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MonaSWrites thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

woww aaj ke pei me kuch asa hi scene socha hai 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Lookkk my Edit 😛😃





can anyone give me dd gc offscreen pic for more edits 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago

Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud * Thud *
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet making Maan have a proper breakfast.
Maan doing nakhras. That part was so sweet.
Their action showed immense luv for each other

The bet is still on. Geet making a written
agreement. Loved " Maan Geet Singh
Khurana"". Maan has so much luv.

Phone convo. Geet ranting on n on.
It was her Maa. Geet emotional.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Part 34


Geet was stunned hearing Rano voice which she had never had expected. She could not able to utter a word was quivering with thudding heart.

"Maa!!'' the only word was coming out from her uneasy lips which was doing strangle to suppress her tears within eyes and heart. She did not have ever imagined that someday would need to think, talking her own mother. She felt as forgotten to give word to her mind.

"Geet Beta!' Rano had same condition which her daughter was struggling in. she had millions of questions but not came out at the moment. And in all conclusion, only few words took birth "Tu thik toh hai na!!''

Geet nodded moved her head up & down but forgot that her mother could not see through that metallic phone. She was in doubt 'Am I really fine at present!'' Then why the hell her throat was choking like had not spoken since long ages. Fairly five to seven minutes took her to come in semi-responsive state and when she was ready to talk now, call had been ended.

"Hello!! Maa!!''

"Maa"

The skipped beep sound showed that the other side had already gone. Geet could not control her unfulfilled sentiment, covered mouth to stop her whimper. She runs from there to her room and cried, just cried out loud.

##

In Hoshiyarpur,

"Why did you cut the call Brij?" Rano looked her son with confused teary eyes.

"What you were going to do Maa !! what you were going to say her? After what all had happened, after what we did with her, do you really think that she would be happy, hearing from you that after about a month you remembering that you have a daughter also and now suddenly you started worrying for her!!!!"

Rano became sad. Brij words submerge in her naive and simple mind. She thought she could not save her Geet and now have no right to interfere in her married life.

" Brij she was so happy. I could feel her happiness" Rano smiled between tears.

" You know she was bossing over Damadji" Rano giggled wiped tears from her Dupatta. " I wish I could see her with Maan Beta!" Prayer came out from her paining heart.

Brij who had smile of his win of plan, consoled her with care coated words.

"Maa you don't need to be sad. I will do something, my best to bring my sister back her home, to her mother. You just give me a letter Maa! Showing how much you missing her. I sure knowing this; she will come running to you!!!

Rano liked this idea. She so much wanted to see Geet with her husband and agreed. Wasting no time she runs to room and started writing letter with her whole & soul. Few minutes passed when Brij walked in "Maa look, Maan sent his photo. You very wanted to see no!!

Rano strangely fast pushed chair back and stood up. "Where is Brij?''

Brij showed his cell phone where Dev had sent his alone picture.

"Look Maa he is Maan!!!!!''

##

Mansion, it was evening. Nakul was helping Dadi for medicine when Dadi asked for Geet as she not had been seeing her since few hours. Though Geet never came front of her yet Dadi always knew where she was or what would be doing.

"Nakul where is Geet?''

"Dadima she was in her room when I had last seen and seems she was crying!!''


"Crying?'' She became worried for her. "But why?

"Don't know Dadima but she had a call. I heard her saying Maa on phone''

Dadi shocked "Rano's call? This sudden!! '' she thought.

Somewhere she had started liking Geet. After Nakul leave slowly she removed her blanket and with trembling legs, came out of room. With support of walls and pillars she reached Geets room and knocked. For few knocks Geet did not hear as it was so slow raps but when it became little louder she shocked seeing Dadi, stood on door.

"Dadimaa you here?!!!' she wiped her face instantly making it hide from old lady and hurried to her. "Why you came here Dadima should have called me instead!!'' she took her inside made her sit on bed with setting pillows on back.

"I am fine Beta its okay!''

Geet sat near her having strange nervousness in body. Her face was staring floor and fingers were busy twisting Dupatta corners. Dadi looked her with complete immersion, was reading her face. When silence took over for enough it was Dadi who spoke first.

"Was it Rano on phone?''

Geet looked her shocked. Seeing Dadi shinning pale eyes she understood something was going to be over!

"I'm sorry Dadima'' Geet could not stop herself to utter these words and her paused tears also, appeared again.

"Come Geet, come to me Beta!!!'' she spread her arms for Geet. With dump face Geet hugged Dadi cried,, cried like will never it would happen again. Her every fear every aloneness started sliding away with tears. Dadi's arms her shoulders which was Geet biggest achievement was making her more and more displayed. Dadi hands which was caressing her hairs were feeling like Babaji blessing to her. She could not wish more. It was enough for her seven births.

"Ro lijiye Geet! How much you want, cry! It will make your heart light. And when your heart will be light you can share your crystallized emotions more easily Beta!! It will be less difficult for you to say your heart when there will not be any knot or blocks''

"Dadima, I am sorry. I know we should have told you everything before. But trust me Dadima Maan hided it only because he did not want to give you any worry or tension. We never wanted to cheat you. I swear!!'' She pinched her throat.

It's okay Geet. I know what happened it was not yours fault, nor of Maan but it was ours fate and Babaji wish. But my only worry about you both Beta!! ''

Geet looked her with utmost anticipation. Waited for next..

"Geet do you love Maan?''

Geet blushed. "Why you asking this dadi'

"Please Beta, I very need to know this. Geet yours relation started with an unexpected beginning where not you were ready for this nor was Maan! You came with him because you had not any other option and Maan wanted to save you but this could not lead you both in a bond of forever!! It can not be beginning of a life long relation Beta and I am afraid, that what will happen if any of you will ever, realise that your relation was not an agreements of your hearts but was only a compelled condition in which you both were forced to live in with each other'

"Dadima I know what you are having fear can understand it very well. But Dadi not any relation can have any guarantee of future but still relation is made, by keeping faith on fate and God. I accept our relation was forced, unprepared we both were, but still we never left each others hand in worst situations even, how can we leave each other when will have better days in life further!! Dadima you and your blessing will make our life full of happiness and if something evil comes we have you to teach us, how to fight with it''

Seeing confidence in Geet eyes Dadi all burden been emptied from heart. She felt same certainty in her as had seen in Maan and now was sure, theses two can never be left alone in life, due to each other, from each other's love. She was happy and satisfied..

##


In night Maan returned back from office.

"Maan!! You came back?''

He been welcomed with her crispy voice which was the first amazing thing he heard and then witnessed her glowing and light face. He was surprised and shocked.

"Hm!'' he said, begun to stair up toward his room.

"Did you have you food Maan and don't dare to try saying lie to me !!'' Geet followed him.

"Where is she coming with me?'' Maan got his next shock when found her behind him , in front of his room door.

"Tell me Maan did you finish your lunch? And how was your day in office ?''


She did not know when while following Maan , she crossed door line and now was in Maan's room for the first time which gave him the last biggest blow of shock'

Precap : "W-what a-are you doing Maan'' She could speak with skipping letters seeing him coming near her, loosing his tie floowed by vest-coat

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The finally the Bet time arrived 😉


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Stars And Hearts
Love it...

Uff...again no Bet time...
karte raho Intzaar...
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

Brij is playing dirty game by telling Rano to write letter for Geet n then showing dev pic as Maan

Loved the way how Geet show trust n confidence in their relation

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

so atlast daadi ne geet ko accept krliya

m very happy

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

i hope dev's evil plan dosen't creat much fuss

cont soon

bet time a rha hai wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was so much waiting for the bet.
Still update was the best.
Cried along with dadi & Geet.
Thank god everything is k between Geet & dadi.
But this Brij. Shld beat him to death.
Edited by snehapriya - 12 years ago

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