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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi thank you for the comments….do check my index for other works and introductions of new ones……now the next part….

Recap: Maan waiting for a girl outside college… the girl wants him for her success…. Geet in hoshiyarpur and lives with a very MC family….. her dreams are filled with a man with chocolate brown eyes…. She remember her dadi's words to keep dreaming……

Ab age…..

Samira Shah, an upper middle class girl with a huge dream…. From the time she was 15 all she dreamt was of becoming a film star and a model…. Her parents were always against this. She had been scolded for spending time on herself rather than studying…. But what could she do…. Studies never mattered to her…. She would rather spend time sitting in front of the mirror rather than on the table studying…. By the time she was 16 she knew her parents would and could never afford her high life style and being a clever girl she sought out other means for fulfilling her expensive life…. The boys or her temporary providers always were boys who could and would spend for her wordlessly… being beautiful and sexy as she was, she never found herself deprived of a boyfriend. But when she crossed into college… she understood her needs much more and looked for these providers who not only satisfied her financially but also physically… all these things became too easy for her… Samira was, is and always be a self centered person. She never bothered of anyone else's feeling and knew how to get what she wants… Girls always stayed out of her way as they knew she could get b****y and that would not be good for them, and boys hovered around her to get a chance with this gorgeous female….. Now when she was 20 and would be 21 in few months, she knew all this had to end… she couldn't depend on these providers for life. Now she had to find someone who would do all this for her through out her life and who could fit in perfectly like Maan…. She smirked as she had made him fall for her without even trying….. But now she had to plan and get him to confess as time was running out…. She knew the name tag of being a fianc or even a girlfriend of MSK would get offers flooding at her door step… the plan was made and now all she needed to do was roll the dice

It was 5 in the evening when Maan had completed his meeting and was heading back to his office. He was engrossed in his file when he felt the car stop. He waited for few min and his driver informed him of a flat tire and he would change it in 10 min. Maan cursed his luck and decided to get out of the car for some fresh air. He was in the outskirts of Delhi and really liked such forest areas… he was enjoying the view when he heard a cry. He turned around and looked for the voice and was shocked to find her running out of the forest in a much bruised state…..

HELP ME! She yelled as she ran out, into the road…. She kept looking back and hence, dint see Maan standing there. He quickly ran towards her and she bumped into him crying to save her.

Samira he called out shaking her… but she was too scared to focus her attention on anyone or anything.

They'll catch me she kept on crying looking back and then all of a sudden fainted. Maan dint know what to do. He picked her up and placed her inside the car and came back to see if anyone was there. Not finding anyone he moved back into the car. To the driver's good luck he had finished fixing the spare tire and they drove back to Kurrana mansion. Maan made a call to the family doctor and asked her to arrive home immediately. He placed her head on his lap and gently caressed her head praying for her health….

Geet chall khana lagathe hai… said taiji, looking at the time….

Ji badi ma… she said and started her work…..in another 5 mins Darji and her tauji came and settled them selves for lunch….

Ab Geet kitne sal ki hogayi had Mahi..? Darji asked his son Mahendra

Ji wo pure 17 sal ki hai Darji replied Pammi for her husband

Mmm ab uske shadi ke bare me sochna chahiye na? Darji asked putting a bit of roti in his mouth…

Ji Darji par ek aur sal rukna hoga shadi ke liye…. Answered Mahendra…

Kya? Nahi nahi… kacchi mitti kahi par bhi del jathi hai par pakki hone par tooth jathi hai…. Geet ab kacchi hai we neet to get her married…. He said as his voiced rose with ever word….

Not a problem Darji, its just that 18 ab Hindustan me ladki ka correct age of marriage ho gaya hai… aur hum pancho me hoke we cannot do that… he said a bit scared of Darji's anger….

Hmmm teek hai… but we will look out for prospective grooms for her in the mean time. He said and then looked at Pammi, tu use sab kuch sikha rahi ho na? she should know all the house hold work…. I don't want anyone to complain abt her not knowing in her peher's house….

Nahi Darji…. She is brilliant in all the works of the house…. She said a bit proud of Geet. She had always been even though Raji was her daughter and Geet her devrani's but still she loved and taught Geet more that she concentrated on Raji… Geet was a gentle soul and all the women of the house loved her for being so innocent but strong… she had the patience, strength and kindness of mother earth. Every day she pray to babaji for giving her a groom who would love her and understand her for all her qualities…… her thought processes was stopped in a really rude or to say painful manner by a pinch by her husband on her arm. She then saw Darji glaring at her and realized his plate was empty…. She said sorry and served him some more food…..

Maan carried Samira or to say a faking fainted Samira to the guest room. He slowly placed her on the bed and rushed out asking the servants if the doctor had arrived. Samira seeing this got up and started doing crunches. She did it for another 10 counting and lied down wiping her sweat. After 2 min the doctor arrived and checked her BP and was a bit worried seeing her sweating in an AC room. Her BP was high and hearing Maan say she had fainted and remained so for the past half hour worried her. She said to wait as her BP is high. The patient may have a stroke too. She told Maan that they needed to take Samira to the hospital and run few more tests… hearing this Samira got a bit worried. She then slowly acted as thought she was gaining conscience and fluttered her eyelids open. Maan seemed happy and the doctor smiled at this. The doc understood what was going on and that Samira was acting…. But being a nave doc she thought this was something to do with pacifying Maan and so dint spoil anything between these love birds. But the poor doc didn't know the true colors of this girl…..

Now Maan there is nothing to be worried she said still smiling she would be fine. Take care she eats properly and also hydrate her too. If there is some other problem, just call me…..saying she left. Maan followed her to know if there was something else.

Samira let a sign of relief…. She was worried abt the tests… she was perfectly alright but for getting Maan's attention she had to do all this. She looked down at her dress and pulled out few buttons from her shirt giving a clear view of her cleavage…..she tore her skirt a bit and tucked it under the bed from the other side in such a way that it would tear up nicely showing more skin if she moved out of the bed. She knew all this would either make him want her more or would make him want to protect her. This was her plan to get him either by seduction or by innocent act…. Either way Maan Singh Kurrana was good as hers she smirked at the thought and lied down trying to get into the act……

Precap: more on Samira's plan. Dev coming….

Hope this was ok… I always felt that not much light had been shed on Samira's character in Geet as they hurried up and completed it off…… so this is a small attempt to show what a gold digger she is… hope you like it …. Do comment and like

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome dear
hate sameera a lot 😡😡😡😡
ye maan aur geet kab milenge
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVE THIS STORY
HOPE IT IS NOT TRAGIC
BUT HOW WILL THEY MEET
AND MAAN AND SAMEERA PLEASE😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm...interestin upd...
so samira plan 2 trap maan...
omg...save maan god
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Posted: 12 years ago
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samira seems to be as good as a bitch...hope its not too late for maan to realise her true colors...is dev the guy geet would get married to...looking forward for the next chatpata update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lehr

its awesome dear

hate sameera a lot 😡
ye maan aur geet kab milenge


very soon yaar... after one major twist... Maan will get geet...😭😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is a fool that is why he has a name is---man with double A...

Sameera...😡...

how will our Geet meet her dream boy...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
nice...
OMG this Samira is really so cheap and disgusting...
and if Maan falls for her then hes the most biggest fool on Earth...
if he allows her in his life then he can consider it destroyed...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sameera such a b**** yaar...hope maan dnt fall for her trick...pls cont soon..

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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Maan is a fool that is why he has a name is---man with double A...

Sameera...😡...

how will our Geet meet her dream boy...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


🤣i absolutely agree... Geet will make who ever she meets her dream boy yaar... she has no options... you'll know more soon.. wait for 2 more updates...
thank you for the comment

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