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Posted: 12 years ago



Originally posted by: freya123

awesome update

loved mannsi's antics


thankuuu😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

awww mansi is such a cutie pie

ohhh priya tho gayi
ab maan kya karega
geet maan ka ghussa jhelegi abhi i now
nyccc


oww arunima love u

and mansi is indeed cutie pie


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part
geet is angry on maan

she must now know the truth


thankuu and she will come to know everything

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

nice update
geet is really angry on maan and disappointed too
liked mansi and her mischief
maan and mansi relation
continue soon


thankuu

yup she is right on her place


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

lovely update

even in this tense environment maansi is d only one who can make everyone smile

hope maan will clear geet's doubt soon


thankuuu

mansi is bundle of joy after all

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Posted: 12 years ago



Originally posted by: 18mypride

cutie pie sweety maansi ... love
lovely and fab update!
oops is in anger mood... geet abhi mat jaavo!


thankuuu

indeed maan angry

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
Maansi is a darling
Really waiting for the truth to come out
and Maaneet moments
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago


i answer some comment from starting only

page 50: sumaiyariya... valli30... geetsmile

page 51: singh24... --Fairy--... tamanna1391... Desigirls12... lovesia... freya123..

page 52: arunima... valli22... prerna1... impoojaverma... 18mypride


Chapter 18

There maan is doing pushups aggressively without any misery... his eye are red in anger and his body is shivering in anger... and his face telling he can burn whole world only with his one glare... before geet reached to maan... his mobile ring and his expression is changed in deadly to see caller id.

"priyaaa... Count your days from nowonwards" maan said and cut the call.

Geet is just standing behind a pillar and watching maan.. her eye reflecting anger and concern at same time and she is just so much frustrated with her own behavior.. First she is so much attracted to mansi ... and now she is even concern about maan sir also when he humiliated her yesterday.. to call her his wife in front of his own legal wife.. and here instead of go and asking him .. what the hell is this? .. She is standing here and worrying for him.. she felt her head is spinning because of headache "maybe I am thinking so much that why my head is paining" geet thought and hold her hand in pain.. after 2 minute she just feel black out...

Thud

A sudden voice caught maan attention.. he saw someone was laying near pillar in his Jim where no one come expect mansi.. who some time come there in the search of her daa.. and nobody had guts to stop her and listen her top of lungs cry.. When she need maan than only maan can pacify this little devil.. than who is here?.. maan frown and went near pillar and shocked to see geet laying there unconscious.. his breathe stopped with the sudden events and hands and legs turn numb to see geet like that.. he just rotted on the spot but outside servant moments broke his trance and he shouted

"Call the doctor nakul fast" maan shouted from Jim only and scoops geet in his arms hurriedly and come to his room.. here meera and yash also come after listened maan loud voice and shocked to see maan settling a unconscious geet in his bed and tucking her in his cover carefully... yash hurriedly went out to see nakul call the doctor or not and meera settled other side of bed near geet and maan spray some water on geet to wake her up... his eye shutting all feelings like dead person and meera starts to rubbed geet feet to warm up her cold body... there is a fear in maan eye to lost geet.. he just hugged her from side and sat there like a wounded and feared kid who will just going to lost his possession.. maan mind stopped working or else he will run to hospital instead of waiting here but for his relife geet opened her eye.

Geet is watched around herself in confusion.. But maan didn't have any knowledge.. he is behaving like a possessed person and just locking geet whole body in his arms like mad person.. meera understood her bro conditions.. already he and mansi suffer a lot now again their happiness is laying there unconscious.. geet felt something wet on her cheek and saw up where her eye mat to a pair of black shinning eye of maan... tears is coming out from his eye without any inhibition or shame and a smile tugged on his lips to see geet conscious again and trying to resister.. where is she?.. with sudden voice of yash who come with doctor broke their trance and geet pushed maan in anger little and come out from his embrace.. her eye is spitting fire but she is not understanding with whom she is angry on herself or maan sir.. how can she just lied in a strangers embrace and after coming in consciousness also she is not pusing him.. she is glaring to maan who is trying to rest her back on bed back rest but maan knowingly ignore her.. indeed she is right on her place and they need to talk but before all this her health is most important for maan.

"I will surely tell you everything geet and solve your every puzzle but not now first I have to handle your health and that so called witch priya who is hell bent to show her right on his property... which is only belongs to his loce once and his mansi" maan thinking while doctor checking geet but she is busy in glaring maan.. for her now all maan acts is selfish and unacceptable.. when he is using her as a puppet against his wife.

"Mr.khurana she is seem alright but this type of unconscious can be lead any major problem so I will suggest.. come with her to hospital and I will check up her fully but for now nothing serious.. make her rest some time and give her this medicine 2 times for 2 days.. dont worry young lady all this happened some time because of weakness" doctor gave prescription to yash and leave with him.

Meera went from there to take juice for geet now maan and geet are alone in the room.. this is perfect chance for geet and other side maan is saving himself from any discussion as first he wants to close priya chapter so they all will be safe than only he will be able to tell geet everything with a relax mind.. right now things can go even worst also.. what if geet will not believe him.. right now he doesbt want to force geet for anything and he also know if she go out from km than priya will not leave her so best option is ignore any conformation with geet till everything come on place.. only this is better for all.

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Mansi and dadi went to temple which is only in km premises as per dadi maa need and choice so dadi daily took mansi with her there.. and made her pray to god unlike maan who just lost his all believe in god 8 month ago.. today dadi went to temple for offer special prayer after so many days .. everything is seem to be come on right place now she is only wants that geet believe maan and maan doesn't have to force her in anything.. all acted very well from last 15 days now this is the time of results.. now only god can help them.


Dadi is busy in praying to god with her eye closed and mansi just sitting near dadi and watching something with shining eye.. her eye twinkled with mischievous and she clapped in excitement other side pandit jii is busy to offer dadi flower mala to krishna jii and mansi watched around one time and crawls slowly near god where ladu are kept for bhog and mansi is watching them like a treasure.. she just near plate and again watched dadi who is busy with her eye closed so she sat there and kept one ladu in her mouth and 2 more in both of her hand and crawls far away from there so she can able to eat them peacefully..but pundit jii saw this little monkey who is trying to hide behind curtain without attract anyone attention.. he smiled today he saw little krishna jii in real who is stealing ladu and trying to hide.. indeed every child is the second roop of god or krishna jii. Dadi opened her eye and saw pundit jii watching somewhere and smiling.. than dadi eye went near her and mansi is not there .. her eye turned in little panicked but pundit jii signaled him to see back.. dadi turned with confused expression and she is shocked to saw mansi who is hiding behind curtain and eating ladu and creating all mess with her dress.. dadi smiled little some time she wonder.. that how anyone is not able to scold this little devil.. her face is so cute and after mischievous its starts to glow more with her giggling.. dadi saw pundit jii like now what to do but he ensured her.. after only half ladu mansi tummy become full and she left rest on the floor and run again near dadi who scooped her in her arm and pulled her ears cutely.

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Maan's room

Maan tried to left from there without meeting eye to geet but

"I am going to my home.. did you listen me mr.khurana.. and I am not your slave who will play this wife game here and mind it" geet spoke without thinking twice.. that how her words send impact on maan.. but she is also fuming mostly for maan silence which is now unbearable for her but she is nothing to him and a free bird also now she wants to left insread of listen any crap explanation.

Maan halt to listen slave word from geet mouth and his all concern, self control, pain tunred into anger... how dare she spoke bad about herself? Maan eye turned red and when he turned he sqw geet is near door and leaving from there again.. maan caught her on right time and pinned her on the door and drowned his eye in her hazels in pure anger.. his body is shivering in hurt and pain and other side geet body also shivering in fear and anger.. Everything is seemed to be like a puzzle which is nowhere to solve and creating problems and confusion for both lost souls.

Maan smacked his lips on geet lips hard in anger and complain.. where his hands is roaming on her back.. she is perfectly fit in maan embrace like she is just belongs there only.. she is numb to feel a male lips is moving on her virgin lips.. this is so new feeling for her even more intimidating .. from that what happened on their trip that time maan was unconscious and she is also in half conscious but right now both are in their sense and maan is kissing her in broad light.. she is in air right now as maan pulled her up up to his level so she is now hanging in air and maan is holding her tightly from her waist.. her blossoms is crushing in his hard chest and she can feel even his inner hard chest and other side maan can feel her body reaction for his one lip lock only.

"You are only my geet... did you get that?" maan is talking like a wounded devil his voice is so dangerous and made geet heart sink in fear.. just like she was scared from her bro and tyai jii when they wants to sold her.

"Dare you go out from this room.. till I come back from office" maan ordered now without any misery.

"I am going home" geet again protest and tried to come out from his embrace but maan once again pulled her harshly and plastered her to his chest.. and his eye spiting fire.

"Don't make me do the things which I don't want" maan spoke in hoarsely voice and made geet shivered with his intensity.

Precap: now what will geet do?... truth is coming little by little if u read this update with concentration than u got the hint

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...
Nice part on mansi...
Continue soon...
I think geet is mansi's mom...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh mein sirf comeentng on update page🥳🤗

nice dear😊

geet faint😆

maan sacred to lose geet👏

haye meri naughty mansi ( lot of kisses to hr)

maan kiss geet😉

order hr😛
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago

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