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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
Nyc part... Maan doesn't seems to be dat bad he is jst doing his work...

the issue lies in the fact that he toes the line between doing his job and being cruel to a human. doing your job excuse could have saved harsh generals from corporal punishment. the ethical question is, when does it become OKAY?

I am not looking to answer the question, only wanting to address it :)

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

@dona Okay...it was jst an comment what i feel after reading parts... It was not a statment or question... I really didn't get u dear...

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
@dona Okay...it was jst an comment what i feel after reading parts... It was not a statment or question... I really didn't get u dear...

I have this habit of over analyzing comments & offering my opinion.

Not to hurt people, not even to argue, just how I feel.

No, you don't have to reply to my crazyness & dont get too carried away. I am not looking to start an argument I just blur the word vomit when it comes. sorry for the trouble. my other forum understands my madness & usually ignores it. care to do the same?

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Okay... I'll surelly do that...lol... I didn't get offened jst tring to understand wat u said...

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Audiwalia
Okay... I'll surelly do that...lol... I didn't get offened jst tring to understand wat u said...

cool

what I meant was that Maan goes above and beyond what is expected in his job description. He gets personal and at times is cruel to Geet when there are other ways to handle the problem.

I just said Rishabh again.

I have totally lost it.

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

same thing.

I will not be able to continue this ss.

if you wish to know the end, shoot me a msg

chao :)

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Enigma78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hi iiDona,

I love this story! It's a fresh and unique concept which I have not encountered before.

I apologise for not commenting earlier but when I saw your discontinue note I was shocked and saddened.

Please don't stop the story. I would like to know how it enfolds through its natural pace...

I hope you will reconsider. 😭

If there is truely no chance of continuation please could you message me the end.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Enigma78
Hi iiDona,

I love this story! It's a fresh and unique concept which I have not encountered before.
thank you

I apologise for not commenting earlier but when I saw your discontinue note I was shocked and saddened.

somewhat the reason why I am discontinuing. I am re-writing this SS to suit Maaneet & I cannot continue for a handful of people. somewhat the reason why I am discontinuing. I am re-writing this SS to suit Maaneet & I cannot continue for a handful of people. I normally dont care but editing for another couple is too much work. so, here is the full FF in case you want to read that this is a different title but same story :) SS: Personal property (flawed leads & unexpected twists) OR here is an index of my work My Rishbala Collection

Please don't stop the story. I would like to know how it enfolds through its natural pace...If there is truely no chance of continuation please could you message me the end. I hope you will reconsider. 😭

hope this helps

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: smallville
Awesome!!!!!!

thank you😕

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

a lot of questions about why I am not continuing

1. dull response

2. request to modify plot/writing style to suit individual needs

I don't flow that way. I am not selling a product, I do not take plot suggestions. I do accept criticism as long as it is constructive, keyword being constructive. just because you cannot make yourself to like the story does not give you the right question my abilities no matter how sugar coated.

That being said, most people have been nice & thanks for that. Here is a link to the original story with a different name, have at it if you so desire: Personal property