai dii (I am not hungry dii)" geet was first startled but then composed herself and spoke gently.

Priya sighed and hold her elbow gently and made her stand from elbow.

"Come here geet... now sit here" priya patted on bed next to her.

Geet quietly sat there without any protest... when geet comfortably sat there...

"Now tell me what is bothering you... open your heart at least in front me... not as would-be sister in law but as friend as well wisher" priya spoke gently and hold geet hand.

"Am I so bad that's why all hating me" geet asked meekly like a kid her eye show expectation for answer.

"No sweety you are too good in fact so lovely and cute and nobody hate you ... got it" priya spoke softly yet confidently.

"Then why all take me wrong dii (geet put her head on priya lap and cuddle up like baby) that day I didn't broke the bottle intentionally dii... but maan jii slapped me here (she touched her cheek slightly with her finger)... after this also he gave me punishment left me outside in cold and tigers are also there (now she is sobbing badly but priya didnt interpret just creased her hair) but if I fell ill or tiger eat me... he didn't bother naa tell mee... he a-l-s-o h-a-t-e m-e... I k-n-o-w it" geet just stopped her throat choked badly and is not able to talk ... priya patted her back but she buried her face on priya lap and cried her heart out.

"Shant hu jao geet... ok I will tell you something... first tell me... do you think maan bro love annie any by his heart?" Priya asked and geet watched her confused not able to understand what to say?

"Yes or no" priya again nudged her.

"Yes dii he loves his family like anything and annie his princess" geet spoke in confusion... why priya talking in riddles.

"Ok you know bro slapped annie also 6 month ago... because there is a cylinder leakage in our kitchen and she not even notice smell of gas in janoon and was going to switch on the light but maan caught her at right time and slapped her... you know what he said that day... that she will burn whole house if he didn't come on right time when we have 5 bungalow in only Delhi geet... he was scared for annie... you know his faced is so pale even to think of consequences but he masked his concern behind his anger geet... he will never said you he loves you but show you in every action now tell after this incident you will say he slapped annie because he hates her... tell me" priya asked her like matter of fact.

Instead of answer priya geet started her blabber.

"Maan jii asked me sorry in morning but I again said I want to go home" geet spoke while eyeing priya with some unknown emotion.

Priya sighed and took a deeo breath.

"Geet you know whom to you are going to marry" priya asked she is unsure what man told her about khurana.

"Maan jii se" geet innocently answered priya ... priya smacked her forehead... "kya karu mai iska".

"Buddu you know... who is your maan jii" priya spoke and slightly patted her cheeks.

Geet nodded in no with a baby face.

"Geet bro is no.1 business tycoon in the world dear... do you know whole business start to shiver only with his name... who not even talk with any big personality also' here asking you forgiveness (geet eye widen)... this obvious if he has ego... he did everything with his hard work... do have any idea how much he owns (geet nodded no in confusion) ... I also don't have but paper says he is owner of 10,00,000 million dollar owner but this is only paper figures dear... even he himself don't about his wealth" priya revelation leave geet in shocked... she never thought who teased her so much in morning also he is standing in his boxer also casually... he is such a big personality... she is still not believing on all this.

"Are you sure dii" geet asked with unsurety.

"Pagal hu tum... bacha he loves you that why you not seen his second avatar which took many sleeps in whole world... geet he is angry young man with lots of arrogance plus love for his family only as he behave with his family ager his employees will see him naa they will be in hospital because of shock" priya giggles.

"Accha dii vo kya mr.india hai jo kisi se nahi milte... and big big personality mean films hero" geet also giggled after whole 4 days.

"Badmash... and yes Bollywood and hollywood also came in his parties as they are his brand ambassadors for some products but to meet him personally they have to wait months even yr" priya spoke facts about maan delhi life.

Geet jaw dropped open after listened his would-be husband made wait to heroes also... she is feeling all this as joke as this is too much for poor soul.

Priya patted her cheek in affection as she is looking so cute with round wide open eye' a cute frown on her forehead.

"geet you have to learn many things after going Delhi' like how to handle media' how to behave in parties' and how much mingle with employees' so they don't take advantage of your innocence' and yes after media come to know than you have to face at least one media session' ok so behave maturely' I know geet you have caliber to learn all this" priya tried to make her familiar to her upcoming life.

"itna sab kuch' mere se nahi hoga dii' accha why didn't he married till now' I mean yash bhai and karan bhai is already married" geet asked question from priya and tried to know about maan.

But there conversation is disturbed by meera who come in the room after searching priya in whole farmhouse' and listened geet question'. Meera is so good by heart but little angry on geet right now so she thought to give her piece of mind now and tell her about she got diamond in form of her maan bro but she throw it in her stupidity.

words: 2800

Precap: what will meera say now and yes maneet face off

I really need more comments instead of one word and likes please this ff gain 315 likes now this is only getting 235 likes not fair even after back to back update also'

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry guys net dead hu gaya tha abhi aaya but i wrote next update also😉😳



sorry sorry sorry lovesia i was in hurry as my net dancing so forget to add your name

when you are main spammer thankuuu so much


this is for you


Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first me angry on u for giving late update
but there is no mistake of urs saari mistake net ki hai
aww geet in maan room nd maan in boxer
maan made silent promise to himself that he will keep his candy happy forever
maan asked sorry from geet
but geet ne apna ka dil tod diya
by saying she want to go back
maan came in angry mood
ns seeing this annie nd meera also got angry nd start cursing geet
geet ne un sab ki baat sunli
priya came nd made geet understand maan loves her but will never show
nd geet is shocked to listen about maan's life in delhi
nd meera also listened their convo don't know woh geet se kya kahegi
i just want ki maaneet wapas saath ho jaye jaldi se
aur aapne dil ki baat ek dusre ko baata dein with open heart

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet lost in the beautiful
sceneries and maan lost in his candy😳
maan kissed geet and told her sorry.😳😃
but geet again broke his heart by saying she wants to go home
geet listened aniee's argument with priya
she things no one loves her
priya trying to make her understand about maan's life style
loved the way she explained geet about maan
what will meera say to geet
hope every thing will be fine btw maaneet
eagerly waiting for the next part



Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
a sweet start of morning but again the pain

geet is still in pain and thinks tat noone loves her

her poor mind and heart they just think tat way

and meera and annie even there dont think before saying

but its their love for maan

and priya just loved her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
maan admiring his candy he knew that he is at fault so he asked sorry but geet's innocent mind fail to recognize it
priyas loving and caring words made geet to understand better
par yeah meera kya karne wali hain
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

a sweet start of morning but again the pain

geet is still in pain and thinks tat noone loves her

her poor mind and heart they just think tat way

and meera and annie even there dont think before saying

but its their love for maan

and priya just loved her


thankuuu so much for lovely comment

🤗

yup love is blind same with meera and annie

priya is mature and face same problem as geet

so she know this is not easy to make a place between siblings 😳😛

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