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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011


yaar she is offline... may be powercut.. don't wait for it...

kal padlena aramse...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011


yaar she is offline... may be powercut.. don't wait for it...

kal padlena aramse...


hmm kal hi padhna hoga 😊
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Anything for u dear but plzzz update...
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NONO..WENT TO DINNER..
WHEN CAME ONL9 GOT A CALL FROM ABROAD SO I HAVE TO SWITCH OFF MODEM..
WARNA I CANT HEAR ANYTHING NA..
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Note:many writers have written story on arranged marriage.everything has its own individual..this story is related to real incidents of my close ones..i have been with her..n some which i had in my personal experience..im writing it with some changes as to ff..if any one feels any resemblances..let me know through pm.
PART 5

The next morning..5am

Maan went for a walk around his village'the villagers have an admiration towards this man..most of them greeted him n asked him about how he is n how his life is'man talked to all politely..n after an hr returned back home..he was doing his pushups in his room...gym is not here so exercises..he never misses it..

maan looks young than his age becoz of his physical fitness..'

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ansh,payal n palak were taking turns to sit on him..vicky was looking at maan n counting how many pushups he is doing..

Vicky:341..342..343''..427..428'429..

Maan:vicky,rather than counting why don't u do some..

Vicky:bro,I can barely do100..but I cant do 500 like u..

Kids giggled at Vicky..

Ansh:chachu,aap maan chachu ki dole dekiye..if u do like him u will also get it..

Payal:haan maamu..

Palak:arei,Vicky maamu cant reach 500 like maan maamu..

savithri came inside n told all of them to get ready..they have to go to madhavs house by 10..the drive between hp n their village is 20 minutes..so she want all to get ready before 8.30..after having breakfast all will leave to HP..

savithri had her own plans..maan is in leave for only 3 days with them..one day has gone..she must finalize this alliance before maans mood gets turned..if man gives words then he wont back up..she knew it..

maan was dressing up in his casual wear ..very simple ..a jean n a pink shirt..

savithri:shezadha maan khurana..cant u dress up in sherwani..

whenever SD is in fun mood she calls him shezadha..now too she was so happy n in fun mood teasing her son..he is going to see his bride..n tease tho bantha hai..

maan is not less than her..

maan: priya mataji..ab us shezadha ka zamana tho hai nehi..ye tho sirf maan hai..aapka dusra beta..seedha sadha insaan..rajkumar tho nehi na..

sd:tum tho rajkumarki kam nehi..maan

maan:har maa ko apne bte rajkumar hai..but in real ,I am not..

dev came inside..

dev:maa,all are waiting in dining..for u both..

sd:dev,tell him to change to sherwani..or suits..

dev:maa,he is looking gud in what he is wearing..u know him..he doesn't like in show ups..let him come like this..or else who knows if he changes his mind..

sd accepted her defeat..she cant change maan..

sd:ok lets have breakfast soon n leave in gud time..panditji n broker also will be waiting for us..meera ko inform kardiya na..

dev:ji maa..she will join us there..

sd:naina kahan hai..has she kept the shagun..we must be prepared..

dev was silent..

sd:I know she wont do..

arohi came inside..maa y to worry when arohi is there..i have kept already in car..we must have food n sit in car..common maa..

sd sighed in relief'

all had their breakfast..savithri did taunt naina for being careless..but naina did not take her taunts in ears..she shrugged her shoulders n left to car..she barely cared for her motherinlaws taunts..n savithri was getting irritated by it..

madhavs house..

madhav was sitting in middle of the house..he was ordering from his place n checking the preparations..he has an intention that khuranas liked geet,the day before itself..its only their formalities..n he want even the formalities to be perfect n impress savithri devi..roshans family also arrived at morning as madhav asked them to take part..now all were busy in checking last time preparations..

geets father who went last night did not return'all were though worried,what if SD asks about geets father..one side were happy they can make preparations peacefully..tej was with them physically only..he did not like his baby sister getting married this early'he did have hope,she will top in district..n she may get scholarship for further studies..but all his dreams n geets dreams were shattered by madhav n rano's decision..he looked at his sister,who was drying her hair..today no one asked her to work..they asked her to get ready..she was there standing in a simple sari..which rano gave..

rano:bhabhi,aap geet ko thayaar kijeye..mei bakhi ka kaam samhaloonga..

roshans wife roshni :ok..

roshni went n made geet sit ..she helped her fixing her hair n wore the minimum jewels..geets eyes were blank..no excitement nor sad'tej's heart bleeded looking geet like that..

he was helpless..the one who can stop this is his father..he made excuses to buy some sweets in shop..he searched for his father..after last nights incident he hated him more..but the man who can stop this marriage is him only..he went to their rented house..only to see his father clumsily sleeping in the road near the door..his dress was not in its place..he neared him n smell came from him..he is drunk again more than everyday..the neighbourhoods laughed at mohinders position..tej took him inside to washroom n poured water on his head..his efforts went in vein..as mohinder couldn't stand even properly or gain conscious.tej made him sleep in house n came back to handa house..his face spoke more than his heart,when all were thinking to make mohinder to be there atleast his presence will be enough to shut the talks of outsiders.n before khuranas,they need mohinder to be present as her father...tej atlast said the truth..he looked at geet in pain..she knew when tej was missing ,he will do something to stop it..now his shattered face said all..now she cant escape from this ..she must stand like a doll before the grooms family n answer their questions politely..if they ask them to walk,sing,talk she must do it with smile in her face'or she will have to face the wrath of all..from morning rano,maamiji,naanaji all were giving advices to her only..how to behave before the khuranas..

broker came inside informing the arrival of khuranas..meera also joined them'

madhav n family greeted them inside n made them sit..maan was feeling butterflies n was very excited to see geet..

savithri introduced maan to them

sd:this is my second son maan..he runs a business of his own..he had done his masters..he worked in abroad.. he came back n started the business..now its going gud..

maan touched his feet..madhav blessed him..he looked at maan..there was humbleness n respect ..his face said how polite he is..his eyes was attractive..

madhav blessed him..

SD:I must have said that I have sent my sons proposal to u yesterday but halath yesi thi.i did not want to make u all tensed becoz of our arrival..waise hum tho meera aur bache ko dekne aayithi..so..i think u don't mind it..

Madhav:no no savithri ji..we don't have any issues on that..

Rano:what will u like to have..cold or hot..

Sd:don't want anything..if maan likes geet n geet likes maan.then we will have sweets..

Sd:so ,can we see geet now..

She said looking at maan,whose eyes was desperately searching the pair of hazels..meera has gone to meet geet'when all elders where chatting..

Meera:geet..

Geet:hmm di..

Meera:u look so dull..

Geet:kuvh nehi..

Meera:I know..what is in ur mind..u don't want to get married..

Geet:hmm..but..i cant stop it..wo tho aapki in laws haina..

Meera:ya...noone can stop it.even I want this marriage for u.. maan veerji achi insaan hai ..par tumei sochkar lagtha hai..other than veerji no one can stop this..n think other way..today we can make veerji tell no to u..but tomorrow koi aur aayega tumei deknekeliye..how will u reject all..

Geet was left to think..meera di is saying the truth..how many she can avoid..

Rano n roshni came there n took geet to the hall..meera followed them..

Sd:geet beta,sit near me..

Rano pushed her a little from back n she sat between SD n arohi..

Sd:you have seen us all yesterday beta..now u see..this is maan..

Maan observed her..like all girls her eyes were down casted..n he tried to see the hazels..but she never lifted it..she kept mum too..her answers were only her nod..or headshake..

Sd:maa told u have given ur exams..

Geet nodded yes..

Arohi:what is ur major..

Geet:science

Maan :uff her voice is so soft like babies voice..yesterday her song was musical..how she got so much intensity in her one word..

Arohi:I too took science..how much percentage u get..

Tej:she always tops..

Rano glared at him..

Rano:tej,they want to talk to geet..so only they are questioning like this..u don't answer in her behalf'

Tej kept quiet..

Maan looked savithri..n his eyes said something..

Savithri was reluctant ..maan atlast sighed n said openly..

maan :erm..i am straight forward..i don't like to say things randomly to get into the subject..hmm..I want to talk to geet alone

all were shocked,as its not in their culture to make a bride n groom meet alone before marriage..n the marriage is not fixed too..here he is asking to talk to her..

maan:I want to know something s straight from her..n I can decide after that only..

sd:nowadays peoples chat lot in phone too..he is asking to know her view..let them speak n decide..

geets family don't want to leave this alliance..maan was gudlooking n perfect in all ways..other khurana's also seen polite..they accepted.. but infront of them giving a little space'tej took maan to the room..though he disliked geets marriage..maans personality did impress him..his straight forward talk without any hindrance..a part of his heart asked him to accept what is going on is gud for his sister also..

maan:u r her bro..isnt it..

tej:ji..

maan:are u studying or working..

maan was trying to make him also free with him..after all he is his would be BIL..

tej:both..

maan was impressed..

maan:gud..I like it'I believe in hard work..if u need any help u can come to me any time..but give importance to ur studies more..

tej:ji..

then tej tried to speak..

tej:wo..meri behen..

maan:geet..

tej:ji..wo abhi exams di hai..wo..

man:gud..she finished her exams before marriage..

tej:wo..aur..pad..

he swallowed his words as he saw his mother coming there with geet..geet nodding her head to her mom..tej thought his mother is advicing her again..

rano: geet,behave properly

geet:hmm

rano:if he asks any question answer politely

geet:hmm

rano:agar tumei kuch patha bhi nehi ye kaho tum sab jaanthi ho..

geet:hmm..

rano:tum sunrahi ho na

geet:ji maa

rano:this is ur life beta..if he denies u,society will ask the reason..so make him agree with ur gud behavior..

geet:hmm

rano:khuranas already likes you..sirf uski haan ki intazaar hai..its now in ur hands

geet:'s st:ji maa..my fate is in his hands..i will make him say no to me..

rano: mujei tum par poora barosa hai..

geet:hmm

geet mentally made a note..sry maa,I'll break all ur trust on me today..n u wont know'

rano signaled tej to come out..n he followed his mom..half heartedly..

geet saw him through her corner of her eyes..he was sitting on the chair with his one leg over other..his one hand holding his cheek..his eyes on her every move..his personality is one who can make any girls go gaga over him..

when maan got permission to speak with her,geet decided she will make him say no..

maan too saw her ..for the first time she is so close standing opposite to him...she was fidgeting her corner of saree nervously..maan looked at it..she dropped seeing his eyes on the poor pallu..

maan:sit..

he showed his opposite chair..

she prayed inside to her babaji..pls help me..give me courage in what I am going to do..

in village mens always think womens to agree with their terms'n they dislike girls who speak to them looking into their eyes'shayad this is also a reason for her parents marriage failure..she will do all things which a man will hate to see in his wife..

geet st:sit geet..he is testing u..how u obey in his house..here girls wont sit opposite to men..so u will sit..n disappoint him.he will not get gud opinion on u geet...ur idea will work geet..

geet sat opposite to him'her back was facing her family..

geet's family was shocked to see her sit equally opposite to him'they all were looking khuranas..but they did not give much importance to it..they thought..

maan was looking at geet from toe to head..how can anyone be so beautiful in simple sari n minimum jewels n without makeup..

maan:ahem..'

geet st:men wont like girls talks..so ab mujei unse baath karni hogi..she musted her courage n said..

geet:maa said u want to talk to me..but before that I want to talk to you ..

maan lifted his brows..he was apprehensive..he liked the girls who talk their heart out..he was hesitant only on one thing as she was village girl..she may not socialize.she has to be with him in city..will she be able to adjust there..but when she sat opposite to him..his doubts vanished..when she started to talk before him,he was totally flat..he thought her to be a shy village girl,but she was totally as he expected.

whatever she did only made him like her more..

geet:wo.i don't like all this.. to make me dressed n stand before u guys..its like I am standing in market ready for sale...i told my parents ,they are not ready to listen to me..i don't want to hurt u all..but I couldn't..i am not like all girls..i don't know what maa n others have told u all about me..i know they would have only praised about me.they must have told u,I am a gud girl..very homely..,respect all like that...they would have told only my positives..but I too have negatives..

she said all in one go..she looked at maan ..both their world stopped their..his dark black eyes were piercing her eyes getting deep to her soul,like reading her in n out..for maan,he has drowned in her pool of ocean like eyes..she flickered her lashes n very hardly removed her gazels from him..she couldn't speak looking at him..that too lies..if she said he will knew she thought..

maan:I am listening..

if any other men in his place must have left by now..but why he is still here..

geet continued..i have ego,attitude..n I get angry on every small things..all fears my short temper..

geet failed to see his smirk..he has found her lie as she looked everywhere than him..

geet:maa bhi dat thi hai..a girl who has temper cant be gud with her in laws.i don't know to cook n take care of house holds...i am irresponsible to handle any things..why I am saying this to you na..you must know about me fully before taking any decision..i don't think I can be a gud wife to you ..

maan was smiling all the while n listening to her peacefully...

the way she spoke,he only thought, she is testing him..like him she want to know can he be a gud husband accepting her with her faults..when a man can test a girl,why cant a girl test a man whether he will keep her happy or not..after all he is the one, who is going to be her humrahi.till eternity.

maan:then we both will go to class how 2 be a gud husband n wife..

geet startled with his answer..she looked at him with her eyes wide opened..it only made him chuckle..

maan:jo bhi mei kehnei aayithi tumne kehdi..i am also short tempered..but I know to handle it..u said u don't know to cook..dont worry I will teach u..i know everything..indian Italian Spanish Chinese everything..hmm..i am a responsible person..that what my maa says..so,I can make u like me..

n haan the last one..i am not yet married n have no experience as husband..like u said u cant be a gud wife to me..i too think will I be a gud husband to you..so both negatives make a positive..so I think we do match..

maan:is there anything more to say..

geet is now totally speechless..this man got all answers for her..atlast she decided to say her ambition..the reason for her denial..

geet:haan..wo..erm..i've given my exams ..

man:hmm..i know..its gud na..in between ur studies I cant marry you..now,u have finished ur studies..so no problem..n if u want to work also I will be with you..

maan thought she don't want to waste her studies,being a idol wife..she want to work..so only she is saying like that..

geet:wo ..mei..

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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thank u for update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was just too too gd...


I like the waye Geet talk...uff Maan now full fida...




but nt no geet is too young now😉 only 16
Edited by Mayamaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee di especially their interaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
feel sad for geet
one side she is so young another side her family
here maan is looking understand her lie
let's see what will happen
continue soon

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