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Originally posted by: 2102

I just luv dis story but can u Make it lil bigger plz

means what dear?
Bigger updates?
Ki badi story?

Originally posted by: palindrome

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itna kharab update tha kya pallu?:-(
u didnt even said a word??

Originally posted by: trishadcute

waiting for update ...

havnt written anything yet..may be tomorrow night or on sunday!:)

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Originally posted by: Susegad

Chapter 3

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OMG OMG. This Papa Maan is overly possessive and reminds me of my Baba. Bachpan mein me and my sister used to go to our Baba's friends place for the Ganesh Chaturthi festival and stay with them for about 5 days. By the 2nd or 3rd day my Baba would start getting restless and keep on bugging my Aai.

"I am sure they must be missing us."

" How many days more?"

" Shall I go bring them home."

And my Aai would get mad at him and say, why he had sent us if he was only going to bring us back so soon. But by the 4th day Baba would end up at his friends place dragging Aai along and his friends family would be laughing at him😆

So yeah I totally understand this Maan, though fathers like that drive you crazy.😔

OMG how dare that little Sharma brat kiss his innocent son. Maan is going to end up hiring a security guard to save his bete ki izzat. Par ruko, uss ladki ne ek baar nahi do baar chance maar ahain, ab toh Maan puri security team hire karega to protect his son🤣

I loved it Shona. It was totally adorable, at the same time funny.😆

Off to read the next update.

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u know di i always luv reading ur comments..aapke bachpan ke kisse bahut interesting hai!
I always wanted to see maan as a possesive father..isliye i though to write this story!😊

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chapter 4

Aww how adorable are these Khurana men. And the Khurana girls are totally fida over them. Ek paal mein Geet aur Annie ka gussa diffse kar diya. Like father, like son. Aaru knows exactly what to say at the right moment, even if he says it innocently. I am totally fida over this whole Khurana family😳

Aur Mansi ne papa ke gaal pe, pyar se chaata mara.

Maybe it was for calling all girls stupid, tough she is too young to understand, aisi baatein ladkiyon ko paidaisihi samajh mein aati hain😆

I also love bugging kids who hate physical affection like aaru. I keep kissing my nephew's cheek and he will keep wiping it off and say,
Eww, kaku don't do that.

But that's the whole fun.😆

I totally love this story Shona. Agla update jaldi dena. Waiting eagerly.

di..u r the only person who notice every little detail...nd i luv that about u! 😊
i also luv to irritate my niece & nephews...😆
But they wont mind n will come back to me only..vo humesha meri sisters ko specially kehte hai.. Shona masi ke ghar kab chaloge..aur jab bhi wo log aate hai..unki mom's unhe mere paas shodke khud aaram se gappe marne me busy ho jati hai..😆
my 2yearold nephew.. Pehle i used to make him laugh by saying.."masi..si..si..si..si.."
aur ab wo mujhe aise bulata hai..😆

Part-5
maan was going on a business trip for 5days. Usually he doesnt go for this long as he cant stay away from his family for long time. And specially after aaru's birth..he has never went for more than a day or 2. But this time it was really important..so he couldnt avoid it!
The moment aaru got to know about his papa's trip..he said that he too will go with maan! Geet tried to make him understand that maan will be busy there..and what he will do alone?? "main papa ki help karunga na..mumma"..that was aaru's answer!
Whole day geet tried many ways to change aaru's mind..but he wasnt ready to listen..he had all the answers to her questions! Finally geet shouted on him..saying that he is not going with maan..! Instantly Aaru's eyes filled with tears... And geet regrated!
He pouted crying..and cutely said, "main papa ko bataunga..ke mumma ne mujhe data..vo bhi bahut jor se..!" after that geet tried to talk to him but aaru wasnt listening..he just sat with a grumpy face..waiting for his papa to come back from office so that he can complain about his mumma.
When maan came...aaru told him that how geet has shouted at him..fresh tears rolled down aaru's cheek as aaru complaint to maan. Maan was angery at geet for making his champ cry. geet herself was feeling bad seeing aaru's tears. She told maan the reason behind her shouting. Maan assured geet that he will handle his champ!
"toh champ ko bhi papa ke sath jana hai?"..maan asked taking aaru in his lap. Aaru nodded cutely. Maan smiled looking at his son's egarness. "toh thik hai na..iss me problem kya hai?" maan asked. "mumma ne mana kar diya!"..aaru pouted. "oh..dont worry baby. Papa haina..main mumma ko bol dunga ke mera champ mere sath jayega..ok!"..maan said ruffling aaru's hair. "sachhi..papa"..aaru jumped with excitment. "muchhi shona"..maan chukled pinching aaru's nose. "i love u..papa" aaru hugged maan tightly. "love u too baby"..maan replied lovingly.
"papa..chalo na mujhe bhi packing karni hai.." aaru dragged maan to their room. They were about to start packing when maan exclaimed suddenly. "oh..main toh bhul hi gaya." maan said as if remembering something. "kya hua papa?" aaru asked looking at his worried face. "aaru baby..u are a strong boy like papa..hai na?"..asked maan. Aaru nodded with a proud smile. "aaru.. I thought when i will go out..my champ will take care of our house & everyone. But ab toh aaru bhi mere sath chal raha hai..toh fir in sab ka khayal kaun rakhega?"..maan shared the reason of his worry.
Poor Aaru baby got really worried listening to his father. Maan saw that and signaled geet. "han, maan agar raat ko mujhe aur annie ko dar lagega toh..?"..geet made a scared face. "aur..aur main apni friend ke ghar akele kaise jaungi..?"this time annie said.
Now aaru was confuse as to what to do..he wanted to go with his papa..but how can he leave his family alone! "aur fir gudiya ka khayal kaun rakhega? Uske sath kaun khelega..wo toh akele bore ho jayegi na?" ..geet added.
And that was enough. How can our aaru leave his maani alone?
"papa..i cant come with u!"...aaru said with a sorry face. "kyun champ?"..maan knew the answer still asked. "papa, i hav to take care of maani & everyone...i cant leave them alone na..!"..answerd aaru.
"baby aap jao.. We will manage.." started geet but aaru was quick.. "no mumma..aap ko aur bua ko darr lagega na..mere bina. Aur maani bhi toh darr jayegi na..wo tho itni choti hai"..aaru was really concerned about his little sister.
All elders smiled at his care for maansi.
"toh aap nahi chaloge..papa ke sath?" maan asked. Aaru just shook his head for a no. Maan just adore his cutiepie son. How he was ready to leave his wishes for his family.
"achha..promise me ke jab papa wapas aayenge toh aap papa ke sath office chaloge..aur papa ki help karoge... I had to do all the work all by myself..aap meri help karoge na..?"...maan asked..wanting to hear a yes.
"promise!"..aaru happily agreed..hearing that his father needed his help!
Maan kissed aaru lovingly. He will miss his family and his champs cuteness in the next 5days.

Amazing update Aru such a cuttiee pie