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Part 13

Mr. Khurrana, This is Christopher, my boyfriend and Chris, he is the famous MSK.
Hello Mr. Khurrana..
They shaked their hands and I saw maan squeezing chris's palm tightly. But chris dint even flinch instead he side hugged me more closer with a smirk. Maan left his hand and we headed towards the restaurant. The waitress showed us the table and at the same tym she was flirting with maan. aur ye maan ko bhi sharam nahi aati to return it in same flavor.
She placed the menu card on the table and scribbled her no in some paper and gave it to maan. and maan shamelessly took it winking at her. I wonder if he loves me..!! warna he should try to get into my good books by admiring me.. haina babaji!! I pouted and looked towards chris who in turn winked.
Chris held my hand and kissed it.
U look beautiful tonite cupcake. I m so lucky to have u in my life.
I acted accordingly and blushed at his comment.
Yeah sure. U r so lucky to be have her near. but I wonder wat happened to her taste? Never mind..
I looked at him shocked. is he really picking a fight?
Love does not confide in looks Mr. Khurrana.
Very well said chris. Anyways we look cute together.
I gave a sly grin to maan who look shocked. I leaned towards him and whispered
U noe I love blonde haired guys.
Maan raked a hand thru his hair looking at chris's hair and muttered sumthg like about changing haircolor. I was trying hard to control my laughter. Seems like Aryan is rt.
Orders Pls..
Haa!! The bitch is back!! I opened the menu and saw that its written in Italian. Oh no!! now wat I m supposed to order? Chris mirrored my expression. Suddenly I heard some talking Italian.
buona sera bella.. (Good eveng beautiful)
She blushed at his comment. I wonder wat he said to make her so much blush. Yuck!!

cos ci che buono qui?(
so what is good here?)
Provate le tagliatelle al pomodoro. u lo ameranno. (Try the pasta with tomato sauce. u will love it.)
grazie tesoro..
U noe Italian?
I don't like to waste tym sirf dating. I love to study new languages..
he turned to chris and smirked at him.
U having a little trouble there, chris?
There is a mischevious sparkle in his eyes. Pata nahi wats in his mind.
Its not easy as dating a girl chris..
He spoke tauntingly. God!! he is so mean.
Since u can't help urself, i will help u. I don't want my geetipie to starve.
My geetipie!! Haye.. that sounded so romantic.
Try tagliatelle al pomodoro. Its vegetarian. And for man like u i suggest to eat Casu Murzu. Its quite daring. But i think that vl be difficult for u.
Now that hit chris's male ego.
Okay. I vl go with that.
From maan's expression I think chris is going to spent his entire nite in washroom.!!
Before food arrived maan asked about chris's whereabouts. I hope he is not thinking to marry off me to him. anyways they chatted and I stole glances of maan once in a while. I wonder y he is looking calm when chris held my hand. Something wrong!!
At this point, the waitress came with food. My food was looking quite delicious and even maan's too. But chris's food looked like some bread. He was staring it like an alien. I glanced at maan and I saw him trying to hide his laugh by coughing. I started to eat, eventually chris too. But the next second his eyes widened with horror and spat the whole lump to table. Yuck!!
What is ds?
I told u its Casu Murzu and in English its called Maggot cheese.
MAGGOT CHEESE!!
Yeah. Eat it quick, otherwise it will become toxic once the maggot dies.
we looked down at the bowl and saw worm like thing dancing around the bread. Chris ran to the washroom muttering profanities. I looked down at my food suspiciously. Suddenly shivers ran thru my spine feeling his breath on my neck.
I don't give a damn about Chris, but I do give damn about u.
He then kissed my cheek shocking me more. He then leaned back in his chair and said
Anyways he was like kabab mein haddi.. that's y I gave him the taste of the same.
My mouth widened in shock!!
But y r u doing that? And when he becum kabab mein haddi?
Since he came between us.
Us? What do u mean by that?
He was about to say something when chris came back huffing and puffing. Now even I feel he is KMH. then my stomach grumbled and I decided to concentrate my food for now.
Are u okay?
Chris threw an angry glare but then smirked.
Geet dear.. y don't we share the food. Seems like god too want me to eat from ur beautiful hands.
No need of that. We can place a new order.
How can I let slip away another jealous expression from his face. So I decided to play along.
Its ok sir. wat r girlfriends for?
I took a spoonful of whatever the dish is and fed chris. Glancing sideways I saw maan giving murderous glare and his hands gripping the table tightly. That look is really threatening, but I enjoyed it very much.
Okay. I vl eat myself now.
Chris declared eyeing maan. suddenly the lights dimmed and soft music started to play. A man came with a mike on stage.
All the couples. Pls hit the dance floor.
Without warning chris grabbed my hand and headed to dance floor. I looked back and saw maan staring wide eyed. He placed his hand on my waist and leaned closely.
Just laugh and blush at watever I say, k?
I nodded eagerly. At every twirls and turns I could see maan's face reddening with anger. Chris hugged me more close and I dint feel awkward since I could sense friendly closeness. From tym to tym I blushed and laughed. I could feel the intense stare at my back and the next second I saw chris on the floor. Oh god! he punched him!!
I ran to chris and helped him to stand. But at the sametym I was yanked and met a pair of furious eyes.
Maan.. r u crazy? What is ds?
Yeah.. I m crazy.. I m crazy about u. from the sec u entered my life I couldn't think of anyone else. Ur laugh, ur cute nose filled with anger, those plump cheeks, I don't care attitude.. all r making me mad. All the day I find excuses just to be near u. and here u r not at all bothered about me. u r so hell behind dating ds guy. I don't understand wat did u c in him!! can't u c love in my eyes for u? bolo na geet..
I felt the whole world stopped. Sumwhere my heart recognized the truth early itself. But hearing it from those beautiful M shaped lips… I feel I m in 7th heaven.
I love u dammit..
I heard the whole restaurant's gasp. Hogi na.. here one man is confessing his love in her boyfriend's presence!!


Note: I dunno the 'I' of italian. i wrote all that with the help og google translate. read a story of similar kind of date(the italian dish part). so decided to use it, but with my own modifications.




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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
today too me second... hope to get the first place in ur ff soon...

update was just awesome yaar... i always have loved seeing the possessive side of maan... and here the whole part was dedicated to his possessiveness and jealousy...

chris banda is not bad yaar... inspite of maans angry glares and hand squeezing he didnt back up from his mission... he was like "datte raho" and i liked him for that...

maan was even thinking of colouring his hair... is nt he cutiepie? the italian badla was awesome... i had thought it will be very spicy but the toxic waala cheese was cool... but chris main himmat tho hai... after all this he had the audacity to eat from geets hands infront of maan...

the confession was lovely... but u again stopped at the wrong place... now have to wait for geets reaction...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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WOW LOVED MAAN CONFESSION ... NOW GEET IT'S UR TURN
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...simply awsm...👏
haha maan punch that guy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow confession happened...Aryan's plan became successful & now it is Geet's turn to proclaim love for him😊

Loved d part
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh waoo ..so finally he confessed
lol
the whole J game was too fun ..loved the way MSK was dominating Chris ...
but he did his part too well ...rolf
result was the last dialogues ...

me doing a mini bhangra here ..

wah kya punch tha di ...

MSK confessing in his own DD wala style ...lol
i just love the way u narrate things yrr ...every thing has its own new dimension ...

pluueejjj update next soon
intezaar nahi honda yrr ..
pluueejjj

waiting v.v..v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v... eagerly

luv ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai
i m new reader
was waiting for update
whole story is so god
like the characters and this maan too much
maan flirting with waitress ...
he also knows Italian
bichara chris ... yack ...what was that .. maggot cheese
euo...
like maan's dialogue
Yeah. Eat it quick, otherwise it will become toxic once the maggot dies.

maan is burning with jealousy
he confess ...my GOD he confess
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was just too good

i mean maan can do such things cant believe poor chris yaar

and here he goes saying i love u
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Amazing update ..poor chris .lol
so finally maan said it

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